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  • 27w, 4d

    1 comments · 126 views
  • 47w, 5d
    Mele Kalikimaka

    ... no I'm not Hawaiian, I just like to say it.

    Wells guys, its another Christmas here and I had planned to have a couple of gifts out to everyone by now, as in two starter chapters to two new stories, but real life got in the way. As for PonyFall, we had some work done, but scrapped it on account that it was not up to our normal standard of quality. We're committed to bringing you the best possible story possible, please be patient with us.

    But in the sprit of giving and love and kindness, I have more stuff to give away, yay!

    Steam games:

    Little Inferno - Taken

    Jack Lumber

    AaaaaAAaaaAAAaaAAAAaAAAAA!!! for the Awesome - Taken

    Gemini Rue

    Anomaly 2 - Taken

    Hero Academy with gold Content

    Solar 2 - Taken

    Batman™: Arkham Asylum GOTY

    Batman™: Arkham City GOTY - Taken

    Batman™: Arkham Origins DLC (I have no idea what this one is, but its here for whoever wants it)

    F.E.A.R. - Taken

    F.E.A.R. 2: Project Origin

    F.E.A.R. 3

    Scribblenauts Unlimited - Taken

    Mortal Kombat Kollection - Taken

    The Lord of the Rings Online: Steely Dawn Starter Pack

    Normal rules apply to everyone: be polite and first come first serve.

    NOTE: I will be spending the day with family and probably won't get back to anyone until tomorrow evening and possibly even the 26th, if you haven't heard from me, be patient: good things come to those who wait.

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  • 50w, 1d
    More Free Games

    Since I'm sitting on some major writer's block until a certain writer can get back to me...

    Have some free stuff, usual rules apply:

    Usual rules: just comment here and be polite.


    Natural Selection 2 - TAKEN

    Magicka + DLC - TAKEN

    Sanctum 2- TAKEN

    Orcs Must Die 2: The Complete pack -TAKEN

    Serious Sam 3- TAKEN

    Trine 2: Complete Story - TAKEN

    Offspring Fling

    Superbrothers: Sword & Sworcery EP- TAKEN

    Splice- TAKEN

    Crayon Physics Deluxe- TAKEN

    Humble Indie Bundle #3 - TAKEN


    Crysis 2 Maximum Edition- TAKEN

    Mirror’s Edge- TAKEN

    Populous - TAKEN

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  • 62w, 4d
    Brony Fanfare

    Its finally time.

    I was a volunteer 'security person' at the first BFF and had a blast, couldn't wait for more.

    This year, I have a table. My wife and I will be selling perler beadsprite ponies, pokemon, and game characters. I would love it if some of my readers cam over and recognized me like you did last year.

    And since I'm in such a good mood, I have more free games for everyone!


    Trine 2: Complete Story

    FTL: Faster than Light  - TAKEN

    Cave Story+ - TAKEN

    Offspring Fling

    Superbrothers: Sword & Sworcery EP


    Crayon Physics Deluxe

    Humble Indie Bundle #3


    Burnout Paradise: Ultimate Box  - TAKEN

    Crysis 2 Maximum Edition

    Mirror’s Edge


    Command & Conquer: Red Alert 3 - Uprising - TAKEN

    Drop me a comment below to get your free game!

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  • 65w, 1d
    Books and written stuff.

    Okay, before you read this, keep in mind this:

    THESE ARE MY IMPORTANT BOOKS, NOT FAVORITE. Some of these books I would go out of my way to never read again. I may post a list of favorite books later.

    Redwall Series - Out of everything here, this may be the single most important series I’ve ever encountered. “Why?” you may ask, because without ‘Redwall’ I would have NEVER gotten into reading. Back when I was in 3rd grade, I was obsessed with books, but not in the reading sense, but in just having them. The bigger, the better. Finally, my parents had enough and said that ‘Redwall’ was the last book that they would buy me until I actually finished reading it. So I grumbled a bit and started it, but I never actually got into it. It was my 3rd grade teacher who really got me into reading simply by having her class color a paper plate with a scene from the book that we just finished and then we got a prize. The competitor in me took one look at this and said that I would have the most paper plates ever. My record of 34 plates, still stands to this day.

