Starlight Glimmer has a secret; a side of herself that she prefers to keep private from most other ponies.
Unfortunately for her, Twilight doesn't quite understand what "privacy" means.
This is an Adult Baby fic.
This story was inspired by Twily's Alone Time by Zubric. Thanks to abdlpony for prereading!
So warm and fuzzy inside
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Awwwww, thanks. ^_^
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No prob. This story was amazing!
Our first adult foal fic featuring Starlight Glimmer, how adorable.
I just love seeing Twilight acting motherly. It's adorable!
7141816 Oh really? Yay!
7142023 I know, right?
Nice little fic, Hawthorn.
Aaaaww
D'awww.....now I really wanna see Motherly-Twi and AF-Starlight fics..
Interesting.
This was an adorable and insightful story. It certainly captures the feelings one goes through with how they'd likely react if anyone ever were to find out about their AB / Dl side.
What makes your story particularly good is how the focus was on "Understanding' and "Acceptance". Sometimes these sort of tales can become too much about being an AB / DL. This one was great in creating a positive exchange between twilight and Starlight. It also left a lot of room for a reader to think on how Starlight became an Adult Foal and whether-or-not Shining Armor may be one, too.
Great use of emotion. This is certainly a read worth recommending to anyone who is struggling with their feelings about being an AB / DL.
I kinda wanna see a continuation of this! it was very interesting.
This was adorable! Totally needs a continuation O.O
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This comment made my day. Thank you! Your observations are pretty much spot on, I can't think of anything to add to them!
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I don't have any immediate plans for a sequel, but I'm certainly thinking about it, as I'd love to take this further. ^_^
7148140 Thanks!
Not bad. I would have liked to see this continue as a multi-chapter story, though. Starlight asking for Twilight to become her mommy would have been a good way to keep it going.
7153723 I am pondering something like that for a sequel, don't worry. :) My track record with multi-chapter stories is, alas, not great, which is why I wouldn't commit to one. But I definitely want to do more if I can.
Got around to reading it and I like it. My whole diaper thing only exists online so any kind reacting is out into a story would simple be guess work
Nice job :). Pinkie as an adult foal . Easy to see that
7155496 Thanks! Although Starlight specifically says that Pinkie isn't an adult foal ;)
awesome and cute little story Love it ;3 any hoof have a awesome derpy day/night or whatever timeline it is.
7157720 Thanks, I'm glad you enjoyed
This. I want a story about this. Great story btw.
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Don't tempt me! XD Thanks, glad you liked ^_^
is this foreshadowing?
7171067 Mmmaaaaaaaaaybeeeeeeee
7171244 please let it be
I wasn't expecting Starlight to be the subject of a story like this, but now that she is, I want a sequel where Twilight is her mommy, and maybe Spoke knows where to get mare- sized diapers because he's into this sort of thing too. That would be cute, reading about him and Satrlight playing together while Twilight babies them. They certainly seem to get along well.
I don't have the heart to tell him what the fic is about.
I really like it! You should definitely write a sequel.
7427845 Thank you! Still pondering on it :)
I would love to see a sequel
7486041 I think we all would.
7561443 Maybe Twilight becoming her Mommy, or something involving Sunburst
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Daww, thanks guys. ^^ But I learned my lesson before, I'm not promising any sequels. That doesn't mean there won't be any, but I can't promise any.
7561618 It's fine, you should never feel pressured into doing something just because it's what your readers want. Besides, that's a sign that you've done something right, always leave your audience wanting more.
Where did spike get the adult diapers from?
7680542 He knows a guy.
This sort of story does well in showing how those who are adult foals are not bad, misguided, or any other derogatory term they can be given. They are merely individuals who are trying to get back of a little of what they feel they lost or need back to help cope with life.
I could see Starlight being an adult foal. Her childhood was crushed once Sunburst went away. Childhood traumas tend to create the spark for an adult foal. The mind feels robbed of a very important time in your life and drives you to get it back to find peace.
Well obviously.
Oh. Wait. You mean the kink. Right.
spikes a bro like that. or he's her big...
I really enjoyed reading this story. It was very heartwarming, and did it's job well as a relatively short ABDL fic. It also hit me with emotion when Starlight broke down. Her situation felt relatable. Nice work.
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Awww, thanks very much! I'm glad you liked
Really cool story. First of all, the language and grammer were good, and that's very important. The excerpts from Spike's book were also a nice touch. Lots of conversation in this story, as I expected. But it was well-written and realistic, short but detailed. Also this:
now that I think about it, maybe I should have just made everypony there wear diapers. I'm sure I could have convinced them to."
made me laugh very loud.
An interesting choice to leave the question whether Shining Armor is an AF as well a bit of a mystery. And the ending was just so sweet. I particularly enjoyed the last sentence. Last sentences are always so vital to the reading experience, aren't they?
I thank you for writing this and wish you luck in your future writing endeavours.
Elkia
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Thanks! I'm always pleasantly surprised by the warm reception this fic received.