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Draequine

Joined January 2012
69 followers

Woooo CHAOS

Stories (3)

  • PonyFall:Adventures in Chaos
    Part of a Self-insert colab

    93,866 words · 4,026 views · 277 likes · 21 dislikes
  • M.I.B: Mares In Black
    We live in secret, we exist in shadow. And we dress in black.
    1,536 words · 474 views · 7 likes · 0 dislikes
  • Betrayal at House on Everfree Hill
    There is a rumor in Ponyville of a place out of the way, on the border of the Everfree forest. No, this isn't Fluttershy's cottage, or Sweet Apple Acres. It's somewhere a bit... darker.
    1,744 words · 102 views · 2 likes · 2 dislikes

Traveling with Discord is anything but average, especially when you've got some mental baggage.

Your best hope is to go with the flow, and keep the show on the road.


(Beware:Cursing in this fic.)

(Beware:Chapters are prone to radical changes.)

(~Don't get me started on those dream sequences.~)

(Chapters with (DANGER ZONE) are being rewritten. Read at your own risk.)

First Published
20th Mar 2012
Last Modified
22nd Dec 2013

Comments ( 276 )

#1 · Chapter 1 · 122w, 18h ago · · ·

The madness begins. :rainbowwild:

I suppose I better finish up chapter one of PonyFall: Australia.

#2 · Chapter 1 · 122w, 18h ago · · ·

Quick! Before a Diamond Dingo Eats it!>>344389

#3 · Chapter 1 · 122w, 17h ago · · ·

hehe nice Draequine :rainbowlaugh: <----RD's reaction xD

#4 · Chapter 3 · 120w, 3d ago · · ·

Dayum that picture and that story. Mighty fine I say.

#5 · Chapter 3 · 120w, 3d ago · · ·

cool story

#6 · Chapter 3 · 120w, 3d ago · · ·

I aught'a go to school dressed like this guy someday.  :rainbowlaugh:

#7 · Chapter 3 · 120w, 2h ago · · ·

Damn it, why do I find out about things always late? I totally would've liked to join the project.

Anyway, nice story you've got there. As some said, there are quite some typos. Most of all, you've misused "your" a couple of times.

It seems fine for everything else, besides a bit too much swearing, and maybe the "mind voice" thing could get annoying if it's overused; but maybe that's just me.

Keep this up, you've had a nice idea with the Ponyfall project! :twilightsmile:

#8 · Chapter 3 · 119w, 6d ago · · ·

Reviewed your story: STARSWIRL IS BEST PONY

#9 · Chapter 3 · 119w, 6d ago · · ·

This is Fan Tucking Fastic. Seriously I love it, especially Ashton and his crazy voice in his head. :pinkiehappy: MAKE MORE SOON:rainbowkiss:

#10 · Chapter 3 · 119w, 6d ago · · ·

Something that is just too fun to read once. You sir lost the internet, and gained a kingdom.:pinkiecrazy:

#11 · Chapter 3 · 119w, 6d ago · · ·

>>404705

But gancolt gets starswirled... All I got was tom

#12 · Chapter 2 · 119w, 6d ago · · ·

:moustache:

#13 · Chapter 3 · 119w, 6d ago · · ·

:rainbowlaugh:

#14 · Chapter 1 · 119w, 3d ago · · ·

"Who is he to say that I can't go back in time to steal my own cotton candy cloud?"

Yeah, who does he think he is!?:twilightangry2:

#15 · Chapter 3 · 119w, 3d ago · · ·

Sorry about all the comment deletions, but I had to reorganize the chapters to put in the prologue....

I BLAME MUFFINS!

Gak
#16 · Chapter 4 · 119w, 1d ago · · ·

First. Liked it. Glad to see ponyfall is still going.

#17 · Chapter 4 · 119w, 1d ago · · ·

hooray, let the flood of chapters pent up over the last week commence!

#18 · Chapter 4 · 119w, 1d ago · · ·

Shhhhhhh!!! I just edited the fic a tad D:

#19 · Chapter 4 · 119w, 1d ago · · ·

whats different?

#20 · Chapter 4 · 119w, 1d ago · · ·

Whoa...

While others humanized pone are basically useless other than being clopping materials, Discord proved himself as a decent moneymaker :pinkiecrazy:

#21 · Chapter 2 · 119w, 15h ago · · ·

April 13th 2012

*looks at date on PC*

April 10th, 2012

Mother of God, Doctor Hooves must be the Author! :yay:

#22 · Chapter 4 · 119w, 2h ago · · ·

I love it.

