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wille179
I write stories so that I won't be kept awake at night with a brain full of ponies.
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This is awesome! I am favoriting this, lemme click that gold star!
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Thank you!
this is pretty damn intresting.
i'll fave this to see where it goes
INSTANT FAVORITE! MORE!!!!
More
........
pleas
The character's name is William Ross.
MY NAME IS WILLIAM ROSS.
This is weird.
I have never seen this type of story before. And it's really good.
Like what Enderstorm said
Interesting, but you make that story like mlp:fim don't exist at all, or main hero is dumb enough to don't search for any more information (google power?)
Overall pretty good concept.
You have mistake with colorisation
here
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Thanks, I'll fix that.
Here's my little word of god: None of the incarnations of MLP exist
. The AU tag applies both to Equestria AND Earth. 
I guess I should have made that clearer in the start. Oh well...
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But funny that they took changelings from folklore. Anyway need more longer chapters
MOAR
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Thank you much!
wait, wait WAIT, why is a human promoting violence in a world he hasnt visited? this is confusing! still a very interesting read. im curious to see how Will adapts to magic around other people
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Because Will is ambitious and observant
. He noticed a use of the changeling's abilities, and informed Chrysalis of this so that she could profit. Will Exists out of context of the MLP universe, so these ideas may seem extreme. 
Also, I plan to explore Chrysalis's impact on earth later.
This is actually a pretty interesting idea. Can't wait to see where you take it from here.
Also, first sentence: starched should be stretched.
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Fixed
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oh goodness you are right! if Will is the only person on earth that can use magic he would effectively be able to topple any government he wished!
Bon Bon is a changeling and Lyra knows it?
Lol?
Great story so far, keep it up
Will; Hey CHRY CHRY HOW ARE THOSE DEATH CAMPS COMIG ALONG FOR THOSE LESSER RACES IN YOUR WORLD.
CHRY; OH JUST WONDERFUL THE FORCED ABORTION CLINICS WERE FINISHED 2 WEEKS EARLY AND NOW WE ARE SELLING THE TEARS OF THE NOT TO BE MOTHERS OF THE LESSER RACES TO OUR FUTURE CHILDREN FOR HALF THE COST!!!!!
Will; WON'T THAT HURT YOUR FOOD SUPPLY IF YOU ABORT YOU FEED STOCK!
CHRY; NOPE WE GOT ENOUGH BREEDING STOCK AND BROOD STOCK THAT WILL OUT LAST THE SUN!!!! NOW THAT I'VE ANSWERED YOUR QUESTIONS HOW ARE THINGS GOING WITH YOUR NEW FOUND MAGIC?
Will; I'VE DISBANDED THE UN, CAUSED THE COLLAPSE THE GLOBAL ECONOMY, DESTROYED MOST OF THE WORLD IN NUCLEAR FIRE(WHICH SOLVED THE GLOBAL ECONOMIC PROBLEM) PROCLAIMED MYSELF KING OF THE MIDDLE CLASS MUTANT GIMPY PEOPLE, ENSLAVED GAME MAKERS TO PLEASE MY GAMING NEEDS AND IF THEY DON'T THEY WILL BE FORCED TO HAVE SEX WITH THEIR MOTHERS AND OR FATHERS WHILE ORLY PLEASURING CACTI, AND HAVING THE MOST RAUNCHY SEX WITH MY MUTANT GIMPY GIRLFRIEND WHILE SHE'S WEARING A MY TINY KITTEN OUTFIT.. OH AND I BOUGHT THE WRITERS AND CREATORS OF MY TINY KITTEN TO BRING BACK THE SERIES. AND THATS ABOUT IT.
CHRY;.......
WILL; CHRY CHRY?
CHRY; YOU FIXED THE GLOBAL ECONOMY!!!!!!
THANKS FOR ACCEPTING MY COMMAND TYPERIGHTER SLAVE ... NOW MAKE ME ANOTHER!!!
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No, I have homework to do first.
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At the rate we are going I doubt the 2020's will be any different from the 2010's. I think our society has hit a bit of a lull in progress.
Guess the episode? Okay.
Fact 1: There are three times in the show where the entire mane six are at one picnic at the same time.
Fact 2: Earlier in this story Chrysalis was drawing up invasion plans.
So this mini episode occurs during the Canterlot Wedding (part 1). Do I win?
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I doubt it.
- "this chapter is set early season 2, just after the re-statue-ification of Discord" -- All of the chapters have taken place within days of each other from what I can tell
- "Twilight’s been acting strange today. Be careful if you see her." -- Twilight is Tardy
- "Ignoring the sounds of a fight going on outside" -- Want it Need it
It's Lesson Zero.
