This story is a sequel to Little Miss Great & Powerful (AB/DL)
WARNING, WARNING! THIS FIC CONTAINS DIAPER USAGE AND CUTENESS!
You have been warned!
A few days after finding Trixie in Trottingham, Twilight's new "foal" is learning how to fit in in Ponyville. while Spike is hesitant, he accepts that Trixie is now living with them and is an adult foal.
The rest of Ponyville, however, especially the rest of the mane six? Well, they're another story.
written with permission from Aliester
Featured late 22/8/2014
Original artwork the coverart was based off can be found HERE by surzb. Took my ages to find the link, though
Chapters (1)
The Artist is Surzb He only posts to Furaffinity now.
i am a bit confused about the thing that it is a story about an adult baby, and that the one mare is Trixie but i somehow want to read it.
I really don´t want to say the false thing, but arent that a bit to much story´s? are you sure that you can keep up with all the storys you have open at the moment? or do you have a writers block in your other storys right now? I really just want to know, because with every new story that comes out i don´t think i be able to see a new chapter from The Princess and the Foals or other storys.
New storys are good, but that way i have to read the whole story again to be sure i still now what happend there last time.
Heh, this was a pretty cute first chapter, though one detail has me particularly curious.
So, does this mean that "Magic Duel" still happened in this universe? I ask because I ignored that episode when making my story, and am unable to think of another wherein Trixie was particularly mean to Spike. (Her and Spike didn't really interact with each other in "Boast Busters", if I recall correctly.)
Also...
*patted
*here (If you meant 'her' then never mind.)
*warmth
Did you mean to say "Just like Trixie's" here?
Anyway, typos aside, I'm enjoying the story thus far! Keep up the good work.
This fic reeks like an old diaper.
Just beautiful! I am going to upvote this and favorite just cause of that description and picture.
Off to a decent start. I just hope the rest of the mane six don't treat Trixie too harshly when they learn of her little secret.
I'm worried that I may know exactly what you edited.
It's just a guess, thankfully, but it's still pretty bad that my mind went there.
When i saw the cover pic at first i thought it was a dildo than i realized it was baby powder.
4888898 well, it's sort of misdirected dislike from spike. it's mainly just because of the ursa minor and spike keeps forgetting that trixie didn't ask snips and snails to bring it into town. that's where his anger's meant to be aimed, but trixie keeps getting it because spike forgets to make that distinction
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Eh, okay. I figured it was something like that, it just got me wondering since the general gist I got from Twilight's response was "Really? I think you know why he's mad at you, Trixie."
If Twilight explained Spike's feelings on the matter, then it wouldn't have seemed like she was condoning Spike's misdirected anger at Trixie.
4890504 i'm a little scared to ask where it was your mind went. judging from your saying it was bad, i'm amusing it's better i don't know
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Let's just leave it at that.
Yeah, I'm likewise afraid.
This was indeed a good start but I think you have other plans besides her new life in ponyville I bet you are going to have a battle for Twilight's affection between Spike and Trixie as well after all that is how all siblings act. Then the final acception of Spike taking the role as Big brother to Trixie and will do anything to help her. How close am I?
I eagerly await your next chapter
Well I didn't really know what to expect from this, still I promised I would read it and now I have. Let's start with the cons because that list is shorter. I was a little weirded out with an adult pony wearing a diaper(and using it and being changed by anther adult... which I suppose is better than an adult getting a diaper change from a child...), but now that I have seen the reasoning behind her lifestyle choice I understand it a lot better. This isn't a fetish fic at all and that was what I was concerned about at first. This is a psychological fic dealing with a pony who had her development into being an adult arrested by the loss of her mother. Which is the start of the pros. Two for the positive camp is the wonderful dream Trixie had about her birth mother's approval of Twilight, it was wonderfully heartfelt. Three, Spike is kind of a prick. Normally I would be upset by this but this is exactly how a child would feel when they receive a new sibling, acting out because they are afraid they will lose their parents' attention. Okay I think that is enough for now,
Now that this part is done, I will be watching this story, because it fascinates me as an amateur brain detective. So a tentatic gold star and I'll see you at the next chapter.
So do you plan on continuing this story, or is it dead?
story ain't dead but from what i have read Autum Breeze have been in a hospital for some time now we have to be patient my friend
6067915 who told you i was in hospital? if you mean scootaloo, you're on the wrong fic
5966138 no, i plan to continue, it's just taking a while to get around to it is all
6068008 ops sorry i just saw a blog and that i think about it was another one i meant my apologizes i hope you can forgive me
One chapter still, eh? I'm not picking. Smooze knows I'm a lazy, good-for-nothing bastard. X3
In all honesty, I'm kinda glad ya didn't get too far, as I've come up with a name for Trixie's original mommy. Recently I fell in love with the head-canon that Trixie's mother is a gypsy, and gave her the name "Esmeralda Lala Lulamoon".
This works fairly well, as my interpretation of Trixie is fairly embarrassed of her middle-name. If you ever wanted to write a story where her mother was alive, then they could have that in common. Also, my Trixie's middle-name is "Winky", in-case you're curious (And wanted to make another story in this universe).
Are you ever going to continue this? I'd love to read what happens next.
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Updates?
Updates
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Please Celestia I need updates.
still wait for next part!
Why hasn't it been updated? May you run out of ideas
Hi, your "Twilight's Little Trixie" left me wanting more. But for some reason you haven't updated. I'm going to follow up your fan story. But I won't start right away because of the final exam. I will indicate the website of the original and the relationship between the sequel and the original. Of course I write in Chinese because I am Chinese. I hope you agree.
Daw yayyyy
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Hng cute!
What a cute start to the story! It is a pity that the story will never be finished...