    Shakespeare - Like him or hate him, he’s important. If you really want to understand how to write dialogue and create characters that actually live and breathe, go read Shakespeare. If you can’t understand him, and even I have trouble with it sometimes as a college graduate with a BA in English, there are ‘No Fear’ versions of Shakespeare. You have no excuses. Go. Now.

    Harry Potter - This series further cemented my love of reading and taught me about character development in the long run.

    H.P. Lovecraft - The master of true horror. Not the blood and guts horror, but true, mind-fucking, world-ending, bigger-than-the-universe horror. Most of his stuff is in the public domain. Go read. Or, hell, find the audio book; that’s what I did.

    Don Quixote - in my opinion, the single greatest piece of literature ever written. Period. My mom read the children’s version to me when I was 8 and I reread the whole thing as a freshman in high school, from that point, I’ve committed myself to reread the whole thing at least once every year. Since 2004, I have yet to miss a year. It only takes about a week to read the whole thing. I don’t know how to describe the power and meaning that this saga has.

    The Hobbit - Most people would have listed ‘Lord of the Rings’ here in stead of ‘The Hobbit,’ but honestly, even after reading LotR 3 or 4 times, I find that I got more out of the prequel. Talk about a world that was MUCH bigger than was what shown. LotR has, in my opinion, too  much in it for me to really understand it or to even care about some of the character after a point. Not so with ‘The Hobbit.’


    Vox Corporis - Yeah, yeah, this is a Harry Potter fanfic, but this was also the first fanfic to actually have me crying with joy and happiness. Its kind of based in the movie universe instead of the books, and has better character development than books 6-7. Many times, if I’m not thinking clearly, I consider this more canon than the actual books.

    My Little Dashie - Hate it, love it, apathetic or whatever, I don’t care. Without this fic, I wouldn’t have actively sought out a MLP fanfic site to really get into. Without MLD, I wouldn’t be here.

    Also, please check out my blog about legally free PC games, let me give you guy stuff. Seriously

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  • ...

Matt "MrBackpack" Martinez has finally gotten his life on track; he's got a job that he loves, a good enough home, a beautiful fiance, and a dog. Little does he know that all of that hard work is about to be threatened by the presence of a very confused and very naked young woman appearing in his fudge-smelling Texas backyard.

Part of the PonyFall Collaboration series

First Published
19th Aug 2012
Last Modified
1st Jun 2014
#1 · 118w, 23h ago · · · Prologue ·

Might want to remove the editing comments down at the bottom.

In other news, this one's looking good so far. Keep it up.

#2 · 118w, 21h ago · · · Prologue ·


Whoops, thanks for pointing that out. Fixed.

#3 · 118w, 18h ago · · · Prologue ·

Ponyfall? Here? As long as there isn't shipping involved, I'm in. Also, just letting you know; you are my only hopes for the Ponyfall collab; all the other characters aren't fit for the job; except the CMC, of couse.

#4 · 118w, 18h ago · 1 · · Prologue ·

please sir, may i have some...more? :applecry:

#5 · 118w, 18h ago · · · Prologue ·

Not bad, I like what you've done so far. :twilightsmile:

#6 · 118w, 13h ago · · · Prologue ·

Yay! Twilight has arrived!

#7 · 118w, 13h ago · · · Prologue ·

Hurray. Now get to work on chapter one.

>>1116748 Interesting. Care to explain what's wrong with Pinkie and Fluttershy, since I'm writing for them?


#8 · 118w, 13h ago · · · Prologue ·

>>1116748 As would I like to know too.  Since I'm writing for Rainbow Dash :rainbowdetermined2:

#9 · 118w, 13h ago · · · Prologue ·


Simply the mix of the characters; the writing was fine, I just typically forgot that one was there when the other was speaking, Pinkie and Flutters just clash, but would potenially be the greatest one if you somehow made them different stories.


The fact that the guy just believed Rainbow was Rainbow.

#10 · 118w, 12h ago · · · Prologue ·

>>1118383 Fair enough. I originally had just Pinkie, but I took Fluttershy as well since nobody wanted her at the time.

I admit that, especially in the latest chapters, dealing with multiple characters in the same place at the same time is getting challenging. You'll notice I often send one or more away temporarily so I can focus on one or two at a time. It's something I'm aware of and working on finding better ways to do it.

