Legends speak of a powerful Demon who reigned over all the land. With his mighty sword, he crushed all opposition with despair. Only through the power of the Essences of Concord was the Demon able to be defeated.
A thousand years later, the Demon shows signs of reawakening. As the Humans, Elves, and Dwarves join together in an alliance to fight the Demon's armies, six young heroes have been chosen to recollect the Essences of Concord and seal the Demon once more.
Meanwhile, a draconequus naps and two sisters play.
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It is good and interesting even though I skimmed through it because it's 2 o clock. However the main reason for why people don't read this... Because there is no cover and description, while making people curious, isn't enough. There is also the fact of me finding it only by looking for phrase "human" here... And it being lost in archives
120323 Thanks for the comment. I thought I had a description, guess not...
Oooh, this story is nice! Keep writing!
How is this not more popular?
135250 I'll try my best to get at least one per week but finals and scholarships are coming up
For fucks sake man!
This story is good but these chapters are TOO GODDAMN SHORT!
I need another update as fast as you are comfortable doing mr author.
Please?
225407 I'd love to but next week I'll be out on a boat without internet.
Some people get excited when they ride a cruise; I just get upset that I have to miss 2 episodes and 9 days worth of fan content. Don't worry, though, next chapter will be done and up before Feb ends.
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Hooray!
News on Chapter 9
Just a heads up: the next chapter is filled with a lot of back story, much of which is summarized in the story's description. There quite a bit of detail and of course some humor involved while Ash tries to tell his story. I can understand if you'd want to skip this chapter but don't! This chapter wraps a lot at the end and leads on to the actual "revival of a heart". I expect it will be up before March.
Please please please please!!!!! don't ponify Ash, it's been done way to often.
First!
Nice.
WHOA, WHOA, WHOA!
So you mean that Ash just decided to permamently become a PONY!?
FOREVER?!
I dislike this Fic for that but I will still read it!
ALSO FIRST!
First!
Also, you don't have to rush. You're making too many typos. I really am going to miss Ash being Human, I... Despise the human-turned-pony fics unless it is reversable or pf good quality, which it is. However I will keep on reading this fic since you surely have something planned... I'm sure of it.... Maybe.... Dunno!
And I noticed you responded to my First comment ever on this fic.
I didn't mean that you have No description. I meant that "while making people curious, isn't enough" In your description ponies are mentioned just once and the long first chapter givIng no hint of having ponies doesn't help, that's why it's not that popular. If I really have Spare time I might even take a try at making new cover art for you.
Now I'm returning to my Ancient Egyptian Soul Room
339298 Do you mind pointing out some typos? I'm not saying I'm perfect or anything but I don't always see my mistakes. And thanks for your input.
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It's kinda 3 AM and I'm on Iphone so later. But don't worry, I will help in any way that can make this fic better and more popular. ' It's the fiction that everypony should know!'
339490 lol, I actually wrote a majority of this fic in bed on my Ipod. Probably not very good for my eyes
In deed = Indeed
getting use to = getting used to
Celestria = Celestia
Here ya go!
It was epIc, everytime I read the "I've fallen and can't get up" part I just burst out laughing. I see that Connor won't be a pony all the time and my prejudice to him being a pony because of that go away.
There was one typo. "hungry" not "hunger"
I wonder why it hasn't been featured yet
366656 Connor?
Sorry, I read it after reading other fic about a Human and he was named Connor, I meant Ash.
I finally start mistaking Fics because of number of em I read
Poor, Poor, poor, Ash. Live Eels and volcanic ash
. I can't even imagine what that spa treatment was.
Such high quality chapters for such small audience. It's like ze über-urlaub only we don't need to pay you.
I feel honored
ASH THE PINATA!And then he got his cutie mark.
.......I do the same thing pinkie.....*grabs snack from compartment in Twilights Chimney*
424382 Keep up the comments! They're really encouraging! It's nice to how people react to this story
Poor Ash (think my last comment said the same thing lol), and "Post-mediated Trauma"
Your story might not be the most popular but it is still good, keep it up
I actually vomited a little while writing Sweetie Belle's interpretation
Good Lord Sweetie Belle!
What is wrong with you!
First thoughts?
Legends speak of a powerful Demon (Discord) who reigned over all the land. With his mighty sword (reality bending), he crushed all opposition with despair. Only through the power of the Essences (Elements) of Concord (Harmony) was the Demon (Discord) able to be defeated.
A thousand years later, the Demon (Discord) shows signs of reawakening. As the Humans (earth ponies), Elves (pegasi), and Dwarves (unicorns) create an alliance to fight the Demon's (Discord's) armies, six young heroes (ponies) have been chosen to recollect the Essences (Elements) of Concord (Harmony) and seal the Demon (Discord) once more.
Hm... Nope! Total coincidence!
Making me think of this.
673273 That's flattering. Me gusta
but I'm flattered regardless
Not sure I see much of a connection
Disregard caution, acquire success.
I like how Twilight thinks....
Uh oh... Those last two lines... That doesn't sound good.
I love how he INSTANTLY regrets his decision.
And now that I read it, I know why it was like my previous comment!
...I should've read first...
...NAH!
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Seriously, it's epic chapter and I FINALLY GOT FIRST POST!
810115 congrats
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Try making your own letter in the comments. It's a lot harder than I thought.
He fainted from a nosebleed... it is going to be an awkward conversation explaining why that happened
Good story as always, and am interested if this means that twilight is connected to Ash due to that foray into his dreams, will she share the human/pony cycle that Ash has, or will she be stuck as a human due to this?
Waiting faithfully for the next chapter.
First Pooooooost!
Awaiting access to my Pc to Edit commeeeeeent!
Edit: I forgot to edit it for a long time and now I don't know what I wanted to do!
I am so sorry for the wait. College just started and the transition has been difficult. Not just the change from high school to college, but from San Diego to Vancouver. It's been a hard, taxing month and you guys/gals had to suffer for it and I am so sorry for that.
Thank you all for being so patient. Seeing someone comment on my story or favorite it always brings a smile to my face. Hopefully I'll able to churn out chapters more frequently after I get into the flow of things.
Feedback is always welcomed. God Bless!
Also, first!
That was beautiful but short...
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Edit
Oh shit.
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I second this.
Shit just hit the fan man (lolz)