An alcoholic gives up on his 25th birthday and turns into a pony. Now she's just trying to get home.
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Really like the contrast and complementarity in this chapter between the intimate moments, the family time, and the farm-wide party. It's heartwarming to see ponies getting a chance to be themselves again and reigniting Equestria's fire – and they'll need it, for the trials ahead...
I remember you once referred to this story as 'sort of a send off' for the Five Score universe, but as you keep proving chapter after chapter, it is so much more than that. It truly is a love letter, a celebration of the original story and of all the ones that were born in its wake, weaving back together and strengthening the various strands making up this universe to make it truly shine. Oh, and it's pretty fun to catch the references and cameos and little in-jokes, of course!
Been looking forward to having the freetime to finish reading this chapter! Talk about a love letter to the 5/score universe. Linking so many different fics all into one and interacting with them all across the chapter (Not even getting into the duplicates!) must've been quite a monumental task. Was so much fun reading about the derpy conflicts and berry look alikes. Like the "who's on first" slapstick of determining who is who. Another epic and awesome chapter as always and eager for more!
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Thank you for all the lovely comments! It's a pleasure for me to see you've enjoyed my story based on yours.
this is a amazing chapter and as you say there is so much coming together.
i personally helped with 2 of the story's you talked about.
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Thank you for the compliment. I can tell you're well-versed in Five Score and I feel good when you like what I add to it.
I had no idea you were more active in it though! Which two did you help with?
I've been a bit jaded from all the Five Score fics, but I have had this one recommended to me several times, and I like the pace it has thus far.
Props to the author thus far, and I can only hope the rest of the fic is as good at this initial hook!
It’s both incredibly nostalgic and wonderful to see all of these stories that began so many years ago coming together like this in such an incredible manner. I really have to applaud the level of thought and detail that has gone into weaving all of these wonderful stories together, and I can’t wait to see what you have in store next!
I love how you made the crowded farm feel so believable and real. It has its own atmosphere, somewhere between a family reunion and a summer camp! The cooking parties, the campfires, the impromptu singing and storytelling, even a free-for-all soccer match! It made it all come across as somewhere the reader could really envision themselves fitting right in. Very well done ^^
Though the real shout out here is the love letter to all these side fics. The amount of wholesome inclusion given to so many other stories is remarkable. Like, I would know, I tried to do something like this, but my interactions with the side fics was very surface level. It was a little more than "Oh hey Lightning Dust is here, yep she's in a side fic. Anyway, moving on"
Meanwhile. you gave nostalgic deep dives to each of the included characters, and made the whole chapter a joy to read. Way to make my attempt look bad by comparison!
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Gawd, you're right. I was just checking something in this chapter and got caught up and (re?)read the whole thing. It's so gawd damn cozy. Things just keep happening and we're all just enjoying ourselves sitting with Berry and watching with her. I want to live in this chapter. I'm so happy it's here. I remember all the time I spent trying to squeeze as much into this and and using everything I could think of to hide the seams while I move your focus from pony to pony.
I don't remember actually writing it now. Just the effort. I see myself rereading this again just to 'come back here' and enjoy the atmosphere.
It's really a shame that so many of these fics have been left unfinished. I've been tracking Earning Wings for years now.
The atmosphere of the camp is truly something else. As a long time Scouter and camp counselor, the joyful chaos of this setting really strikes a chord with me.
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It's really something special to me. <3 I've read all of those unfinished fics (and a few more) and like you a lot of them left an impression on me and I still think about them. They're not forgotten! In our imagination, where they still live, we've thought about how they would finish: they made it to the farm. Then reunions and happy moments happened again.
For a little while. Until they had to be brave again.