Oh I've got a new chapter in Track- HOLYSHITIT'SALIVE!

Looks like the simulation is starting to break for the Blue Moons! And with Braun and the Boogeyman taking a more active role, I'm getting a bit more tense.

Nice to see the Steelyard. Not sure if we'll be spending any more time in there. Trogs feel a lot more visceral here, nice touch.

What is Pinkie up to now, I wonder? I guess we'll have to wait and see!

Glad to see you getting back to it, I hope things are going well. Mistress RL can be a Bitch.

Anyway, great chapter. You're taking the Op Anchorage dlc in a very interesting direction.

Hope to see more soon.

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you are questioning Pinkie Pie...that way lies only madness...if you get LUCKY!

Wow! This was awesome!

“I got your six.”

At least he was useful in that regard.

She wasn’t remotely attracted to him, he was the wrong gender for a start,

Now we know exactly which way her barn door swings, at least in this story.

Consider your mission authorized.”

I’m almost afraid to wonder what she plans to cook up, though I’m sure it’s for a good cause.

Can’t wait for more!

In an incredible stroke of luck, none of the soldiers were looking towards the tunnel the trio were hiding in. In fact, on a closer look, Luna saw that one of them was walking directly into a wall, his feet sliding across the floor as he walked in place like a buggy NPC in a video game.

I fucking applaud your restraint in waiting so long to make this joke.

great chapter mate keep it up cant wait for the next chapter

Pinkie is going after Diana isn't she?

Dont matter how much power somethings got to alter simulations, if an embedded character has got the capability t start corrupting data flow through localised overload, essentially code hacking like the Mario speed runners, then Sys:Admin themselves are going to battling on the defensive.

AJ should be picking up prybars. Ok, she can bend them easily, but just means she can straighten them back more easily after hitting something they dont go through.

I keep thinking Pinkie is working on something that Liberty Prime is going to Nope over the Horizon to,

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Damn, a few hours after our post, a new chapter gets uploaded

“The only good Commie is a dead Commie,” the soldier replied.

I picture Luna’s response to it may spark a flag war or something

I can’t read this story anymore.

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Why not?

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I lost my interest in this story and subsequently track of what’s going on dozens of chapters ago. I kept reading for a while because of my completionism. But the release of a massive chapter on an already cruddy weekend has finally reached my threshold of what I can take before giving up. This story has gotten way too long. And I’m sick of it randomly popping up to make my days worse. With chapters the size of a novelette that I can’t even just listen to with the read aloud function on my phone. Sure Fimfiction has its own read aloud function. But it’s unreliable and the horrible voices make my ears bleed.

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You know you can just ignore it, right? No-one is forcing you to read it while others will want to continue reading or take their first gander at it. It's not even an inconvenience.

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Yes I know that is why I AM ignoring it from know on. That and because the story has finally beaten my ‘completionism’ which I mentioned in the comment you’re commenting on.

Hold up i have a few thing to say.

1: Is Adam always getting lost a correlation to players always taking their time to loot everything
and go all over the place in search of loot? Is that the joke? Or am i just wrong and you just thought it was funny? If it's just you thinking that was funny, i understand, it is funny, but if it's because of some correlation to the players, then not going to lie, that was smart, and i think i am the only one who managed to see it.

2: This is more of a wish, but, can we see a little bit of Rarity? I mean she is currently in a power armor, i would kinda wish to see her for a bit, stumbling all over the place because she is not used to walking in that thing, and having to use an actual gun to fight because she can't use her power in a power armor.

3: You know, i sure am glad you decided to bring Luna, Sonata and Trixie into this world instead of someone like Celestia or Princess Twilight (PT). Having either of them in the wasteland, i feel like the story would have become something that it shouldn't be. Pretty sure they would try to preach about the magic of friendship and shit, and that is not bad, in a story that actually focuses on that thing, in this story though, no. I am so glad you made the right decision. Can you imagine if PT came and tried to reform Unity and Horrigan? That would have been so bad.

4: God I've waited for so long for a new chapter, i don't mind it, not one bit, but for some reason, it feels like all the writers for the fics i enjoy decided to all take a break on the same time. This one, Cooling Embers and Spectacular Seven, i have nothing to read.

