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  • 9w, 1d
    Yet Another Bloody Update

    Greetings loyal bros of the pony adoring variety. I PV2 Houser a.k.a Cowboy Appledash in Fort Hood, bring you yet another conglomerate of letters to inform you of events! So, that being said. I am safe and secure here in the Republic of Texas on Fort Hood with the 3rd Armor Cavalry Regiment where we specialize in using M1126 Stryker vehicles as a means of transport to kick names and take ass. Now, I'm sure many of you are still concerned with the status of PonyFall and Feathers of Steel, well allow your concerns be faded a tad as I am doing my best to draw up the inspiration and motivation required to do my job on those. However, I have had recent news that may very well put me mostly out of commission for several months if it does indeed come to pass. You see, as an Infantryman, it is my job to go and fight on America's behalf, and rumor has it that i will be deploying to Afghanistan by the middle of November. So until then, I will keep trying to update my stories, but don't expect it to happen. In any case, you have my apologies there. Now, without further ado, I'm off to pack my lip with more Copenhagen and drown myself in beer. Au revoir!

    -Cowboy Appledash

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  • 30w, 2d
    News Update

    Hey guys. just giving you a quick update. I'm still alive but I sustained an injury that will keep me here in Fort Benning longer, which means no updates from me for a while. For that I apologize. In any case, if you have and comments, questions or concerns feel free to ask. -Cowboy Appledash

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  • 44w, 5d
    Status Update Time!

    Hey guys. I know what you're thinking "Holy fuck, Cowboy's still alive?" Yes, surprising I know, since my last blog post was like 6 months ago and the last time I updated anything was about the same time and for that I apologize. As you know, PonyFall is the big thing right now, so my other stories are placed on the backburner... As usual (I place all blame on Silverness for that. Just kidding). In any case, I just updated 'Feathers and Steel' so there's that. However, I've been thinking, 'Business is Good', while it's probably a good idea will likely be discontinued as my main man with that, the owner of Ascended Wings has pretty much disappeared off the face of the planet (and left the fandom), so I don't really know if I can continue with it.

    Now with that stuff out of the way, here's another thing that's gonna make you guys want to beat me, I am now enlisted in the US Army. Fucking right? One minute I'm gonna be a swimming rat, then I'm gonna be a fucking Marine, now I'm a bloody Army boy. But hey, at least it's something and since I'm not signed on as a fuckin' POG, everything is hokey fuckin' pokey. If you're wondering, I'm now an Infantry recruit, shipping out to Fort Benning in 7 days. When that happens, I can guarantee you guys zero activity till May 2nd when I graduate from basic. For that, I apologize, but hey I have to pursue my dreams right? In any case, I just figured I'd give ya'll a rundown, and I actually have a request for ya'll. Can somebody do me some solid flavors and hook me up with cool pictures of my OC or Spitfire decked out in various Army uniforms (only if they're Infantry/Airborne/SF/Ranger based)? If you can't, it's alright, but if you can, I'll love you forever. With that, I'll leave you heathens to your devices. Also, have a song from one of the bands I've recently grown fond of.

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  • 68w, 4d
    Yay History!

    Ok guys, here's a thingy for you guys. I'm sure ya'll have been accused of being a racist at some point because you're White or whatever right? Well guess what? Turns out that WE can do the same thing. Here's why...

    Every race of people has been enslaved by another at some point. Whether that be the Jews in ancient Egypt or the German Tribes during the Roman Expansion over Europe. Even the Chinese were known to enslave their own, same with the Mongol Empire. A long ass fuckin' time ago from the years 1500 ad to 1800 ad (that's 300 years), White Christians were enslaved by African Muslims along the Barbary Coast of Africa. Approximately 1.25 million White people were enslaved over that course of time. About 150 White Americans have been enslaved by Algerian people (Algeria is in Africa) from 1785 to 1793. You want the big fuckin' kicker though? The total populace of African slaves in the United States was somewhere around 600,000 throughout a time period of about 245 years. The numbers of White slaves in Africa more than doubles that of African Slaves in America and for a slightly longer period of time. When I say America at that time, I mean Central, North and everything in between. The largest number of black slaves were in fact in the Portuguese America at 38.5%. About 9.7% of all African Slaves actually ended up in the English American Colonies (Todays USA).

