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Zubric


Love to write whatever comes to mind and enjoy Brony stuff.

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Twilight has a special gift/curse that she really wishes she didn't have. What is this ability? Well, she can hear buildings talk, and boy are they ever chatty. Obviously, this drives the Princess a little nutty.


Now with a reading, huzza!

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Comments ( 23 )

I feel like the random tag should be put on here, cus Its kinda random.

:derpytongue2: didn't see that coming either!

What is this abily,

It’s usually not a good sign when the summary for the story has more than one error in the same sentence

Needs some TLC for grammar and readability, but a funny concept.

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Yeah someone helping me look it over a little. Thanks for the comment

“It got up, and walked away.”

Could've been worse--it could've danced away.

:rainbowlaugh:

Comment posted by 55west deleted Jun 30th, 2018
Comment posted by 55west deleted Jun 30th, 2018

The story was fairly discordant; while you do some good things with the central gag, the story could have used some more focus. And the castle flet a little flat as a character.

Great premise!

Well, this would explain why Starlight keeps getting lost in the castle. That ending was unexpected. I'm surprised Discord wouldn't believe that Twilight could talk to buildings. Have a like.:twilightsmile:

Only in Ponyville would someone need to hire somepony who is both a board certified architect and a psychologist...

Seriously sequel!!!!!

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Like what Canterlot castle being a nag ?

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That or some of the other buildings she's talked to.

Weird premise but hilarious!

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Or maybe wrangling friendship castle back to its place.

Her refrigerator is running.

And... so is the rest of the castle.

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