An alcoholic gives up on his 25th birthday and turns into a pony. Now she's just trying to get home.
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May fate smile upon you.
Ah, I've been through spaces where I can relate to that mindstate.
Monica is good people. That's abundently clear throughout this entire chapter, but I like how it shows in more subtle ways like in this bit. Even though she knows his name is Connor and is probably annoyed at Brian for using a nonsense nickname from a drunk session, she still intentionally says 'Comet' here because she wants to provide some much needed levity to a friend that needs it.
I have fewer specific bits for me to comment on in this chapter because of the nature of the conversation, but overall a great chapter that probably hits closer to home for more of the population than we realize. Regardless, great chapter full of efficient character building. Eager to see where it goes from here!
Incredible, absolutely beautiful. Thank you!
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I'm glad you feel that way. I really wanted to address this kind of thing in this story but it needed the appropriate level of care.
how to remember your past life? drink until you drop and don't remember a thing from last night
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Are those lyrics?