So the Cromwells survived the apocalypse eh? figures..

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If he wasnt stuck behind a glass barrier when you initially leave, I'd have killed him then too

Will this story have any sex scenes, implied or otherwise, where the woman does most or all of the work?

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Short answer, yes.
Long answer, yes, but it'll be a little while. I'm planning on the story getting slowly more mature (read: violent and raunchy) as the girls explore more of the crapsack world of the capitol wasteland.

As far as sex scenes go, there will definitely be implied ones of several varieties. Explicit scenes depend on whether my readers want that and how well I write them as that's something I've never tried before.

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The who's, is that some big American family or something cause I've never heard of them here.

The girls jumped as a voice called out from a nearby alleyway. A man was standing in the shadows, wearing a smart grey business suit with a fedora and sunglasses.

“Sunset Shimmer I presume?” The man tilted his hat in greeting. “My name is Mr Burke. I have a proposition for you.”

KILL HIM!!! KILL HIM NOW!!!!!

Fun fact: Caps cannot be counterfeited. Which means if you find a bunch lying around, you get free money!

I-In the wasteland, I mean.

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actually, caps can be counterfeited, though its not easy. in New Vegas u can come across a cap counterfeiting operation, complete with a dozen or so counterfeit caps amid a few real ones as well as a Star cap or two...

Clasping his hands together he called out joyfully. “Oh my, but you are clearly blessed by Atom! Dear children, welcome! Welcome to Megaton!” He span around to face his flock again and flung an arm out towards the girls, “Look, my dear brothers and sisters! Look upon these blessed daughters of Atom who stand before us and bask in their glorious presence!”

Not gonna lie this kind of sounds like the whole Goddess and Unity craziness from Fallout Equestria.
Good luck girls!

“Oh sugar honey iced tea.” Applejack breathed.

Nice

“Sunset Shimmer I presume?” The man tilted his hat in greeting. “My name is Mr Burke. I have a proposition for you.”

Enjoyed blowing his head off this last time I played. I'm sad to say the first time I played I unfortunately didn't save the sheriff
In my defense I was fresh from Skyrim and had no idea how the people of the town would react to me just shooting someone.
Now I know!

From the comments, I venture to say that Mr. Burke is a very disagreeable man.

Strangely, in most stories I have read, anyone with the last name Burke, tends to be evil. Anyone else notice that?

Dear Princess Celestia,

Today I learned that when someone approaches you from an alley talking about a proposition, you get the (Eff!)ck outta there!

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The Goddess is a reference to the Master from Fallout, the creator of super mutants. Alicorns are the FoE equivalent to super mutants, and the name of the hivemind is even the same; Unity.

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Dear princess celestia

Since i was youNG i have be taught that violence is never the solution to any problem, BUT GOD DAMN IT FELT GOOD TO BREAK THAT SLIMY ASSHOLES NOSE

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Not really. Quite nice for the most part actually. It's just the only reason he interacts with you is because his employer wants to hire you to blow up Megaton due to it being an eyesore.

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Anyone with just the 'Bur' part, tends to be up to no good, like William Burkin.

Twilight just nodded, quietly munching away on a slice of cake Pinkie had baked a few days before. How it hadn’t gone stale yet Sunset couldn’t guess.

Because everything in Fallout is so full of preservatives!

At the very bottom of the crater, jutting out of a pool of filthy water, was a huge statue of a dropped bomb.

Oh, you sweet, innocent children.

Ok how many people have done the quest Burke gives you

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once on a save just to see what happens..... then i kill him every time after lol

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I don't know... Raymond Burr is a pretty good guy. bonus points to whoever knows who he is.

I loved Applejack's reaction to finding out ot wasn't a statue xD

Does this story just follow fallout 3,having the girls just be doing lots of side quests and such with only lil tidbits of originality? Not saying that's a bad thing,but that's a lil disappointing if so.

“Perhaps I can be of some assistance.” The girls jumped as a voice called out from a nearby alleyway. A man was standing in the shadows, wearing a smart grey business suit along with a fedora and sunglasses. “Sunset Shimmer, I presume?” The man tilted his hat in greeting. “My name is Burke. I have a proposition for you.”

Fudge!

The sheriff turned to walk away, then stopped and called back over his shoulder. “Oh, almost forgot. Watch out for the Church of Atom.”

"Glory be to the Bomb, and to the Holy Fallout. As it was in the beginning, is now, and ever shall be. World without end. Amen."

Man, the crossover just keeps coming. Lol

“Sorry, Mr Moriarty, but I think we’ll find our own way of raising the money you want.”

Or you could just read his mind, Sunset.

Sunset frowned at him. It certainly sounded reasonable, but there was no way Sunset wanted to wait around even a day, let alone a whole week. Not to mention that Moriarty hadn’t mentioned how much he would pay them, or exactly what their work would entail. As she considered, Sunset spotted something out of the corner of her eye. The zombie who had been serving drinks was glancing surreptitiously her way, subtly shaking his head. That was enough for her. “Sorry, Mr Moriarty, but I think we’ll find our own way of raising the money you want.”

He was gonna make them clap for a cap, wasn’t he?

Sunset grimaced at that. “The town would probably survive, but I still wouldn’t want to be standing anywhere near here if that happened.”

Nah, bomb's shell(casing? Whatever it's called) will be damaged and radioactive dust will fly everywhere.

One thing I've never really noticed until I started this story is just how different the spelling can be between British English and American English, u's and s's and z's all doing different things. Definitely glad this site has a spell checker!

Yeah I noticed you seem to use the British spelling alot. Are you perhaps from the UK?

I kind of find it odd that you don't put a period for "Mr." I've gotten used to it by now, but at first I thought it was a typo, but then it just kept happening.

Well! This continues to hold me in rapt attention. I liked the conversation the girls had with the Children of Atom. Seeing Twilight go full egghead mode is always fun. Rarity's responses to the Wasteland continue to amuse me.

Moriarty just frowned at her. “Are you trying to swindle me with fake crap?”

Rarity’s eye twitched as her voice dropped dangerously. “Fake?”

So good! Looking forward to seeing how the girls establish themselves. I did think there'd be a bigger reaction to seeing a ghoul walking around, but I suppose there's still a chance for that if they ever stop to talk to one.