Upon the mirrors peer through the looking glass to a mirror of worlds. A magical door way opens and new endless possibilites open up. What are the meaning of the mirrors and why are they appearing two by two through both worlds of humans and ponies? What is the connection and is there a darker history that time forgotten?
21 makes 22...
Note: I noted fair number saying there is grammar errors in my story but the thing is I can't see these errors you speak of, If anyone would be willing to help me, I would be grateful for it and to point out the grammar issues. So I can learn and see how I made these mistakes instead of those saying... "There too many grammar errors it hurting my eyes and brain" that doesn't help me explain the problems.
So I ask kindly to point these out instead of complaining about it.
Note 2: If anyone willing to help me lead a hand, I be welcomed to it for proof reading this story and make it sound better for those to read. If anyone willing to lead a helping hand I be most grateful.
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(Joke) Alt. Title: Broke The Looking Glass: Electuroo Boogaloo
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lol ^^
Can't wait
I dunno, I think the guy is a bit too calm. For example, ,“Mum this might sound crazy but I think I am trapped in some sort of magically force field… it sealed around all the windows and doors…” would probably be something like "oh my God, what is this. I don't even...."
And he seems to figure some stuff out a bit to easily. It's a bit unrealistic to assume at a mirror had to do with a solar eclipse.
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I can see what you mean and might need to re-word it a little to make it a bit better but as for figuring things out it all down to the imagination. You see, I always think of so many different things that could well next to impossible and chain them up together in my imagination as if they real.
Also when it comes to magic and old magic at that events could work out of the confines of normality as impossible could become possible linking a mirror to a eclipse.
Still I will look back at the sealed up scene when I get time and see what i can do to make it better.
Please Pm me when the story has been revised and edited, and I might just decide to read the rest (and upvote).
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That the thing I can't find anyone to do this... I tried and tried and tried... sadly I given up on finding anyone to edit and look through it, I know my grammar sucks hard and sadly I know this. When you have at least three plus you asked for help and nothing comes back you seriously just get fed up and give up on asking for anyone to help ya.
If your willing to help me out I gladly accept it and mention ya that you took a look through my chapters from 12 onwards, since the only ones that been edited have been chapters 1 to 11 by mix of people...
3227248 Hmm, I might be able to help every now and then....
What chapter would you like me to start on? (If I can, I'll PM you the edits.)
3235411 It from Chapter 12 onwards, the rest before that been checked over by people already. It would be great to have ya check it over for me.
Apologies, i am going to stop reading here...The grammar and the like make this a bit hard to read, i sincerely recommend getting someone to review your chapters again and edit them, it will likely make it more enjoyable for other people to read it aswell. It certainly would help, that's for sure, atleast in my eyes.
Good luck on the story.
3336236 well I ask and get no joy, maybe you like to help me out. I would welcome it
In the description:
"If anyone willing to help me i be grateful for it" should be,
"If anyone would be willing to help me, I would be grateful for it" or
"If anyone willing were to help me, I'd be grateful for it"
Haven't read any chapters yet, I may let ya know if there are any other errors in there.
3415631 I even did it on the summary asking for help
That how bad I am at over looking something as simple as that lol.
This is a sequel to something, right?
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I am going to do a sequel to this story. Thanks for the idea. There somethings I didn't like what I typed up for after this chapter. So since I left it on such a cliff hanger I am going to leave it here and work on the sequel to it.
Didn't this story used to be, like, much, much longer?
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It continues over to Black Mirror
Sentence fragments. You have a lot of sentences that are missing a verb and sound really wrong when you even think about reading them aloud. If you can somehow manage to scrounge up a proofreader, do it. When you've gone back through and edited the chapter (as well as newer chapters probably), send me a message and I'll continue reading this...probably. The idea is there but the polish is not and getting pulled out of the story due to the text having errors is jarring enough to turn me off from the story.
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I am sorry for the grammar errors and such but I truthfully can't see it unless I look really really hard and been pointed out by some. The disability I have effects the way I can see some words, so when I am typing I am very much unaware that I made these mistakes till I most likely looked through them a few more times after a while and someone pointing it out.
I never been able to find anyone to help me proof read this first story of mine so I gave up after getting to joy in anyone able to help that I just put the chapters up. I know many get annoyed with the grammar and such but I can't do much on my end. I will try to fix when I get the time but it may take a while. Real life and such.
sorry again.
As much as I'd like to read it, and point out mistakes... There's just too many.
Oh god this is terrible!!
I’m guessing America or North Korea.
Ha I knew it!!!
What was Spike like sleeping in the living room?
Reminds me of the movie stardust.
That brings a tear to my eye.
I’m gonna rewrite these chapters one day for you.
Reminds me of the neverweres from Doctor Who.