• Member Since 12th Apr, 2013
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Aliester


A strawberry-colored thestral who's completely obsessed with the great and powerful Trixie. Less a fan and more of a raving fanatic, I sometimes churn out some really cute stories. Sometimes...

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Okay, before you read on any further, hold up! You need to know something!

This story contains age-play, diaper-play, and some pants-wetting. It was never really finished, so the "ending" is pretty freaking weak!

Now then... You can carry on if you'd like. I just wanted to make positively sure that no one read this expecting another Twixie fic.
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The Great & Powerful Trixie really has had it rough recently, hasn't she? Sure, there are a lot ponies out there who'd say that she deserved to have her name drug through the mud, like how it essentially was...

But did she really do anything all that wrong?

What is right, and what is wrong... You'll find that most ponies couldn't honestly care less. Trixie believed herself to be much the same, since what did it matter if she had to publicly humiliate a few hecklers along her way to super stardom? What did it matter if she had never made a single, true friend in her entire life?

Enter: Twilight Sparkle; the element of magic, and Princess Celestia's personal protegé.

With her help maybe Trixie will finally find the strength to break through the lie that her life had become. And who knows? Maybe friendship is just the beginning for the two magically gifted mares...

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Comments ( 21 )

I liked this, nice read. :twilightsmile:

not bad, for your first story it felt a little rushed, but over all a pretty ice read.

keep going with writing

Now I wonder what this story could possibly be about... X3 Will check it out soon buddy!

Okay I suppose, could've been better but it's decent. :applejackunsure:

I just might make a fix inspired by this:"Trixie the Filly".

I think that it would be better without the last two paragraphs...
Anyway, a nice unconventional story. It would be pleasant to see reactions of Twilight's friends next.

:facehoof: Forgot to leave my second comment after I read this. Still love the story buddy!

im editing the comment , where's the previous comment text in this box?....

ok that was wired , it's working now , but just had me overwrite my original post...

let us know when someone finishes this story....

also , no cover image?....

this was nice, any chance we could get a sequel? :twilightblush:

3303084 I have to get my Fluttershy down, first. She's going to have a big role in the next story. :yay:

So you are going to leave the soiled nappy on Trixie!?

:facehoof:

What a dropoff.

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I'm in the process of re-writing the story. Don't you worry, she will be changed out of the diaper by the end of the re-write.

3963473 Good. I have read another story where the author did not change the soiled nappy. It was quite wierd.

Well, the ending was a little annoying, I kinda would've like a jump to maybe a few days later in ponyville with twi looking after her filly, but I guess I'll have to live with this ending.

This story went a little differently than I thought it would, but it was just, if not more touching. I didn't know trixie would need a mother so badly and I'm glad twilight wanted to be her mother:pinkiesad2:



This was a lovely story.... Would it be alright it I wrote my own similar to this? Or maybe a small sequel?

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You can, though I'm re-writing this story as I thought Trixie was too OoC (Feel free to write your story anyway, because I haven't written anything in months and won't be finishing the re-write anytime soon.)

I would love to see somebody write a sequel to this. Great work sir! :pinkiehappy:

Meant to follow right after favouriting. Don't know why I didn't, but following now:twilightsheepish:

This was a good story I look forward to the sequel you allowed to be written by a fellow author. I think if you wanted to you can write a whole series of Twilight and the her adult foal Trixie. I really enjoyed this story:twilightsmile:

Hello, I am the ABDL of Chinese cartoon fan MLP. I like this story very much. Please allow me to translate it into Chinese and reprint it to the following website
https://tieba.baidu.com/f?kw=%E6%88%91%E7%9A%84%E5%B0%8F%E9%A9%AC%E9%A9%B9%E5%B0%BF%E5%B8%83%E6%98%AF%E9%AD%94%E6%B3%95&ie=utf-8

cute and adorable little story, I'll say

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