An alcoholic gives up on his 25th birthday and turns into a pony. Now she's just trying to get home.
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... What an incredible rollercoaster of a chapter!
It was quite interesting to have a look into Carrot's thoughts; some things we could guess, but others really help in recontextualizing her words and behaviors.
And then we get to the events that'll change everything..!
The stress, the action, so much tension! I was on the edge of my seat the whole way 'til the end, going from the heartwrenching to glorious hope then back to horror at what our poor ponies are going through! The later scenes were hard to read, just as they were hard to watch for Carrot, but the payoff was so worth it!
They're still far from being out of the woods, so many things left uncertain... And I can't wait to see what will happen next!
Talk about a heart wrenching chapter! From Berry poisoning herself, to their violent capture and very nearly killing someone with a shotgun. Carrot being a hard carry for the pair, then to see Berry seem to fall into a rut then to break out of it only to be poisoned with gas again then not being able to run away... just my poor heart can’t take this! Excited as always for the next chapter, looking for how they get back from this.
I like that we get to see Carrot Top's piint of view, and I see why you did it this way. Very good writing. I felt the humiliatuon and hoplessness of being caged abd leashed. Add to that muzzled. These are not dumb animals, but sentient beings. I wanted to punch the ponynappers somewhere painful. Maybe even mutiple places
I hope we get Berry back. As much as I liked Carrot Top's POV, Berry is the protagonist. I could see the story dhifting to Ruby's POV, and may be Commet Tail's and Minuett's But that may be a little convoluted. I don't know. You are a good writer, and I'm sure you can work it out.
Waiting to see what's going to happen next.
now i want a somepony fic that has a 12 gauge and good aim
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Right? Guns are hard with hooves! Carrot could've blown her own head off if she wasn't careful.
-Death, The Hogfather
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You got me! that movie's morality really resonated with me.