    So, in short, next time people wish to be uneducated fuckwads and pull the race card, tell them to look at their own people's history. What their ancestors did to us was just as bad as what our ancestors did to them. Stick that one in your pipe and smoke it.

    5 comments · 77 views
  • 70w, 18h
    Blog Post.

    So, earlier tonight I managed to get two complete strangers to dance with each other, and now they've made plans to start dating. The guy came up and thanked me. Now I don't know what it is, but for some reason, I can get people together pretty easily. And yet when it comes to finding a pretty girl for myself... Shit. That's like asking a fat guy to give up his cupcake for a celery stalk.

    Just felt like sharing that little bit with you guys. Note: In my book, the girl was an easy 9/10 and the guy about a 5/10.

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After a rather disappointing battle with Discord, Applejack ends up on Earth and is found by a funny-looking brony named Garrett. Trials and tribulations may occur, but the question is: can she get back to her friends and find a way back home?

First Published
14th Nov 2012
Last Modified
12th Jul 2013
#1 · 105w, 4d ago · 1 · 1 · Prologue ·

FIRST

finally somebody is doing AJ in the ponyfall

lets see some moar awesomeness

#2 · 105w, 4d ago · · · Prologue ·

This story.

I like it so far.

ANOTHER CHAPTER!:pinkiehappy:

#3 · 105w, 4d ago · · · Prologue ·

Good to see Applejack has a story now.

#4 · 105w, 4d ago · · · Prologue ·

Oh good, this has started. Can't wait to see more, keep up the good work!! :twilightsmile:

#5 · 105w, 3d ago · · · Prologue ·

Maybe I'll be with Luna in Ponyfall story called Black and White.

Young 11-year old boy name Ned Colorless he wears black and white outfit with glasses and hat.

He was born in the wild since his unknown family died and but at 5 he was adopt from a woman who is very nice and sweet to him but she later died when his age 8 because of her ex-boyfriend killed her and he soon hated bad people,he hates bad words and knew the world is corrupt since he lives in New York City.

He befriend Luna and she still has her powers unlike the other story.

He hated Discord,his main enemy and gains his power from him during the incident when he was a top of Empire state building

And he's about find the Mane 6 and Celestia in order for them escape this corrupted world.

He change his name to N Colorless since he got hit by the shockwave.

#6 · 105w, 3d ago · · · Prologue ·

>>1619055 So wait, are you wanting to write for the Luna portion, or are you wanting to write something roughly based on your interest in the collab?

>>1615573 If you've read Draequines, the language may resemble his quite a bit, so hopefully that doesn't steer you away. Thanks though, I just gotta wait till Slorg edits Chapter 1 and I'll have that up ASAP.

>>1615527 She did before, but they/we had to get a new writer (me) for her bit. I liked where he was going with it, he just didn't go through with it for some reason.

>>1614834 Gnat, you seem to like everything I write lol

>>1614688 If you like motorcycles, rednecks and adult humor, I'm sure you'll like what I come up with.

#7 · 105w, 3d ago · · · Prologue ·

>>1619188 Aw hell no, son. Draequine's story is the funniest one in my opinion. It's had me in tears of laughter several times. If you're trying to mimic that, good things be a comin'. :ajsmug: I eagerly await progress! :twilightsmile:

#8 · 105w, 3d ago · · · Prologue ·

>>1619254 Not really mimic, more or less on par with course language and whatnot.

#9 · 105w, 3d ago · · · Prologue ·

>>1619273

After writing my first story of Pokemon vol. 1

#10 · 105w, 3d ago · · · Prologue ·

>>1619324 Still not sure which one you were gonna try and do though, cause if you wanna write for PonyFall, you need to be approved.

