Rainbow begrudgingly agrees to help a desperate Rarity by modeling a dress. Unfortunately for her, she gets stuck wearing it. Doubly unfortunate, the dress has some... unique design choices.
This is going to be embarrassing.
Warning: Contains diapers, diaper usage, ABDL themes, and humiliation.
This was pretty funny
Welp, that just happened...
I do hope you left this incomplete on purpose so that we can see more.
7729811 It is, and you shall
I'm a little confused how Dash managed to get herself diapered by putting on the dress.
Is there like a cloth diaper sewn into the dress or not?
7730007 The dress has a removable flap that holds a diaper while attempting (though, in this designs case, poorly) to conceal it. When Dash got into the dress, there was already a diaper in place because Rarity wanted to check and see how the dress did had keeping a diaper hidden. Does that clear it up?
What is ABDL?
7730063 Adult baby/diaper lover
Well I love the look of this so far, can't wait for more!
7730031, yes but wouldn't it make more sense to wear the diaper first and then put the dress over it?
7730167 Technically yes, but as Rarity said she knew Dash wouldn't agree to wear the dress if she knew it involved wearing diapers as well.
Quite enjoyable so far! Looking forward to more
great to see see this story I hope to see more of it gain soon.
Silly rainbow could have just lockedxthe door. Well I get her actions are gooong to fetxher farther from the shop. I just hope their not too much focus on the used diaper when that happens.
Hmm, the style is somewhat improved, most notably the opening with the list of defining characteristics for Dash and Rarity, but the plot thus far feels like it's the weakest justification for padded shenanigans you've made (of your stories I've read so far).
Much can be laid on Rainbow being panicked, but the lack of her reflecting on her ill-thought impulses means that I can only assume you made these choices for plot convenience, not character-driven reasons. The obvious thing she could have done is just say something like "You can't come in, Sweetiebelle, Rarity is working on a top secret dress and she wants me to guard it!" Something to up-play her bravado and 'cool' side. Alternatively, she just presses herself against the door to keep Sweetie from opening it, or even hide amongst what I would assume to be a myriad of materials and supplies.
I'm going to keep my eyes on the story, and look forward to seeing where you take this, I'm just hoping you give a little more care to maintaining suspension of disbelief.
I was on mobile when I started this, and so couldn't read the spoiler text. When I realized it was one of those fics, the only thing that surprised me was that she actually didn't chug the cider first...
I guess the universe just wanted Rainbow Dash to end up as a foal today.
I am loving this! Keep it up!
Why? Why did you have to stop on a cliffhanger?!
I like the progression and her having those denial of her liking it. Almsot thought she wiggle the carrage so mucit whee away from pinkie ans she end up at the bottom of the hill all exposed. Beside dashie needed her wittlw nap time
" guys stop it , yoir embasing me"
Keep going!!
A huge chunk of the chapter is bolded. It starts at this line:
7732018 Not the worse thing the universe has done to someone, just as Sokka
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7734364 To quote Sokka "The universe just LOVES proving me wrong, doesn't it?" And to quote Toph's reply "You make it too easy."
7734470 Yeah. Ah Sokka, even when you´re in youŕ....I wanna say thirties, you still somehow incorporate your boomerang during a council meeting
OH MY GOD THIS IS 20% CUTER!
This story is awesome!!!!!
I seriously expected this kind aftermath:
RD: Hey Rarity?
Rarity: Yes-?
RD: *throws the wet, dripping dress into her face* DON'T EVER ASK ME TO MODEL FOR YOUR STUPID, STUPID DRESS AGAIN! *zooms off*
This really should get a sequel where Rarity goes through similar humiliation.
Sooooooo cute! I want an adult baby Dashie!
A sequel would be awesome!
8277481 Rarity would take nicely to a humilation style padded pony fic. I'm actually surprised there aren't any out there featuring her.
Not bad
i wanna see an aftermath pic
Great ending. It was rather funny. Probably one of my favorite fics involving diapers.
2019 Edit: Ok, this was VERY FUNNY. Every time I read it I'm on the floor.
I feel awful. Poor RD.
A sweet ending to what felt like a lot of embarrassment and humiliation that Rainbow had to go through. I like that at the end, though, she seems to be at a level of being contempt with it all though even with being embarrassed in front of others! That she might even have a liking for all this and it isn't as bad as she thought.
My little post-story head cannon leads me to believe that this situation has led to Pinkie and Rainbow getting together to continue this caring after Rainbow took a liking to it.
Plus you are her muse.
Her adorable, small, looks good in anything, muse.
And just like that, Rainbow Dash was sunk. In more ways than one.
I really love dubious consent stories.
Pfft!
Aww! You're going to look so cute Dashie!
I see what you did there Rare Bear.
There you go Dash. Get nice and comfortable.
Yes! So cute!
Aww! I happen to like dorks!
It could be horribly embarrassing for your client, if Rainbow Dash ever spotted them in a similar dress, and put two and two together.
So you liked it, did you Dashie?
Would or wouldn't have? It's a important distinction.
Hmm! Yesss! Such a pretty little Rainbow!
If only some tall gentlemanly human ambled by with a blanket with room for Rainbow.
Oh well, I guess Dashie will have to suffer.
Aww is someone grumpy?
That's it sweetie, enjoy your diaper time!
Incidentally this is what "Her Words" was missing. Inner monologues and robust scenery descriptions.
A onesie and a dress all in one! Cute!
Blushing Rainbow Dash is best Rainbow Dash.
Well that's good, because you're going to need that protection before long.
Well there's a string of sentences that could be construed as embarrassing.
Yep, they're all yours sweetie. Yours to wear and model. Isn't that fun?!
I hate you sooo much.
Oh yes you are.
Too late!
Huzzah! Second best pony has arrived!
Pinkie Pie really is a good friend for not laughing.
We all have our vices. Incidentally, now we know how to get Rainbow Dash to clear up the weather faster.
Ahh the dreaded upskirt. But at least your secret is safe with Pinkie!
Incidentally she probably could have just asked Pinkie Pie to remove her diaper. Given what happens next though, it's probably a good thing she was padded.
Yesss!
Yes!
That's it Pinkie! You boop that nose!
She is so sweet! And that lisp is so adorable!
Someone really likes their paci, don't they Rainbow?
Well foals are instinctive little things. You have that in common.
She's so cute!!!
Aww!
I'm glad Rainbow is warming up to her situation.
Seriously though, I'm glad Dash finally feels safe and comfortable.
And on that note...Go to sleep. Go to sleep. Go to sleep, little Dashie. Go to sleep, go to sleep. Go to sleep little foal...
That's what you think.