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Being forced to hold a sleep-over against her will, Lyra finds herself in a predicament between burnt muffins and just being generally unhappy with everything. Bon Bon, however, all she wants is her friend to open up some more, even though some revelations may not be to her liking.
Contains diapers. So yeah, this might actually not be to everybody's liking. HUZZAH!
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Okay! I can start reading the story, now that I've gotten that out of the way.
This is Lyra's internal dialogue. :3
Anyway, I couldn't find many faults. Some things were a bit off-sounding, but I'm not too sure if that's because of my own writing style, or if the way you worded it is actually wrong.
Long story short : I liked this story, and I like your style. Keep writing.
I'm sad this doesn't have more upvotes. It was well written, cute, and I found your characterizations of those two to be very interesting and unique. I see few stories with Lyra and Bon Bon depicted with the kinds of personalities you went for, so it was refreshing. They're one of my favorite couples so I'm a teensy bit biased, but still!
I really liked the way you portrayed Lyra and BonBon.
3903054 I was going to say the same thing.it should read "unicorn"
this was super adorable! snappy writing but could use some editing. I kind of wish there were a more unique reason for diaper fics than just incontinence, but the writing makes up for that here imo. also, I'm no diaper fic connoisseur yet.
3903054 Didn't you know? Earth ponies are the new unicorns.
Yeah, no, thanks for pointing that out. The faults come from me sadly making this another of my 'I don't even care' One-shots. I kinda tend to do those.
3904708 Thanks. It's still pretty new, so the coming days'll show how well it's going to do.
3904834 I prefer their relationship like this, honestly. With Lyra only functioning as a musician and Bon Bon riding so high on her ego that she doesn't see her own flaws, but somehow still sells herself as endearing. Also, dem eyes.
3906066 Thankies. Sadly, there are only so many reasons one can come up with to put a pony into diapers. At least, everything can get played out in countless different ways, and playing with a common idea is usually a good way to write. At least that's my take on the matter.
Meekoli thinks this is cute
A nice short sweet story. I like
cute ^^
How did I not notice this fic when it was first published? I really don't have an excuse!
Well, at least now, I've read it, and enjoyed it.
3906066 There's plently of reasons, but the most common ones seem to be incontinence, closet AB/DL, bed wetting, regression, excessive partying, and necessity for job or hobby.
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"Oy! Bow ties are cool!"
Again your ability to create such internal emotion is astounding! I most definitely felt Lyra's worry along with her long held love for Bon Bon. I really feel you played the whole situation well as the two really start to get to know each other beyond just friends. :)
That's messed up.