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MetalBrony823


A brony that loves Heavy Metal, Africa, Rock, and Animals. Not to mention Ponies too. Fluttershy is best pony! \m/

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A new drone just came in the mail and Gumball Watterson, a troublesome cat boy uses it to take a look at Equestria, only to be causing pranks on the ponies, Twilight Sparkle and her friends try to stop him and things take a turn for a wild ride

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"Rainbow Factory" is in Elmore, so, Nicole is responsible to Scootaloo's death

Nice idea!

Why did you make the synopsis a run-on sentence?

Why didn't you respond to my comment?

10925824 I wanted to make this as public as possible

If you managed to find time for this story, maybe you can find time for ‘A Boy’s Tears 3’

I have been having a debate lately. I can't decide which of these three options to do my next story on. Which one would you pick?

My Little Pony x Bakugan Battle Brawlers (the original Bakugan) (Takes place where a Brawler and his Partner, Leonidas, end up in Equestria)

My Little Pony x The Legend of Zelda Skyward Sword (takes place after Shining Armor kicks Twilight Sparkle out of his wedding)

My Little Pony x Luigi's Mansion 3 (takes place during the first episode of MLP and Luigi's Mansion 3 did not happen)

Outside of the street, the ponies along with the princess have been kicked out of the house with a powerfull kick from nicole in a great anger that throw them away off of Elmore.

"man, i can't believe it" rainbow said before she feel her bones being broken "ouch that hurt" her face was covering of bruises and it was bad enough to proceed any further.

any of the friends have got the same way that Nicole give them.

"ow, my beauty is ruined, i can't stare in a mirror" said Rarity in a dramatic tone.

the two princess got up but their injury avoid them to get up as Luna said "never thought Nicole will do that to us, that was so painful."

"you said it" said Celestia in a moaning tone from her mouth.

"where are our regalia?" Luna noticed their regalia are off of their body.

"probably in the house"

Fluttershy was crying to see her body beaten up badly by a mother who helped his son. Pinkie have two black eye on her and a multiple bruises around her body. Applejack have lost some teeth and with a black eye, her hat was a bit destroyed.

Twilight moaning in pain, her nose bleeding,a black eye, bruises everywhere as she asked Celestia "now...what?"

"this time,she doesn't give us choice anymore," her voice was stern "we're going to take him by force." she said before she fainted

"well, actually it's best if we could see a doctor first" added Luna as she lost some teeth of her mouth.

Okay, I'm sorry. But, what the actual f*** is this author!!!!???? :flutterrage: :twilightangry2: :facehoof:

Why did you do that to the poor ponies like that!? Especially Fluttershy, the heck dude!!?? :flutterrage:


And it also makes no dang sense that every single one of them just lose to her, considering the various MLP villains they defeated in the past.


Nicole should realistically be frickin arrested to Tartarus or turn to stone or banished to the moon or sun for what she did!!!

Or even cause a declaration of war against the town, and everybody will blame Nicole for this!!!


No offense, but did you even second guess before making this terrible part?

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