Though seeing Discord so down made me very sad.:fluttercry:

Don't worry, Chaos pony will save you! -Tries to arive-

Wait you've been causing it. And now you...Oh crap. -metal hugs anyway-

Can't wait for the next part!:heart:

#23 · Chapter 4 · 118w, 5d ago · · ·

Well, this is certainly gonna be interesting.  If I could ever make a good Ponyfall story-which I cannot without some form of help with editing, ideas, etc.-  I would pick Pinkie as no one has made a Ponyfall story involving her.  Or Fluttershy for that matter.  Why did someone have to take RD? Why the CMC?  I wanted the chance to hang out with a pony that had similar interests.  Hey, I like things that are cool, and want some things to be 20% cooler.  If the author of the Rainbow Dash story cannot continue, I will gladly finish it(with his input and permission of course).

#24 · Chapter 4 · 118w, 5d ago · · ·

>>444466

Guess who has both Pinkie Pie and Fluttershy?

:trollestia:

#25 · Chapter 4 · 118w, 5d ago · · ·

You?!  Dammit, stop trolling.  If Celestia's evil twins Molestia and Trollestia have them, then they shall pay!

#26 · Chapter 4 · 118w, 5d ago · · ·

>>444478

Nope, The_Slorg has them both!

:yay:

#27 · Chapter 4 · 118w, 5d ago · · ·

Why aren't they up then?  I want to help him on the Pinkie Pie one, because I know her antics better than anyone.  Plus I can stand her for longer.  Tell him that, and that if he declines, the full wrath of Nightmare Moon shall come down on his arse.

#28 · Chapter 4 · 118w, 5d ago · · ·

http://www.fimfiction.net/story/13327/The-Day-My-Beard-Turned-Into-Pinkie-Pie cough cough

If you want a chance to get in, then you should join the pony fall channel in the IRC. >.>

#29 · Chapter 2 · 118w, 4d ago · · ·

:pinkiesick: Goddammit. I had just had to get curious... :pinkiesick:

We are all Slave of Armok! The God of Blood! All hail the GreatToadyOne!

#30 · Chapter 1 · 117w, 4d ago · · ·

and then John DeLancie hears Discord speaking.

#31 · Chapter 2 · 117w, 4d ago · · ·

LOL AWESOME

#32 · Chapter 3 · 117w, 4d ago · · ·

Man... it just get's better an' better... so good!

#33 · Chapter 4 · 117w, 4d ago · · ·

IT JUST GETS BETTER AND BETTER AND BETTER!:pinkiehappy:

#34 · Chapter 5 · 117w, 4d ago · · ·

Y U NO BE MAGIC

#35 · Chapter 5 · 117w, 3d ago · · ·

This sheet just got serious, yo.

#36 · Chapter 5 · 117w, 3d ago · · ·

I wonder if my life would be better if I also had a voice in my head....

#37 · Chapter 5 · 117w, 3d ago · · ·

I love this story the best

I can't stop laughing

#38 · Chapter 5 · 117w, 3d ago · · ·

Bloody BRILLIANT! Oh, I can't wait for the voices in his head to start talking to each other. This is going far better than I expected this story to go!

#39 · Chapter 5 · 117w, 3d ago · · ·

>>476984

Your about to be horribly surprised at what happens.

#40 · Chapter 5 · 117w, 3d ago · · ·

I just started reading this story today, and another update?! OH MY, IT'S BEAUTIFUL!

#41 · Chapter 5 · 117w, 3d ago · · ·

>>476996

"Horribly surprised" just makes me more exited! :pinkiecrazy:

#42 · Chapter 5 · 117w, 3d ago · · ·

>>477005

Just for yew! :rainbowkiss:

#43 · Chapter 5 · 117w, 3d ago · · ·

Oh my goddesses... does that mean he got his powers back? Epic either way.

#44 · Chapter 5 · 117w, 3d ago · · ·

OHGAWD :twilightoops: OHGAWD :twilightoops: OHGAWD :twilightoops: OHGAWD :twilightoops: OHGAWD :twilightoops: OHGAWD :twilightoops: OHGAWD :twilightoops: OHGAWD :twilightoops: OHGAWD :twilightoops: OHGAWD :facehoof: OHGAWD :twilightoops: OHGAWD :twilightoops:

#45 · Chapter 5 · 117w, 3d ago · · ·

"Crush! Kill! Destroy! Swag!"

I lolled XD

#46 · Chapter 5 · 117w, 2d ago · · ·

Shitstorm inbound!!!!!!!!!:pinkiegasp:

#47 · Chapter 5 · 117w, 2d ago · · ·

CRUSH KILL DESTROY SWAG :rainbowlaugh:

i lauhed so hard at this, i fell off my chair. You sir made my day

#48 · Chapter 5 · 117w, 2d ago · · ·

Gawd now he has THREE different consiousnesses (spelled right?) in his head.:twilightoops:

And there's also that whole magic thingy...

You know what. It's just a lot easier to sit back and watch this unfold.

#49 · Chapter 5 · 116w, 5d ago · · ·

Uh oh...:twilightoops: This can't be good for him or the world... :yay:

#50 · Chapter 6 · 114w, 5d ago · · ·

Once again, you have rendered my mind into a state of chaos. :derpytongue2:

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