As Earth and Equestria are drawn closer together, Gatekeepers connecting to their other-world counterpart start to appear. This is the story of Rex, bound to Chrysalis as a Gatekeeper, and his quest for survival as a changeling on Earth.
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Bored (bashes head on wall)
Bored (bashes head on another wall)
wait an update yay
seen and read update
bored again (bashes head on first wall while waiting for another update)
I cant wait for next chapter. Yesterday i've had a dream about Rex-Cadance encouter :-P
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man I loved "the Lost Room" I wish they would continue that series I wanna know what The Trenchcoat does!, that and "Amazing Screw on Head"
anyways
my guess for the "Master Plan" is
First Chrysalis replaces Cadence and sends her to Earth where she can't do anything
Second her changelings launch "the distraction" and during the chaos Shining Armor gets "injured" so he can't maintain the Shield. once he is replaced "Cadence" and "Shining" get married and inherit the Crystal Empire which houses the giant crystal heart that radiates love and probably can feel the changlings forever.
2741946 Magnificent Bastardry at it's best.
2741818 right behind you on that one
hmmmm wouldnt this change of events for the wedding also change the outcome of the wedding with the appearance of other equally powerful beings? im excited to see how the wedding will play out
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That is a dangerous path to write down. Power absorption (take a power and make it your own) makes for a great villain, but can lead to overpowered protagonists. It neads serious limits. But if you can make it work, then that will be awesome!
On the other hand, energy drain (you grow weaker to recharge my batteries) is fair game for a superpower. In one of my ideas for a story, humans naturally feed on magic. A human in Equestria could disintegrate object with a touch by draining the magic that holds them together.
Cheat Code and White Lie, huh? Yeah, those names aren't conspicuous at all I wonder how ponies, who have no concept of video games, would interpret the phrase "cheat code". Hmmm
I have the feeling that Cadenza's imprisonment is going to be oddly comfortable. I just can't get the image of Rex playing Cadence in a game of Mario Party as Twilight gets thrown through the portal out of my head.
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I actually needed them to be a little more care free and loose lipped than you would expect in order to make future sections work.
2745649 I guess even the Lyra and Bon Bon scene would not've happened if they were really careful about their identities. But this is way more fun
I don't want to seem nit picky, but Los Vegas should be Las Vegas.
Ditto with Los Pegasus.
Besides that, can't wait for all the action to begin!
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Fixed.
how long till the next chapter?
Aaaaaaawwwwww sshhhhiiiiieeeeeeettttt!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Dis gon be good
shit about to get fun.
If you have writers block, confer with other authors that have the same general plot premiss.
As i can't wait for the next chapter