As Earth and Equestria are drawn closer together, Gatekeepers connecting to their other-world counterpart start to appear. This is the story of Rex, bound to Chrysalis as a Gatekeeper, and his quest for survival as a changeling on Earth.
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I advise you don't canonise too many Gatekeeper stories by other people, one is enough for now as with more cannon creates more stories you have to end up controlling, approving and keeping railed to your plot arc and blah blah blah. Kinda want to see Discords gatekeeper pop up again, could be an interesting confrontation between him and Rex. It's early in the morning and I've not slept for a while so, gimme a day I'll and I might have something more constructive.
It all really depends on how the story, by itself, goes.
I've seen it many times, writers start a project, sometimes just a few thousands of words, sometimes way more, all starting with an idea and a general plot to make that idea happen, and sooner or later, they would hit a void, a point they may or may not have planned for, an ending that would not make justice for the whole story or simply, no way to end the creschendo, to create a resolution for the converging ways; 'Sins of mother' comes to mind, an invasion for revnege on equestria, extermination of the gryphon, a conspiracy and a revolution.
But i would like this story to continue, and as the universe grows, so does the variables; the treaty with Victor and Sombra, the resurgence of Crystal empire, relations with equestria, the twins and the expansion of the hive, the questrian earth hive, the old gods thing, the fourth wall Discord...
It is just a personal opinion, but, if you feel, you should take the time you need to settle the ideas.
P.s. i'm wondering if rex will have an important paper on how the crystal epire situation will develop.
An interesting Chapter. Let see what happens next.
You have added more Elements to the story. I don't know how this will play out in the overall story, despite all the things that are happening. Are all the good and bad guys going to join together to beat this new bad guy? How are they going to know what happening if every one forgets his existence? Maybe you need to add a new gatekeeper that is connected to Discord. Wood his counterpart not remember the danger and try to stop it?
4270829 i love how their going to use a vegetable (beet, a blood red tuber) on this new villain instead of beating him, wouldn't you agree?
Lyra
mabye make it so Discord has his own gatekeeping buddy.
something
something
something
the military and CIA find out about all this stuff, a gate keeper or two dies, then a massive battle breaks out have gate keepers conquer earth, replace all high commader and figuers with exact replica changelings act as if nothing happened
human race starts ass kissing, "mabye they arent so bad guy."
Wrex takes command of one nation/continent, while other gate keepers rule their own.
END.
Story two.
One nation decided to fight with another, but by doing so killing a gatekeep decimated an entire nation/race to exctintion.
Rex offers peace with this nation or they will die, nation doesnt give a shit and kills another gatekeeper, again decimating another nation/ race to extiction.
with like Three gatekeepers left, Rex, the enemy Gatekeeper, and a nuetral guy/girl (mabye a buddies with chief thundhooves). the enemy tries to persuade the native american gatekeeper into joing his/her bad side so they can crush the changeling race. Nuetral guy says no, and before he/she can kill him, Rex busts in and fight the enemy off.
something something something
Rex bones the nativeamerican gatekeeper.
End.
ship it
seal it
give it to micheal bay
make shitty movie
???
Profit
4271479
I seem to remember Discord being ineligible for a gatekeeper partner because he's already his own counterpart in the human world.
Nice new cover art.