#11 · 118w, 12h ago · · · Prologue ·

>>1118383 I see what you mean, except he doesn't completely believe her on the spot.  (Sure he kind of believes her, but what choice does he have?)  

#12 · 118w, 12h ago · · · Prologue ·


I'm thinking about continuing reading yours, actually; quality's  been improving, and I loved the part with the Pinkie-Kiss; unlike other PiE (Pun unintended,) fics, she's still very clueless, and is still Pinkie Pie at heart.

#13 · 118w, 12h ago · · · Prologue ·


True, true; and it would be a terrible collab .if he sent her to an asylum..

#14 · 118w, 12h ago · · · Prologue ·

>>1118455 Exactly (I don't intend for her to go to an asylum)

#15 · 118w, 12h ago · 1 · · Prologue ·


#16 · 118w, 12h ago · · · Prologue ·


Well, dur. An aslyum would work well if this wasn't a collab, though.

#17 · 118w, 12h ago · · · Prologue ·

>>1118594 True, true you got a point there (The collab for that fic would be the Pony Asylum Collaboration <.<)

#18 · 118w, 12h ago · · · Prologue ·

finnaly! huzzah! ponyfall is now ready to go with all stories! (i think):rainbowkiss:

#19 · 118w, 12h ago · 1 · · Prologue ·

i actually had an idea for a twilight ponyfall story, i imagined a NASA or museum intern finding her in florida, or some equally sciency place:pinkiehappy:

#20 · 118w, 8h ago · · · Prologue ·

Oof, usually when I find a story that I decide is worth tracking there's already multiple chapters up for me to check the dates on to get a rough ETA for the next one, or failing that using a different story by the same author to the same effect. No dice here, though; somehow the complete failure of my normal methods for figuring out when the next chapter will come out is more suspenseful than the question of how the second to last sentence is going to play out in that chapter, and that's pretty damn suspenseful! :rainbowderp:

So if it's not obvious, I really like your writing, and have high hopes for the story as it gets underway. Good luck and god speed.

#21 · 118w, 3h ago · 1 · · Prologue ·

>>1118606 "Pony Asylum Collaboration"....There might just be something in that, actually.:pinkiecrazy::applejackconfused::flutterrage:(Not enough crazy in RD, Rarity and Twi emoticons.) Anyway, just have them all detailing their descent into, and adventures in, insanity. Pretty much like the dream sequence in the Discord Ponyfall.

#22 · 118w, 3h ago · · · Prologue ·

>>1121052 Oh god there is something like that?  :rainbowderp: I never thought someone would actually do that <.<  

#23 · 118w, 3h ago · · · Prologue ·

>>1121069 No, I was actually suggesting it as an idea. Heheh...Luna's Asylum: On the moon for a thousand years. I know a guy who's perfect for writing that one. Y'all want in? Be weird crediting a guy who has nothing to do with it.

#24 · 118w, 3h ago · · · Prologue ·

>>1121121 Holy shit, I probably won't write for it (since I'm really busy) But I could possibly help you guys plan stuff (etc.)

#25 · 118w, 2h ago · 1 · · Prologue ·

>>1121143 And so it begins, the collab that brought about the destruction of *Is poked by an advisor*:twilightsheepish: Oh, right, sorry. And so it begins, the collab that may bring about a total ban on any further collaborations on multiple accounts on this website.:pinkiecrazy:

Eh, maybe not. Still...How is it going to be a collab, unless maybe...Hmm...TO THE THINKING CAVE! *Closes laptop and phases through onto the bed above to sleep and dream of it*

#26 · 118w, 2h ago · · · Prologue ·

>>1121182 I never wanted it to be a collab, I just mentioned out loud as a random idea.  

#27 · 118w, 2h ago · 1 · · Prologue ·

>>1121185 True, true. Oh well, I guess I'm going to go find any Australian brony writers I know personally. 'bout the only bunch crazy enough to try something like this.

#28 · 118w, 58m ago · 1 · · Prologue ·

I was originally not planning on reading any of the Ponyfall series, but I can't stop myself from reading the one about the best pony... and now I want to read the rest, damn you.