#11 · 105w, 3d ago · · · Prologue ·

Not yet my friend still paranoid from 'the incident' and don't mention that

Right now I need to focus before my TF2 game downloads

#12 · 105w, 3d ago · · · Prologue ·

>>1619357 Ah I see. What is this 'incident' you speak of?

#13 · 105w, 3d ago · · · Prologue ·

Can't tell you it traumatizing and don't talk about or else I'm gonna panic attack.

Right now I need a humanized Luna image only look like anime like picture and don't comment unless you have the image of her cause I got to avoid being perverted and I disgust myself

#14 · 105w, 3d ago · · · Prologue ·

>>1619379 Posting PonyFall stories without being approved by me results in an automatic denial by the FiMFiction admins. Repeat offenders get banned.

Those aren't my rules, those are the guidelines given to us by the FiMFiction staff. That said, we're full on writers.

Similar stories are fine (at the admins' discretion).

#15 · 105w, 3d ago · · · Prologue ·

>>1619693

Maybe Luna was written yet so she could be someone else

I was think I decide to join in the story so....

#16 · 105w, 3d ago · · · Prologue ·

>>1619738 Luna's being taken care of. Thanks for the interest though. If you're patient, we will be needing writers for the background ponies in approximately 4 - 6 months' time, depending on how quickly we wrap the story up.

#17 · 105w, 3d ago · · · Prologue ·

>>1619188

Well, it's better than my writing.

#18 · 105w, 3d ago · · · Prologue ·

A fine start, good sir. It's looking like you'll be making Ponyfall mighty proud with this here fic, and it's only the prologue.

I had a go at the talking apples too, but they more vengeful. I like what you've done instead though.

#19 · 105w, 3d ago · · · Prologue ·

>>1619871 One thing I made sure to do was go over the other prologues to get my facts straight, that way there isn't any plotholes y'know? But thanks a lot man, I mean it. As we speak, Slorg an Shanenator are helping me figure out what to do and how to fix my writing, nothing on the prologue though, it seems good, more along the lines of chapter 1.

#20 · 105w, 3d ago · · · Prologue ·

>>1619880 good to hear. Mayhaps I shall get a part next time... hopefully with Berry Punch. I can PM you what I did for my first chapter of my AJ Ponyfall if that'll help in some way? Then again, I think you've already written that part of yours too, and it was obviously better. Now I just feel silly. Looking forward to it!

#21 · 105w, 3d ago · · · Prologue ·

Well, I could still take a gander at yours and try to offer any advice I may have.

#22 · 105w, 3d ago · · · Prologue ·

>>1619743

Darn...

What am I suppose to do writing of Ponyfall oh well maybe I can choose writing Crossoverflow it's a story where all main characters from Games,TV series and Movies join to defeat an army of Changelings,Team Rocket,Team Galactic,Team Plasma and Gray Mann's robot

Crossover:

Pokemon

My Little Pony

Team Fortress 2

Counter-Strike

Call of Duty

Danny Phantom

Spongebob

Dan Vs.

Phoenix Wright

Red vs. Blue

Ben 10

And more...

#23 · 105w, 3d ago · · · Prologue ·

>>1619894 Like the Ultimate Showdown of Ultimate Destiny... with ponies?

#24 · 105w, 3d ago · · · Prologue ·

My main character is Nate from Pokemon Black 2 and White 2 my story takes place from Pokemon adventures which it's not done yet base on Humans Assemble.

He looks like this

He plans to visit back to Ponyville and soon heard that Queen Chrysalis escaped from her dungeon since 1 year ago from staying Ponyville with the other Trainers also Team Galactic plans to take over the other dimension and cooperate with the evil syndicates while Gray Mann uses the Teleporter from the Engineer and attempt to take over Equestria and now Nate needs some help from the world unlike Pokemon and Equestria and send out the main characters throughout the storyline.

#27 · 105w, 3d ago · · · Prologue ·

Wasn't the first chapter out earlier this morning?

#28 · 105w, 3d ago · · · Prologue ·

>>1620129 On accident yeah.

#29 · 105w, 3d ago · · · Prologue ·

>>1620638

Oh, I woke up and saw that in the notifications. I fell asleep before I could read it.

