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For Lt. Blanco and his company, the mission was suppose to be a simple operation. Drop down on the planet's surface, protect the scientist while he investigates the strange energy signatures, then get out. How was he to expect that he will end up with a first contact situation?
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i kinda like this. but there are SOOO many little spelling and grammar errors that break the immersion. kill them with FIRE!
...er, i mean spell check.
Found one error:
5717434 Thanks for pointing it out.
This is an intriuging story, but there are random present tense verbs breaking up the flow of the narrative - which is in past tense. Fix those, and you'll have fixed about 90% of the errors.
5718224 Thanks, I'll try to edit out the mistakes.
5718211 You're Welcome.
Awesome chapter but found a few errors:
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^May wanna move the " down a bit
^lot of unneeded space there
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Thanks for telling me