As Earth and Equestria are drawn closer together, Gatekeepers connecting to their other-world counterpart start to appear. This is the story of Rex, bound to Chrysalis as a Gatekeeper, and his quest for survival as a changeling on Earth.
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Another good one
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Okay I guess I could see that. You would have to wait until Selene would be able to make the portal thing but I guess it could work.
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She's already able to make the portal.
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I haven't finished this chapter yet if she does so in it. If she's done it before than my bad.You people are distracting me!
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She was the one to open the portal when Rec met Luna/Celestia/Twilight while they were on the ariship, after Rex rescued Selene.
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Oh yeah, I forgot about that...
Forget I ever said anything!
i thought she would stop them but i think they wouldav shot her and him so i think she missed on purpose but she doesnt know that he can come back
Kinda disappointed that Catherine didn't help, but I guess this is more realistic. Seems like her heart wasn't in it anyway, though she's probably Rex's enemy now. Possibly the police too, if that scene with Dave was any indication.
I didn't have any dirty thoughts at the fist swallowing part. I was too busy wondering why Rex would recruit a psycho like Slagteri, and why he isn't taking steps to control him, or at least reduce the damage he does. Seriously, he managed to sneak through a portal and murder a pony? And he's deliberately looking for loopholes! I hope Ginny at least reports that to Rex. At the very least, Slagteri is undermining his authority.
Can't say I am too pleased by this chapter. Dave really needs to die. How exactly did the Doctor and nurse know he was a murderer?
I'm expecting Dave to be #1 on the hive's "People to kill" list. And Change.lng to begin monitoring all electronic activity for his whereabouts. Hoping Dave has a particularly gruesome death. Catherine isn't likely to be able to interact with William/Rex again on peaceful terms, especially if he chooses to freeze his heart.
Exactly what ARE the consequences to a gatekeeper dying? They're formed in pairs. If one dies it cannot be good for whatever balance exists.
Also given how anger reacts to changelings and how people who know OF changelings use those feelings to "protect" themselves, now that the hive knows, they can use that to track such individuals. If ever there's someone who feels that anger around them for no apparent reason, they have reason to be suspicious of such individuals. Particularly if they arrive near where changelings frequent.
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The hospital staff is made of changelings who know of the shooting and have been informed of how to hide from a griffin.
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Was this the same hospital that Sally-Anne was taken to? If yes, shouldn't the fact that a changeling was treated there without being exposed have tipped Catherine off?
3960759 Except for the fact that the changelings worked out that by turning off their passive feeding, they could remain undetected by gryphons.
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Just because she can't detect changelings doesn't mean their allies aren't present at it. One would expect at least a few human allies for the changelings amongst the populace. And if a Changeling was treated at the hospital and it never got out, that should be the indication they might have allies or those working for them present at the hospital.
Edit: And if there are changeling allies present, chances are they'll have been tipped off about what happened at the club and to keep their eyes open for those seeking specific treatments.
Yay! No cliffhanger!
Great chapter!
Yeah.
Just not interested in this story anymore.
It is well written, and I did enjoy most of it. I don't know how to explain it beyond, "It just doesn't appeal to me anymore."
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