As Earth and Equestria are drawn closer together, Gatekeepers connecting to their other-world counterpart start to appear. This is the story of Rex, bound to Chrysalis as a Gatekeeper, and his quest for survival as a changeling on Earth.
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Attending comic cons in the best costumes ever and mess with friends?
Yea, pretty much what I would also do with Changeling powers
I would come in as Master Chief LOL if i could do what he is doing
i would soooo make myself look like a 7,5 foot tall angry marine from warhammer
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or i'd be commissar Fuklaw
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Make this chapter non-canon. I have never been in an elevator that did not have a camera inside. A building made with a convention hall in it will ALWAYS have cameras in the elevators, as well as everywhere else (not counting bathrooms and janitor closets).
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I think I will take your suggestion.
I suggested the same thing in Diamond Tiara Likes Anime.
I think I'm tarting to salivate when you release a new chapter :o
MOAR pleez
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To address your points:
In a true medical coma, you are almost entirely brain dead. You cannot dream. Changeling venom is a paralytic hallucinogen, meaning that they cannot move and are forced to have pleasurable dreams. SHE WILL WAKE UP as soon as the venom is metabolized. If she was in a coma, she would be useless to the changelings.
Further more, I've implied that becoming a changeling has messed with his head. He also has a voice in his head telling him to eat people or die, has already almost died of magical starvation, and can shape shift to avoid the normal consequences (power corrupts). Under these conditions, I think his actions are not unreasonable. (SPOILER ALERT: This will be a Villain Protagonist. He is NOT a good person.)
All those safety administrations are run by flawed humans. Shit can still happen.
I didn't feel like writing about William being grilled by the TSA. Just pretend that it happened, but they came to no viable conclusions. The TSA also has no idea who those three changelings are, and they never will. There is no way for them to find the changelings.
Now, for the dialogue part... I know it sucks. THIS IS MY FIRST STORY ! I have had absolutely no practice with writing dialogue before. It feels mechanical to me as well, and I hate it .
THIS STORY ROCK!!!!!! I DEMANAD TO SEE MORE!!!!!
Problem is, if changeling clothing is part of one's body, that means he'll have thousands of people inadvertently rubbing against his body.
Thank you just wish there was more protagonist theme stories like this.
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I marked that as a spoiler for a reason.
Very Nice chapter.
2600551 Fucking awesome. gave me some idea's for the fic i might write soon: Madman in equestria. ( i kid you not ) I just need more free time. this is my only time to myself and I really like reading. I wont use your oc's, but if the Protagonist absorbs other peoples magic/powers.....
You totally should've continued with this chapter