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Twilight's day had ended up being very stressfull and by the time she got home she felt very drained. In her unsettled state, Her thoughts drift to her home in Canterlot and she ends up picking the perfect way to help unwind before bed.
Innocent litte age play ensues.
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This is a cute little story. Though there were a few occasions where it shifted between past and present tense.
Although it needs a good proofreading for spelling/grammar, this is a nice, quick one-shot. Quirky, yes, but endearing nonetheless.
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A nice little one-shot, but it has a lot of trouble with tenses.
6136826 Ooops, I should fix that then.
Some mistakes here and there, but otherwise a very good story. :)
Cute, and very well done, aside from previous grammar mistakes
6136826 Should be fixed now
I'll skip the grammar issues and move on to the important stuff. Excellent capture of ageplay and innocence here. Short, sweet, and a great way to introduce someone to things like this.
6483288 Having a fried of mine edit so should be improved in a day or two
............This.....was.....simply.....heartwarming.
I do the EXACT same thing, and this sentence completely captured my heart. It almost was as if I was the character or vice versa. Your writing style is smooth, unrushed, and complete. I have DEFINITELY put this on favorites.
This is a very beautiful story of the feeling of innocence that often gets lost as life transitions from no responsibilities with loads of love and attention to tons of responsibilities and seeking love and attention.
This tale was very well done in how it was more about the sensation of feeling "Safe", "Loved", and "Loved". All the items Twilight used were for amplifying the feeling of less stressful times gone by instead of for fetish reasons. Very well done.
This was sooooo good!
The narrative was really fluent to read. I could totally envision stressed-out ponies (and persons) doing something like this. I can't believe how SFW you kept this story. This is how every pony/diaper story should be, in my opinion, just innocent and cute. You're an example to everyone writing these kinds of stories. I particularly liked the paragraphs where she put it on, and her thoughts and memories occasionally entering the narrative. It was so detailed and interesting but not boring at all. Thanks so much for writing this. I wish you lots of luck and success in your FIMFiction writing career. 
Love,
Elkia