5: This chapter is a good chapter, i can see its a little bit longer, and i do appreciate it. Unfortunately for me, i am a fast reader, so you know, that fucking sucks, but it's good, i did enjoy it, and i do have some questions. Who is this Boogieman? It seems to have a larger plan at play, can't figure it out yet, and i'm 70% sure it is the one who took Unity after her defeat, but i do have a feeling that it will play a bigger role in the future. Second question, is the Boogieman somehow this world version of Discord or something? I feel like he is in some way, all it does, or actually all he did until this point, was to create a little bit of chaos and scare people for fun, something Discord would do. I hope this theory of mine is not true, because it can be used as an easy and lazy way to forward the plot, it's basically a deus x machina.

A little girl, no older than five or six, was sitting on the catwalk outside, calmly swinging her legs over the edge. She was wearing a pretty but old-fashioned dress, and had ribbons tied in her pigtails, but everything about her seemed strangely monochrome. As if sensing that she was being watched, the girl glanced over her shoulder at Luna. The girl smiled and put a finger to her lips. “Don’t dawdle too long, Frau. I don’t like it when things get boring.”

Stainslaus Braun? If what is being described is correct…how is he here?

I’m picturing the Rainbooms playing songs like this once they get back

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nah, the ones who took unity are most likely, and i will say this is a decently big spoiler if you haven't played fallout 3, The Zetans, the people who most likely have the way for the mane 7 to get home, and the stars of the Mothership Zeta DLC. i will say, it's likely going to be towards the end of the story, given the fact that, as mentioned before, the zetans made the tech that would let the girls go home.

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magicky fuckery, i guess? that, or they're fixing the plothole that Braun was a genius, there is no way in hell he wouldn't have a back door SOMEWHERE.

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You mean the fact that their names are the real life names of the voice actors? Yeah, took me a while to get that as well. Don't worry, you are not alone in this one.

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No they're just a cunt.

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Except Pinkie for some reason? Maybe it'll be relevant later

YAYYYYY!!!!! Thank you for putting so much energy into this story, your dedication doesn't go unnoticed :) :)

“Ah’m fine,” Applejack growled as she got painfully to her feet. With a sharp hiss, she yanked a length of rusty wire out of her shoulder and glanced over at the rail cars.

Also, I'm late to the new chapter party but this goes uncommented on? AJ just pulling some rusty metal wire, probably coated with all kinds of Pitt bacteria that could give you some of the worst possible infections, from her body while in a place with some of the worst possible regard for medical care? It's ok, I'll comment on it for all of us: Umm, so this feels like an inconvenient and potentially dangerous injury...

900 likes!

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901 now

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Fluttershy‘s counterpart got dibs on their VA’s name

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Actually, Fluttershy's counterpart is simply named Flutter.

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Oh, my bad. Been a while since I read that chapter

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To be fair; 'Flutter' could just be a nickname, like 'Sunny' and 'Sparkles'.

Meh, we'll find out eventually.

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Fair points. By technicality, Luna is the "responsible adult." However, Sunset has experienced the most, and is more equipped to handle the Wasteland. I will say that the recent combats and the current simulation have forced Luna to adapt quickly, so she could step up in a big way for the Blue Moons.

As for being called by name, that's also a good point. They're not in the halls of Canterlot High, and any former power dynamic has been annihilated in this current situation.

Luna blinked in surprise. “Well, that’s different, still not really helpful though. Or true, for that matter.”

But Luna, teacher unions suuuuuuuuck

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You sound like you don't understand how real life works. Which sucks for you, since the story focus is making the Fallout side of the universe as real as possible.

A quick lay to get dopamine receptors thumping, or alcohol or drugs to dull the senses instead, both are common ways of dealing with stress.

Which given the length of your sperg message about stealing this story to fit your 'I want to fuck Sunset Shimmer' fantasy, well, I'd recommend you find a way to deal with your stresses.

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Oof...buuuuurn... kenjua98 better apply some ointment... or cum, I guess... 🤷

Dunno if this has been answered already but is this exclusively east coast content or will there be crossover with west coast content in the future?

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There is one west coast character who makes an appearance later and another who has been teased, as well as a couple of OC's who originate from the west coast.

Luna glanced at the soldier, debating whether or not it was worth asking him for directions. Somehow, he still had ammunition left, and was still firing away at the pipe. All of a sudden, Luna spotted something falling from the sky out of the corner of her eye. She stared in disbelief as a Chinese soldier dropped out of nowhere and landed with an audible thump on the pipe. He disappeared in a blue flash a second later.

Freaking Bethesda...