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This takes place right after the events of Twilight Princess, and the defeat of Ganondorf. A new evil has risen in Hyrule. Once again, Link is going to save Hyrule once again. However, Link is suddenly transported to this new world called "Equestria."and meets colorful ponies.
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need more fast
this is pretty good so far just a couple mistakes here and there, keep up the great work ^_^
oh and one more thing, at the very bottom of the page you spelled ponyville wrong
Changeilngs!
If that's ok with you.
first
So, another joins the fray... As a fellow LoZ crossover writer I can say that this will be pretty good in the future.
lol needs a tad bit of work but I like it ^_^ would figure there to be far more culture shock but oh well lol
Interesting story but I would really recommend getting an editor. Especially if this is one of your first stories or if English isn't your first language. There are multiple wrong words and a few missing ones that make reading a bit harder. Actually some of the mistakes look like they were caused by some kind of auto-correct. Well regardless of the mistakes, the concept is interesting enough for me to track this story. I look forward seeing where you'll take this and following how you improve as a writer. Good luck.
EDIT: Auto-correct mistakes dealt with.
They're obviously changelings. But then again that's likely been revealed already in the next chapter so why am I posting on here? I NEED TO GO READ IT SINCE IT'S ZELDA!
I put out my services as an editor for you.
5648947 Really
, thank you so much!
Will the six and Spike find out about his title. I think it be funny as hell when Twilight and friends find out.
5711420 That one would cause quite hilarious misunderstandings.
Celestial: "So Link do you have any titles we should be aware of?"
Link: "I'm sometimes called The Hero of Twilight."
Twilight blushes deeply and starts stammering incoherently only to be interrupted by snickering Celestial. "My, my, aren't you advancing quickly. When did the two of you get together?" this caused Twilight to blush so deeply that you couldn't even see any purple on her face and got a slight blush from Link.
Twilight: "It's not like that Princess!"
i'm glad you called him the hero of twilight and not the hero of time alot of people do that for some reason...
5711731 perfect
soon...
5711731 umm... about that....er.... um... DEKU NUT! "flash"
5711420 The more important question is when will he turn into his wolf/beast form.
Link: I can also change forms.
*huggles him to death*
Rainbow: Awsome. Can you show us?
Link: I don't know if I should.
Pinkie: Please.
Link: Fine. *transforms in to wolf/beast*
Fluttershy: D'aaaaaaaa
Get an editor ASAP. I really want enjoy this story, but as it is right now I spend about as more time trying to find out what you actually meant than actually reading. More than half the sentences look like they had a meeting with autocorrect wielding lead pipe.
Please, I beg you. Get an editor or at least a proof reader. Your story has such potential but as it is now most of it will be wasted.
Good job! Can't wait to see more funny moments.
This is awesome. You could definitely refine your writing- a good first step is to reread what you've typed to make sure the right words are where you intended- giving the child a head on the horse reads far differently from giving him a hand!
The plot so far is well envisioned and straight forward, and the dialogue and actions feel like they belong in a Zelda game. Your affinity to the series shows, and I look forward to reading more of this story!
You know with Malo I always wondered how he ran a business (I kinda think 6-7 years old)
PLEEZ GIT EN ADETER!
Your talent is being wasted!
5911657 I am so sorry if my writign is... not so good to you, but at least the plot is good, right?
5914237 why do you think I said talent
5819380
Well having the dialog and action similar to the game its about is great but as a result it lacks detail and feeling. Theirs ups and downs but all over I agree with you.
Wow, no offense, but you need an editor.
The spelling errors are off the charts...
Typos, typos, and more typos. But so far, this is pretty decent.
Okay, I like the tale you're telling, but PLEASE get an editor. So many mistakes and typos can be caught just by skimming through. I'd like for this story to get better, but it won't gain much ground with this many mistakes. I could offer to edit/proofread your stories if you'd want, but the most important thing is, this needs fixing, and fast. Again, other than the mistakes, I'm really liking this story so far.
I'm sorry but I must agree with the previous two commenters on you needing an editor. Seriously, I couldn't understand what was going on well enough to read the whole chapter. I like the premise and where you seem to be taking this but the execution is simply leaving far too much to hope for. I think I'll consider reading this again when you get yourself an editor and the story has been edited. Good luck.
You cant give a silent protagonist a voice.
Many have tried and fail before you it doesn't work.
simple as that.
This is good. Keep it up.
FUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU so amazing....
I'm loving every bit of this.
6167845
Me too
I'll be watching
-CactusMan
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OMG LOL! the ad below the chapter was displaying replicas of the ocarina of time. what a coincidence...
OMG ocarina ad again!
Congratulations! You won a prize for best cliffhanger ever!
I'll be waiting
-CactusMan
LINK! don't waste your healing items! use them only when you really need them or you'll run out when you need them the most! we've talked about this before man! ;P
6252406 Well the Hero's Shade is technically the Hero of Time after all. :p
Needs to be edited.
6054118 THERE OVER 9000!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
>>levimos the look on his face tho
Very nice. Glad this story is alive. Keep it up bro.
Great bomb ass story painful to read Yes Author i feel your pain Auto dictionary Sucks Moblin Butt cheese
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Needs an editor still enjoy this story though.
Wonder if it's achangeling or gannondorf is revived
awwwwwwwwwwwwwwww. colin reunited with link. thats so sweeeeeeeeet.
Yes update.
Though I do really like this story, there are still a lot of misspellings and typos. Haven't you find anyone to proof read your work ?