#30 · 105w, 3d ago · · · Prologue ·

>>1620642 Sorry mate lol, I needed to make sure it went through the editing process first.

#31 · 105w, 3d ago · · · Prologue ·

Ha ha I am tracking before I even read it, I will read after the next chapter comes out.:pinkiehappy:

#32 · 105w, 3d ago · · · Prologue ·

>>1620792 Okalie dokalie lol I take it you like the collaboration?

#33 · 105w, 3d ago · · · Prologue ·

>>1620819 Considering PoE and HiE are the best types of stories ever written, yes ;) I was overjoyed when I found out about this collab... I love them all!

#34 · 105w, 3d ago · · · Prologue ·

GOOD TALE. BEST CHICKS.

Nice to see this started :) Tracking! :twilightsmile:

(Li'l thing... Pinkie was found before Rarity. She was the one that managed to get the licorice and ice cream off of Rarity)

#35 · 105w, 3d ago · · · Prologue ·

>>1620986 Yeah, I think I was basing mine off of what Silverness had... Or Drae, not quite sure :/

>>1620831 Cool :P well I hope I don't disappoint you.

#36 · 105w, 3d ago · · · Prologue ·

>>1621087

Well... when I wrote it that Pinkie was found before Rarity nobody opposed, but... whatever

#37 · 105w, 3d ago · · · Prologue ·

>>1621112 Yeah, nobody said anything about mine either. o.O

#39 · 105w, 3d ago · · · Prologue ·

>>1621118Good, good, let the insanity consume you.

#40 · 105w, 3d ago · · · Prologue ·

the color of it’s bark,

it's=it is

its=shows possession

almost as if they weren’t real tree’s anymore.

's is never used for pluralization in English. Only to show possession in nouns, and as a shortening of 'is'.

She had to find her friends and Apple Bloom,

Applebloom is one word. Apparently, Apple Bloom is the correct spelling.

for when Discords magic made contact with Luna’s muzzle,

Possession in nouns is always with 's, so with the apostrophe.

Otherwise, well done.

#41 · 105w, 3d ago · · · Prologue ·

>>1621457 SIN!

While the apostrophes you pointed out are correct (thank you), Apple Bloom is not one word. The accepted spellings for the characters come from the MLP Wiki, and Michelle Creber herself (Apple Bloom's voice actress) uses this spelling.

>>1621148 Ugh. When I start missing simple mistakes like the ones Esmelthian pointed out, you know I'm getting burned out on editing. Lol. Sorry about that.

#42 · 105w, 3d ago · · · Prologue ·

>>1621587

Really? Huh. *looks it up because he is skeptical* Huh, you're right.

#43 · 105w, 3d ago · · · Prologue ·

>>1621587 Slorgie, I command you take a break from all this. Get some rest, drink some tea, have sexy times, whatever.

#44 · 105w, 3d ago · · · Prologue ·

Hold on! Isn't there already an Applejack Ponyfall story? Or was it cancelled?

#45 · 105w, 3d ago · · · Prologue ·

>>1622477 Cancelled. Belgian got sick or something and was, regrettably, unable to continue.

#46 · 105w, 2d ago · · · Prologue ·

>>1619188 I have prepared my body, now give me more. :rainbowkiss:

#47 · 105w, 2d ago · · · Prologue ·

>>1623483 Only your body? Son I am disappoint.

#48 · 105w, 2d ago · · · Prologue ·

>>1623493 Sorry, you already blew my mind; I'm awaiting the next shipment.

Also, the prologue, though the same scene, is always amazingly different depending on the character, and that's awesome.

On a related note, Bloomberg isn't one of AJ's trees anymore, she gave him to Braeburn in Appleoosa.

Maybe name the tree Bloomington the third?

#49 · 105w, 2d ago · · · Prologue ·

>>1619188

lol dude How you know?????

#50 · 105w, 2d ago · · · Prologue ·

>>1623536 Oh yeah lol, I forgot about that XD

>>1623698 Call it a hunch :P

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