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    Vinyl Scratch has two options. These two are influenced by the one choice she doesn't want to make.
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  • E After Life

    One choice to change the course of somepony’s entire life. Even when memories plague me, history depends on me to determine the outcome. My name is Rainbow Dash, and there is only one path to take whether you choose to take it or not: It’
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  • T Royal Road: The Chariot of Fortune

    Rainbow Dash and Silverbuck head off to the Holy Lands to stop Discord.
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  • 47w, 2d
    Happy New Year's!

    Hey guys, Silverness here wishing you all a Happy New Year!

    That's one chapter closed, and another one unfolding. I also hope you guys had a wonderful Christmas. I know I had one.

    Anyway, I know you guys are probably wondering a few things like where have I been or why there hasn't been an update in a long ass time. I shall explain that in this blog because you readers deserve to know.

    First of all, I haven't given up on any of the stories I have on. Well, the Royal Road one is a maybe. Something happened to that story and I don't know if I have the time to even concentrate on it now. So don't worry about the other stories (like Ponyfall) that are still up.

    Second, the lack of updates has been due to the my insecurities of writing a horrible chapter or I was simply lazy and couldn't gather the motivation to write the stupid chapter. (If Slorg is reading this, I'm still working on them :/) So I've decided to make one of my New Years' resolution to finish chapters faster and hopefully improve in this year.

    Third, I'd just like to apologize if I've made any of my readers/watchers mad for not updating fast enough. Shit just happens and it really sucks when it does.

    And finally, I'd like to show some recognition to all the people who have given me support during 2013, which include readers, editors, writers, and friends, and I greatly appreciate it all. <3

    Anyway, that's all I wanted to say about my inactivity and other reasons. Now on to story progress:

    Ponyfall has five to six chapters upcoming because I must get these things done. At least two or three of the five are somewhat completed. (simple edits are needed)

    After Life is still on hold and may be rewritten in a different way.

    Other fics are in progress, but sadly, they are taking time.

    And that's about it. I pretty much covered most of what I wanted to say and I shall end this blog post off. Hope everyone has a fantastic start in the new year.


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  • 59w, 4d

    Hey guys, Silverness here.

    This blog post is mainly here for one reason: To explain why I haven't been around for the past two weeks. Well, I contracted a severe case of Pneumonia awhile back and it was really bad. Seriously, it was the worst feeling I've ever experienced and I couldn't do shit all week. Now I've recovered, I can finally get through this chapter that has halted two currently finished chapters from before and revision on two others since they need a little tweaking for the new chapter (the one that still isn't done) in order for it to make sense.

    I know that the wait is killing you, and I apologize for anybody that has been waiting a month for an update. At least I was busy reading books while resting in my bed during my sickness to learn from my previous mistakes that I've made in the past. As for other updates, After Life is still in hiatus due to the amounts of schoolwork I've been receiving, and Royal Road is under hiatus due to maintenance. I thank you readers and followers for being so patient and hopefully I can reward you guys with more chapters and possibly a story.


    Current Status: Recovering; better

    PF: Rainbows - Chapter Eight progress (75%)

    BTW Slorg was also sick during the same week if anybody is wondering.

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  • 81w, 4d
    PF/After Life - Quick Notice

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  • 83w, 6d
    PF - Prologue Improvement

    After an entire year, I finally improved the original prologue and replaced it with a brand new one that is much better than the old one. There may be a few bugs, but you can tell that by reading it that it's better.


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  • 86w, 3d
    New Story: After Life

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  • ...

Cody Lofton is a 17 year old teenage boy living in the large city of Indianapolis, Indiana where he lives pretty much a normal life of a teenage boy.  However, some strange phenomenon happens with the skies turning from sky blue to bright pink.  What makes it even more strange is that he discovers a teenage girl lying unconscious in his own yard.  What he does next would change his whole life from there on....

Part of the PonyFall Collaboration

AN: Just got Featured! You guys are so awesome!! :D

First Published
2nd Apr 2012
Last Modified
11th Nov 2013
#1 · 137w, 3d ago · · · Prologue ·


So, this is going to be the prologue for every Ponyfall story?


#2 · 137w, 3d ago · · · Prologue ·


Not entirely. Each will focus on a different character, but the confrontation with Discord will look similar in each if the showdown is rendered as fact. For Rarity's version, we're going to opt to include it as a flashback of Rarity's so we can claim an imperfect narrator if the details don't mesh perfectly with the others.

#3 · 137w, 3d ago · · · Prologue ·

>>434398 Well, of course, and some ponies might not even be anywhere near Ground "Negative One", as it were. I just simply meant that, while the details might not match up perfectly - as if you'd copy-pasta'd it from somewhere - they'd still stay true to each other in form. They might not be the same hips, but they wear the same pants. To completely destroy a movie I've never watched by using it as an analogy.

The movie, btw, is the Brotherhood of the venturing jockstrap. But gender-swapped.

#4 · 137w, 3d ago · · · Prologue ·

i just realized something....

its going to be a horrible day when MLP:FiM is canceled...

#5 · 137w, 3d ago · · · Prologue ·

>>434518 Don't you dare speek of such things! :flutterrage:

#6 · 137w, 3d ago · · 1 · Prologue ·


Us Bronies will never let the show die! Should it end, we'll still have an incredibly inspired and talented community, bursting with fics, music, and animations. Never will it end! EVAR. Seriously, if it does I'm gonna go raid hasbro and force them to make more.

#7 · 137w, 3d ago · · · Prologue ·


Now you just gotta add the 1st chapter again.