Well, I've got a lot of reading to do :facehoof:

#29 · 117w, 6d ago · 1 · · Prologue ·

>>1121493 Welcome to the group, within a group, within the herd *Xhibit face*

#30 · 117w, 6d ago · · · Prologue ·

Nice work, seems oddly fimiliar....

#31 · 117w, 6d ago · · · Prologue ·


"Multiple characters in the same place"


Challenge accepted :twilightsmile:


"Except for the CMC"


Also congrats Backpack on getting it approved

#32 · 117w, 6d ago · 1 · · Prologue ·

Awesome work, Backpack! Now hurry up and finish your first chapter so I can proofread it!

>>1116748 Oh, I love it when people criticize the writers like this. It certainly is entertaining to see them get "motivated"! :rainbowlaugh:

Seriously, though. Please don't say mean things about their writing, because that just makes me seem like a bad editor!

Oh, wait. I am a bad editor! Heheh!

#33 · 117w, 5d ago · · · Prologue ·

The Twilight side of Ponyfall is here? :yay:

#34 · 117w, 5d ago · · · Prologue ·

Hmmmm... I was under the impression that the Twilight fic for the ponyfall collab had already been started. Of course, the one I remember was pretty damn bad, and this one seems to be off to a pretty solid start, so I guess that's a plus.

I'll keep an eye on this one I guess.

#35 · 117w, 5d ago · · · Prologue ·


I'm actually the fourth writer that we've had for Twilight. Two of the previous writers had prologues, one never got past editing phase of his prologue.

Chapter one should be out in a couple of days.

Thanks everyone for reading and enjoying this as much as I enjoyed writing it.

#36 · 117w, 4d ago · 1 · · Prologue ·


That would be the greatest collab of all time. Mind if I join, or am I just not crazy enough?

#37 · 117w, 4d ago · 1 · · Prologue ·

At least the library didn't turn into a whale. I'll definently be watching this story!

Personally I would of chose a Deagle.

Haha, Silly Mr.Backpack. You think drivers in Austin are bad? The ones in Tunisia... Good God I swear I'll probably die before I get back to the states. People in cars, construction vehicles, donkey carts, herds of barn animals coming at you from every which way... One has not experienced true bad driving until one finds a car going the wrong way down an exit ramp onto the wrong side of the highway :trollestia: .... It's a mess discord would be proud of :eeyup:

Pinkie is the Master of Smile Smile Smiles! :pinkiecrazy: epic combo right there :pinkiehappy:

Seems like it will be a good addition to the ponyfall, best of luck! :twilightsmile:


Second favorite ponyfall already.

Something lumpy in the Backyard? Better get my glock


So much unnecessary power and weight (although good for scaring people off).  Berretta 92fs or an FN Five seven.

In other news, I like how this has started out.  I saw fiance and immediately thought of another fic i read where the fiance gets jealous of Fluttershy (she wasnt there when Flutters came into the picture).  Glad to see that's not immediately going to happen.

To a dog, we are all essentially disobedient sheep that need to be herded.


I don't own a Desert Eagle, they're finicky, large, and stupidly expensive guns. I do, however, own a Glock 30SF, a perfectly practical .45 ACP concealed carry handgun.


We've had issues with people in my backyard who don't need to be there.

To everyone else: I am a pretty average Texan gun owner in addition to being a brony. No, this will not turn into another "Devil's Due," but my firearms are a very large part of my life, expect them to play a role consistently throughout the entire fic. I am not going to be exaggerating my gun collection, the guns that I actually own are going to be the guns that I portray in-fic.


Thanks :twilightsmile:


i have to say, yours and theslorgs are the best ponyfalls in the fic right now, keep up the good work!:pinkiehappy:

>>1161299 Pinkie is the Master of Puppetsmiles! :pinkiecrazy: If you've ever read Pink Eyes, then that little detail might be familiar to you~

(Yes, the main character of Pink Eyes is named Puppysmiles, and when she suddenly goes catatonic, the author, in his narration, calls her 'puppet'smiles, instead of 'puppy'smiles.)

please sir, may i have some...more? :heart:

Jahaha! Great to see all of chapter 1 up. Can't wait for the next one.:rainbowwild:

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