A magical malfunction sees the Equestria Girls transported across worlds and dumped in one of the most unforgiving of places... the Capital Wasteland.
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If the guys are in the bildge, they can start from their location and work on repairs outwards as they go? Then fewer checks and fewer resources would be needed?
Great chapter!
So the new temple in Rivet City is primarily dedicated to Applejack? Very interesting. Could this mean a temple meant for each Rainboom will pop up somewhere? Is the one in Megaton for all of them? If not, I’d guess it’s for Rarity given it has a shrine of generosity.
So Fluttershy, who’s developed vampire/elf/bat traits is now dating a guy who’s developed ant traits? Not the weirdest thing to happen so far. I’m hoping some bony growths that might look like some cool crocodile scars are the extent of Adam’s new mutations, though. Growing antennae, mandibles and extra legs would likely freak some people out.
Now let’s talk about this little bit of spice. I think you’re a little too hard on yourself by calling it smut. It’s wholesome, tasteful and not over lascivious at all, if a bit lacking in some finer details. It’s kind of a shame they didn’t go any further than they did, but, hey, they’re both new to this sort of thing and there’s always next time. I can only imagine how their friends will react when they find out.
Keep up the good work!
oh my
Good idea with the "Spice Scene" thing, but I think you need to make it more visible as it's not that visible. A reader might miss it and conintue reading without any thought of what might happen. Just a warning.
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I've put it in bold to try and make it more obvious
Did Sunset just use the word "mansplaning" unironically? Eww. I think I need a shower.
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Those changes are already more drastic than they are in game, so I doubt the mutations are going to go any further. And what I mean by "in game" is that those mutations are actually a canon quest reward in Fallout 3.
Glad that things are going so well in all regards, the temple people are being reasonable and their leader got a good amount of common sense in him too.
Flutter and Adam got to have a close moment with one another in peace, and it is sure to boost their confidence with one another as well! Just uhh flutters keep an eye on the guy, if he can get more perks like we can in game. You wanna make sure he can't go BOOM once he gets hurt too much, that was such an odd perk...
Spicy? No.
Hot and tender romance? Yes.
Little light of a chapter, besides that and a little trepidation brought on by that it's pretty good.
The image of Fluttershy calling someone a dumbass is just hysterical lol.
Rarity is going to go apoplectic when she learns about this. She will demand all the details.
So it's sounding like I was on the right track thinking the other girls don't know what Unity tried to do with AJ and Rarity. Aye, aye, aye. Is it bad I'm looking forward to it coming out and them all getting even angrier at Unity?
They were powerful before they came to this world, but I feel like being here has given them a different kind of power and in some ways, more confidence in certain areas too (and less in others too). Good examples of this are their reactions to threats against them and danger, like how in the beginning they kind of froze up or backed away, feeling powerless because they didn't have the proper resources to fight it, but now when something happens, they're more confident in their reactions that they can rely on them, which is what has let them survive this long. I think it's really cool watching that growth and their reactions to things now, even though they are still scared, stressed and unhealthily way out of their depth.
They finally gotten intimate together! Kudos!
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With all the trauma they’re dealing with already, more anger would be counterproductive, especially since the object of their anger is dead (as far as they’re aware).
It just occurred to me. Is the magic confined to the Capital Wasteland or are Ceaser and House currently experimenting with their new geodes?
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Mmm I agree, it definitely wouldn't help any of them... however, it would help me and my "oh my god, imagine what that scene would look like, I bet it would be filled with angst, drama and a seasoning of ahhhh... and of course character development". Haha, perhaps a bit selfish of me, but I would still love to see how it would play out and what would come from it
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I guess I can understand that.
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Good question! There’s still many far-reaching consequences to magic appearing in the Capital Wasteland we can’t even begin to predict!
Well damn! Looks like I forgot about this part of the ShyWanderer romance! You go, Fluttershy!
fluttershy + adam is great, theyre adorable. muchhhhh better than the awfulness that was sunset's trauma sex from last time.