#8 · 137w, 3d ago · · · Prologue ·

Me gusta.  Considerably better written than the first chapter.  Have a mustache.  :moustache:

#9 · 137w, 3d ago · · · Prologue ·

That's just, wow. I wuv dis sooooooooo much! :rainbowkiss: Seriously, it makes it all so much cooler! :moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache:

#10 · 137w, 3d ago · · · Prologue ·


it is better than the original so pretty cool I guess

keep up the good work!

#11 · 137w, 3d ago · · · Prologue ·

nice prolouge. can't wait for updated ch. 1:scootangel:

#12 · 137w, 3d ago · · · Prologue ·

OSSIM POSSIM! I've been waiting so long for this. Can't wait for chapter one!:pinkiehappy:

#13 · 137w, 3d ago · · · Prologue ·

ok, question time, will Rainbow Dash have wings this time around? personally I think she should as (aside from her phobia of clothing) her wings are her most redeeming quality, plus it would help with convincing humans she's telling the truth...or they might just think she used real life

#14 · 137w, 1d ago · · · Prologue ·

What happened to boob squeezing? :rainbowhuh:

#15 · 136w, 5d ago · · · Prologue ·


I hope it's gone forever :pinkiesick:

Really, the style isn't bad so Silverness, if your rewriting it PLEASE skip that part and maybe cover the girl instead of staring. This way your selfinsert will become much more likable:twilightsmile:

#16 · 135w, 6d ago · · · Prologue ·

I wanna write one 4 derpy + awesome prologue :moustache:

Hey, Silverness here!  Finally, Chapter One is done and now posted here.  If you notice any thoughts that need to be italicized, tell me because the italics didn't transfer right from google docs to fimfiction.  So enjoy Chapter One! :twilightsmile: :heart: AND give Bridgebrain, my pre-reader some credit along with Ponyaddict and TheSlorg (when he had time), but Bridgebrain did most of the work

Oh cool, does this mean the quality control issues have all been sorted out?

>>577914 Yup, we're supposed to get the chapter reviewed three times before posting it up.  Bridgebrain checked it all three times so yeah.  Also, we got things sorted out :twilightsmile:

I wonder what a rainbow milkshake tastes like, spicy? (Wink)

Is it bad that I thought of something completely different when he said The Milkshake club?

>>578029 Haha, I think I know what you meant, but yeah I got that a few times

all I can say is, ITS ABOUT DAMN TIME! lol excellent chapter btw, I trust we can expect more regular updates? (I hope? pls?):pinkiehappy:

yo just saying but "that want beat the crap outta me." should be that want to....hope that helps

>>578075 I'll try to do regular updates (Yes, I hope the updates wont be monthly, possibly a week or two updates)

>>578089 Thanks! :twilightsmile: google docs screwed up some of the wording when I transferred it over

Didn't I already read this?

>>578168 Some of it is redone, like some major and minor details

So awesome that the revised version is now out!  Now... I... want... MOAR!

Keep up the swag.:moustache:

Having crazy thoughts is only funny in the Discord story.

>>578341 Exactly :rainbowlaugh: Don't worry, Cody rarely has crazy thoughts :twilightblush:

I'm kinda mad.  Why?  Because for a month or so none of my favorite stories have been updated.  So when I saw the 1 next to the gold star I felt :pinkiehappy: then I read the chapter and was :rainbowhuh: I Read this already.  I know you spent a long time on this and all but I am :twilightangry2:

>>578694 Don't worry, I was already working on Chapter Two and have ideas for it already, I'll start working on it as soon as possible

Okay, Cody is gonna get the crap beat out of him by Rainbow Dash.  Ironic because that's his favorite pony beating him up, and again ironic because he just escaped being pancaked by a couple football jocks.  Plus, I'm starting a story on GDocs about me finding Spitfire.  No nudity, I find her in her Wonderbolts outfit.

Why didn't he just leave her on the porch and then open the back door from the inside of the house?

I can't wait til' the next chapter when he get's his ass WHOOPED!

Say, I noticed your a fan of a certain tense (the dreaded present tense) and I won't lie, I hate it. I hate present tense (the past tense system is a lot more professional, in my opinion, and results in an easier to comprehend story. Maybe that's just because EVERY book I've ever read is in past tense but still... Anyway, nice chapter and I hope it gets out soon.

>>579177 I actually didn't have this at present tense at first, my pre-reader told me that since it's happening and your seeing it, its present tense

>>578799 That sounds interesting. Are you with the Ponyfall crew?


YAY!!! The repost I've been waiting for!:rainbowlaugh::ajsmug::derpytongue2::pinkiehappy::raritystarry::twilightsheepish::yay:

Keep it coming.:scootangel:

Finally! I thought it was just sitting in my favorites for nothing!

>>579203 Well, I mean, you're conveying a story, a message, you're telling the reader something, the reader wasn't nescesarily there in the moment, as it happened, so it wouldn't really be in the present tense, as far as I know, but then I'm in grade nine and I only read 0.5 four-hundred page books a day, so what do I know?

>>579273 Same grade :twilightsmile: and I have no idea why either *shrugs* but he is a pre-reader and did a pretty nice job doing it though


I'm eager to find out where this one is going

... although, I gotta agree with Jaohni on this one.:ajbemused: The present-tense makes it a bit hard to read. I usually prefer past-tense with the omniscient third-person perspective. I'd say you should probably stick with what you have though. Seems like you put a lot of work into getting this chapter together. If I were the author, then another re-write would probably cause a severe damper on my mood. :pinkiecrazy:


Why did you rewrite the chapter?

I swear I've read this before...?

>>579582 I prefer past-tense too really

>>579781 It was part of the "Save Ponyfall" thing and all of us had to do it (some major and minor details were rewritten)

>>579801 Yeah, this is the rewritten Chapter One, it still has some of the details from the old chapter, but I did modifications on it (along with pre-reader help)

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