An alcoholic gives up on his 25th birthday and turns into a pony. Now she's just trying to get home.
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For May 1st, you give us a chapter that exemplifies so remarkably well what makes the Five Score formula so special!
There's the shared trauma of Discord that plagues their dreams, and is also represented by very physical scars here...
The friends and families torn apart, relationships reshuffled yet still enduring from one world to the next, even in different forms, lives twice broken but also the hope of a brighter future born of a rainbow horizon...
Human memories and pony instincts packed into one mind, an inner chaos of species and gender and age, nature and nurture pushed into conflict like never before...
... All that is Five Score, and all that is in this chapter, in this story, and I love it so darn much for it!
Oh, and that first line? *Chef's kiss*
Finally all caught up with the story. As Alsey already pointed out in her comment, what you’re doing in this chapter is what (great) Five Score do best: combine legitimately entertaining action with wonderfully thought-provoking slice of life that brings with it questions about human (or in this case Pony) nature and how relationships form and interact with one another.
The conversation between Berry and Ruby does this perfectly, bringing up these questions while also adding in a healthy dose of humor too. So thank you for writing this story and including interesting ideas and chapters such as this one!
I’ll look forward to reading the next update to see where this story goes!
Those earth ponies sure recover quick! Glad to see they're both recovering so quickly from the horrible beat down they just got from discord. Really nice chapter to get more of that adorable and delightful mother daughter talk and confirmation on the father or Dad in this case. Nice to know that they got some food going, raw and wild food tends to lack a fair bit of the genetic engineering we commonly associate with common tastes. And the last few paragraphs about Ruby drawing NSFW was delightfully mind twisting to read.
A fun and low stress chapter to help lower the tension of last chapter's intense scenes
Also, the scene with both ponies grazing for the first time and comparing & tasting all the various options at their disposal was really fun! As was the bit with both of them galloping around in the fields to "dry off" (and totally not indulge in horse RP ).
It was a fun, lighthearted chapter to read. Good times!
Ah... this was a nice chapter. No violence, no depression, just some meandering in the wilderness, and honest talks between mother and daughter. Not sure how long this peace will last, so I'm gonna enjoy the quiet while I can.