As Earth and Equestria are drawn closer together, Gatekeepers connecting to their other-world counterpart start to appear. This is the story of Rex, bound to Chrysalis as a Gatekeeper, and his quest for survival as a changeling on Earth.
Page generated in 0.066 seconds
Total duration
1,020 users online
368,745 hits today, 2,151,698 yesterday
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic Fanfiction
Designed and coded by knighty & Xaquseg - © 2011-2024
Support us
SubStar
Chat!
Discord
Follow us
Twitter
MLP: Friendship is Magic® - © 2024 Hasbro Inc.®
Fimfiction is in no way affiliated with or endorsed by Hasbro Inc.®
I love this story, I reread the previous chapter roughly five times.
Does the fact that you referred to him as the/a Red King have anything to do with gratuitous blood shed?
Also, I have never seen so many innuendos in one place before.
4023166
No, it has nothing to do with blood (though murder is involved).
Also, I called the chapter Foreign Affairs for a reason.
LOL, you killed me here
the dude has come closer to anyone rutting Celestia, and she was his first... Rex at this moment
farm9.staticflickr.com/8317/7986687401_46b3a6f069_z.jpg
I don't like to repeat myself but wow that was a good chapter. You have dun a great job with this story and it leaves me wanting More! I just love the display that he gave at dinner. I don't know if it was the fax that he a omnivore that eats meat or the sex display that he show the Ambassadors at the dinner. It had me LOL for 2 min, I Know that it take time to write new chapter but I steel hope to see a new one soon.
Dragonfox
Love that Bruce Almighty gif, one day I too wish to be able to type that fast and no mess up.
The grin on my face right now could outshine Pinkie's ()
Keep up the kick-ass job.
So Rex sells Celestia two handguns, and gives no training to Twilight or Rarity? Oops.
4024447
As evidence to the court, I submit:
static.freepik.com/free-photo/trollface_17-403125921.jpg
4024550 Oh. That explains why. Welp, shit.
Hmm. Rex gave them no training, true, BUT he did give Twilight a computer full of knowledge. Perhaps by chance he also left an encyclopedia file on there that included an entry on the workings of a gun? Not the best, but it might help some.
Hoping nothing seriously bad happens to Twilight or any of her friends from this.
Hopefully Twilight doesn't give herself a stroke from over using the library spell also.
4024718
Here's what happened in my head:
1) Rex plans to give computer with archive. Not wanting to give up the human advantages (guns), he includes no human information.
2) Heb brought guns for self-defense, just in case.
3) He old guns to Celestia when asked.
4) He said "Only point if you want someone dead. Only pull trigger if you want someone dead. Only touch if you want someone dead. Here's the trigger/safety/bullet holes. Don't throw in fire. Don't let anyone else touch it, unless you want them dead. Have a good day!"
5) Walks away, holds out empty hand, and says "Look at all these fucks I give!"
6) Prays somepony dies so that Celestia will get scared of guns and never ask again.
4023192 I appreciate your diligents.
4033029
Let me tell you something. That has been the hardest challenge for me, making a character that is sympathetic despite all that happens to him. I'd like to think that I've done a good job, if the paise I've gotten lately is anything to go by. But that is subjective and up to you, the reader.
As it is, you stopped on chapter 9. That is him at his worst, I think. It's hard to tell from my perspective. Go for a few more chapters and see if you like it some more.
Please update this story it is awesome!
Giving guns to Equestria was a bad idea. They have the magic to reverse engineer them easily.