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Twilight wakes up one morning to find herself in the body of a filly she doesn't recognise. And it seems like she's not the only one...

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Comment posted by Blackbelt deleted Feb 5th, 2013

Wait...

Fluttershy took the time to put on her Tiara?

Actually, scratch that. The image of DT reacting to Angel's demands is too damn funny.

What a :twistnerd:! So now Fluttershy is in Diamond Tiara's body? I shudder to think what these fillies are doing in their bodies. Horn and wings with no idea how to use them, among other problems.

Of course, nobody ever listens to foals, even when they have something extremely important to say. Everyone just assumes they're pretending. I just hope that once everyone finds out, the mother doesn't say something like "Well, why didn't you say anything before?"

Looking forward to more!

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Fluttershy took the time to put on her Tiara?

I realised how odd that was after I wrote it. Diamond certainly doesn't sleep with it on. ^^

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I shudder to think what these fillies are doing in their bodies.

That's if Twilight is actually correct in her assumption that this is a bodyswap. :)

Fluttershy as Diamond Tiara, oh the possibilities. Assuming Silver Spoon is still herself, the nasty things she could try to say against the CMC (assuming they are them selfs and even then). "(Um...) I think you're mane is a mess...". Assuming you are taking the direction were they have to spent some amount of time in those bodies and some are trying to hide as best as possible of course.

Why doesn't this have more views? :rainbowhuh:

Great story!

oh man Applebloom, you are gonna be in SO much trouble....

So we have :
Applebloom = Applejack
Twist = Twilight Sparkle
Diamond Tiara = Fluttershy

So I guess we can predict :
Sweety Belle = Rarity (Poor Rarity, I can't imagine the state of her house afterward...)
Scootaloo = Rainbow Dash (Hmm, a non flying Rainbow Dash, her worse nightmare)
Pinkie Pie = Hmm, let be honest, I don't think there is another body that can contain her mind :pinkiehappy:

2078012 I don't know, can anypony pretend to be Pinkie Pie? I mean, she is THE Pinkie Pie after all.

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I don't know. Sweetie Belle = Rarity, and Scootaloo = Rainbow Dash is a BUT predictable, but if written well it could work. At least they are fillies that we know a lot about.

I kinda like how Twilight woke up as someone she didn't know. I wonder if Twist will know anything about Twilight, considering that she's famous as well as the town librarian. I fear the situation with Diamond Tiara. Poor Fluttershy!

Good chapter.

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Oh Celestia, people are setting expectations. XD You are correct about the CMC - that'll be a straight sister swap.

Pinkie is currently a wildcard (surprise surprise) - I have an idea for her, but haven't made my final decision yet.

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Thanks! Next chapter should have a character that actually speaks normally. Not that I'm complaining, I love accents ^^

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In my headcanon, all the fillies are familiar with Twilight (or 'Miss Sparkle', as they know her) because Cheerilee often suggests her as a point of call for researching homework and projects.

'Sweetie, slow down, you can't even walk straight'

'Sorry Darling, I was just walking along the bank getting Tanked.'

I expected that AJ :applecry: and AB :ajsleepy: where in each others, likewise with the belle sisters :unsuresweetie::raritydespair:. And random Twist:twilightoops: and Twilight :twistnerd:. It such a joy so far.

I love the story so far. I just wish you could give us more of each chapter! The transitions between ponies seem a bit quick, and all Rarity and Apple Bloom have been able to do so far is wake up and get out the door. The concept is great, but I do hope for a bit more action.

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It's a consequence of trying to wing a story with twelve characters all in different places - because most of them are going to meet each other at some point, there's only so far I can take each chapter before having to introduce another character. Once the intros are out of the way it might proceed a little more quickly. :)

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Puppy Dog Tails.

I'm not gonna say. ^^

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I didn't think so. I was just guessing. :pinkiesmile:

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I'll tell you that it's not Snips or Snails - the two are similar enough that it wouldn't make sense to replace just one of them. :)

Applejack hiding behind a bush because she's waiting for her friend's little sister to come out so she can surprise her.

Call the Police....:facehoof:

This is getting really interesting! Apparently Rainbow Dash's body comes with a built-in flight manual too, because she's just that awesome.

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Unfortunately a story like this is probably more likely than not to contain 'unfortunate implications'. Not a lot I can do about that :) I'm surprised you haven't pointed out the more obvious one: Dash and Scootaloo sleeping in the same bed. I almost scrapped that idea, but I felt it showed the relaxed relationship between Scoots and Dash quite nicely. And also I got to have a gag running across two chapters, which I like. XD

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In my headcanon (maybe I should actually be putting my headcanon in my stories instead of explaining it after ^^), Scootaloo already knows how to fly. It's her dream, so she's spent lots of time researching, practising, getting lessons from Dash, etc. She's just not physically capable yet. If she was, she'd be a great flier. That said, her flying style is somewhat unrefined; she flies the way she thinks Rainbow Dash flies, hence her powering everywhere at top speed.

This.
It's not bad.
I'll follow.

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Thanks! Oooh, a PonyEarthVerse writer. I was quite excited by that universe when I first heard about it, but I kinda lost track. I'm still meaning to read through those stories. ^^

Pity that the maid had a freak out when Diamond acted politely and respectfully towards her.

She could have finally got her hands on more badly needed lemon pledge if she kept her head on straight.

EDIT:
The fluttershy chapter. By far the best one.
That is all I have to say


...and the fluttershy chapter is amazing, by the way.

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Thanks very much! This is actually the chapter I was least sure about, so I'm glad it turned out okay. :)

Wow, Fluttershy switched with Diamond Tiara? Unexpected, especially when Silver Spoon is kinda okay with this... AMAZING! :twistnerd:

""Our wingpower defies measure," Luna replied lazily."

I bet neither of the princesses is a particularly good flyer.

Then again, I also don't believe the whole "goddess" deal to begin with^^

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That IS what I was thinking.

Now you are thinking of Diamond, in Fluttershy's body, trying to get past Consuela pony into her own house. Have fun with that.

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Actually, I was imagining this.
DT: I seem to be missing twenty bits, you wouldn't happen to know where they are would you?
Consuela: I have.
DT: WHAT?! Well give them back!
Consuela: Come get, beetch.

I'm scared to think who Pinkie might have swapped with! XD

Very well written, by the way... Is Pinkie Pie pipsqueak? Or is she an OC? Those are the only explanations that make sense.

:twilightsmile:

Comment posted by Kyle_67 deleted Apr 14th, 2013

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Pinkie is still undecided - I do have a pony in mind for her, but I'm trying to figure out how to work her into the story. I think my lack of planning is going to backfire on me very shortly. XD

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Hah! I totally didn't think of that, actually. I may have to steal that idea. ^^

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Spoony is my favourite filly, so it was good to find a big role for her. Originally I had considered making Silver Spoon one of the fillyswaps - in fact, she was going to be Fluttershy's swap, but then I realised that Fluttershy as Diamond Tiara is much funnier. ^^

Also, Diamond would not be as understanding or nice as Spoon was.

Are you continuing this? I've noticed that updates have been taking longer, and I was worried that you'd lost interest in the story. I do hope to read more soon, though. You're a great writer! :twilightsmile:

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Thanks! Yes, I am continuing; I've just been incredibly busy at work for the last month. I'm also trying to work out where to take the story next - I haven't had time to come up with any ideas. I have started the next chapter, but I can't say at this time when it will be finished.

This is soooo good!!!! need more!!! :flutterrage:

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