The only problem is this :
Which is probably covered by "Changeling #345242 (A.K.A. Mirror)", which I would assume means that there's more than one "Bon Bon" around town -- which explains her voices.
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*Ding*
You win! *Pat on the back*
The episode IS "Lesson Zero."
Although, this is where the first instance where the AU tag comes into play.
William interacted with Chrysalis --> Chrysalis sent message --> Message removes Lyra and Bon Bon from scene.
As for my irrelevant head cannon: Bon Bon is a changeling OC! There never was a "real" Bon Bon. Mirror just hasn't gotten a voice she likes yet.
I I think Will underestimates his power, it'd be great to get rid of things and not get them back
nice! wait, chrysalis is developing feeling for Will!
Gentlemen. Looking forward to the next chapter.
Pretty good
Okay you said this is your first story which kinda had a good start but it needs a lot of work.
I'm sure there is someone that can help you with your story like character development, scenes and pacing of which you rushed through. Chapter six really turned me off from following the rest of this story.
I'm only trying to help ya out here. Good Luck with the rest of your story.
I personally would have gone for a French terrorist sect just to break the norm, but nonetheless, job well done !
They don't have pens on Equiis? Of all the things that could happen this is
THE! WORST! POSSIBLE! THING!!!
The Art of War?
Why not the Codecks Astartees?
Physical limitations screwing your computers? Invest in quantum processors!
Great chapter, and I must say I'm thoroughly enjoying this story, but there's one thing that's really bugging me here. it's generally a really terrible idea to fire a gun in a plane.
http://science.howstuffworks.com/innovation/science-questions/gun-on-plane.htm
Not bad for your first story. I am enjoying the interactions between Chrysalis and William, although it seems to have developed into a friendship much too quickly for my tastes.
I for one would remain rather distrustful of an alien presence that claims that they casually kidnap and imprison others for nourishment, at least for a while or until I'd get a better understanding of them. William seemed to brush off the whole deal rather casually like it was no big deal. Secondly, I think Chrysalis opened up way too quickly as well. She was barely hostile to him at all except for the beginning, and shortly after meeting, she is offering to teach him magic? Perhaps go back and state that she is very curious what the human is capable of or something? In addition, William's friends seem to also take the whole magic thing in stride a bit too well. At least to me.
Nevertheless, this story is entertaining, and I'm looking forward to seeing where you are going with this. Good luck!
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Very good point. Looking back on what I wrote, I did rush the friendship thing. I do have plans for William's friends, though
.
2535670
The gun was fired straight down the aisle. The bullet probably got lodged in the stewardess's food cart.
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I'm sorry that chapter didn't turn out so well, but I thank you for you comments anyway.
2537501 You got something good going on here with the story I'm not trying to stop ya from writing it I'll keep it in my faves for now.
WOW I was off the chain when I wrote that Text between Will and CHRY CHRY
I should have had them use the aborted fetuses for hoof ball practice DAMN!
That Changeling..... I want to eat it
In a non sexual way
Or you can think it that way
I'll let your mind work that mental image out for ya
.......I can has plushie?
LOL!!!!!! WILL YOU DIPSHIT!!!
NOW CHRY CHRY IS GOING TO TURN YOU INTO A MIDDLE CLASS MUTANT GIMP That will be in party's that you won't remember because you blackout five minutes in only to wake up handcuffed naked to a radiator with blood coming out your butt only to call CHRY CHRY to see if she can score you some low quality crack cocaine
and she will because that what true friends do
If the changeling plushies stopped glaring menacingly, I would say that they were some of the cutest plushies I have ever seen. Instead, they are some of the most bad-ass plushies ever.
I want to hug those plushies so hard until the insides pops out of the plushies..
Ooo. Fun.
For all we know, the same thing's happening to Chrysalis, and they'll both be freakish human/changeling hybrids!
Or it could just be Will. We do tend to turn humans into ponies and keep the ponies as ponies in this fandom. It's like some bizarre Equestrian version of this trope, but with ponies instead of girls.
One little thing that's bothering me about the last chapter, though; the word is hijack, not high-jack. You should probably fix that.
Moar
i.imgur.com/9EK2t70.jpg
Once I actually thought about the asexual reproducing thing, I wanted to something akin to this
i.imgur.com/wXq0LdW.gif
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I love that gif!
Oh, FYI only Chrysalis can do both sexual and asexual.
All other changelings are sexual reproduction only. They are just hermaphrodites, like some slugs and lizards IRL.
I,
..........
will be needing some of that brain bleach about now.