An alcoholic gives up on his 25th birthday and turns into a pony. Now she's just trying to get home.
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Ah, finally got to read this one, and it was another very nice chapter! I really liked your take on the workings of Equestrian magic, it's quite logical and opens fun possibilities!
I just wanted to say I really love your story! I just recently dove into the five score universe and your writing is so real. Keep going!
As someone who took AP music theory there is a lot of potential with frequencies being a function of magic. Lots of cute this chapter, keep up the awesome work!
Oh we don’t need bombs to do that...
I like this. Please don't stop!
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I'm glad you like it!
I promise I'll give it my all! I have no intentions of stopping. I know my updates looked fervent early on and they got slower but I promise that's not a warning sign. We're doing it. Equestria or Bust!
You have a double ‘and’ there
Always interesting to see how different authors interpret how magic functions in this universe. As others have mentioned, your description of its relation to music is interesting and scientific and helps to provide ‘logic’ to your reasoning. Also, I’ll say again that I like how you take your time building up to things in this story, here in relation to the learning of how to use magic. It’s not something that they’re just able to instantly do, and thus, when they do succeed in doing some magic it feels all the the more rewarding.
as someone who has the events of the original fic fresh in memory, keep asking me what's going to happen for Berry to show up in that tired state there