The Sonic Rainboom. It seems harmless enough when you say it or think about it. But imagine that when a pony, like Rainbow Dash, creates one, it opens up a portal to another world, transporting the creator directly there. Now imagine that you're an average human sleeping the night away after a rough day at work. You hear a loud crash outside and immediately run outside to see what it is, when a panic stricken, cyan pony begins threatening to get violent if you don't back off. Weird things happen, ya know.
Chapters (3)
"Hey! I didn't even mention it!"
Most terrifying thing ever. A human. Wonder why? I have a few ideas. Probably not right but I never know.
Oh come on Humans cant be that bad!
Msot terrifying thing...a human? Psh pone obviously never heard of the taresque. But really good story so far, it was well written aside from a little awkward word choice here and there.
"took a second to glance over at Spitfire
for a second"
Theres nothing wrong with this technically it just reads a little odd to me. Is the phrase "for a second" really needed here? She is in a race one would asime she did not have time to linger.
4376958 Lets see.....ability to adapt...check.
Ability to make tools for use in daily lives......check
Makers of the gun(which,by the way,has caused mass murder of multiple species,and has committed genocide)....check
Large brains which make humans capable of social interaction,and language?check.
It's all here.Checks out,why humans are the most terrifying.
4377284 Human beings are the only species capable of hunting over long periods of time by tracking and learned knowledge of the land, and if were determined enough, we'll always find what we're looking for.
No matter how far you run, you can never get away.
4377284 yeah that pretty much checks off what made my list. awesome vinyl pic btw
4377247 Yeah, thanks for catching that, actually. I have a tendency to be a bit redundant at times.
4377373 yep
4377734 thanks!I found it on google search,and picked it as my pic :D
Will Rainbow Dash be beating anybody up in this story?
4380382 It's a possibility. You'll just have to wait and see
Uhhh so where is the update? I NEED MOAR STORY
Rainbow Dash lost in an adventure across multiple universes, searching for the way back home? Sounds awesome!
Oh wait, it's just pony + human do nothing again... Aw...
Interesting. After a (very) long while, I've found a decent "human + pony" story to read
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That... isn't... clop.
Not bad. Not bad at all. Dun lemme down bro!! YA HEAR?!
If I saw RD in my front yard, I would do everything in my power not to flip out from excitement. Also great way to wake up. Smoke everywhere. Can't wait for more. :)
4396352 Me too, friend. Me too.
this doesn't feel right... in the first chapter, it seemed as though dash was absolutely terrified of the mythological monster. in the second chapter, she's just kinda shrugs him off. and then she SLEEPS in the Monster's house?? i mean, sure Dash is kinda reckless, but who does that? if you suddenly teleported in front of the boogeyman's house and he tackled you into a tree, would you sleep in his house?
Ah, human cooking... by a human who can't cook, apparently.
(Either that or he fails to clean his heating surfaces regularly. Yes, I know this one from experience too. Don't ask. 
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.... this gives me a bad feeling... I need more info on the events that are transpiring on earth.
4429876 Don't worry man. There's plenty of that to come
I really hope you mean some sort of magic GPS spell at the end there, because if ponies actually have/had a GPS system theeeeennn what the fuckkkkk
Also I've never really been a fan of the whole 'ponies know that humans exist but they're only myth' thing, seems kinda cliche' to me but I haven't really seen anything absolutely horrible yet so I'll stick around for a bit though.
...seriously though, ponies having GPS? Their era of technology isn't anywhere near that advanced in the show and I haven't read anything in this fic that says this takes place in the future sooooooooo what the fuckkkkkk?
What?
So...this GPS uses the moon?From what I understand a GPS(Global Positioning System) is a series of signals made by satellites(satellite:any body orbiting a larger mass) used to locate people...so...it uses the moon. XD
Why is this on hiatus?
4430739 What makes you say that?
5336097 Because at the time I released the last chapter, I was under the impression that nobody was really getting any entertainment from it anymore, and didn't really want to continue with a project that nobody liked. I've since realized that I was overreacting at that time, but by the time I realized this, I had forgotten what I wanted to do with the story. So, to excuse myself for my long leave of absence, I put this story as "On Hiatus" until I can remember what I want to do with the story.
5336109 because I was really confused. First. Dash was kinda out of character running away. Second. I know we humans are crude at some times but geez! He overreacted way to much. It just seemed stupid how oblivious he was to rainbow dash being real. It gave me a headache as I thought about it. This story has a lot of potential but it was taken in the wrong turn.
Man I forgot this story -.- BUT now that I remembered I reread it and very much enjoyed it, a lot of potential. BUT ITS BEEN WHAT???
6445726 Sorry to disappoint you... I got a little confused at some of the responses to the latest chapter I'd written, and thought people didn't like it anymore... by the time my friend told me that he was still interested it, I'd already forgotten where I wanted to go with the story... I do apologize for letting you down, but I really don't know how to continue writing it anymore...
6453100 Its cool man. I do like your writing though so keep it up! Although, I don't really think you should let what other people think affect why you write. You should write because its what you enjoy, its all about having fun. No point in doing something you're not happy with right? And, not everyone's gonna like your writing, don't let them stop you if its what you like to do. Anyway I'll stop it here, Thanks for the reply! :D