A magical malfunction sees the Equestria Girls transported across worlds and dumped in one of the most unforgiving of places... the Capital Wasteland.
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Damn!!
This was a somewhat short chapter, but there are some certainly interesting things happening. Neat way using Adam to show how players may go about in the game when facing enemies. I think we all just end up shooting up raider bases on sight.
Maddy almost sounds familiar, but I'm might be thinking of something else.
Look forward to the continuation.
welp that got dark fast
That moment when you realize that your mortality is catching up with you.
When Fluttershy went to huge that girl a part of me was wondering if she was going to get a knife in the side for it as if she keeps that up one day that would happen to her. It did give a bit more complicated to the whole good vs evil as she was a raider that most likely took part in some dark stuff but she was pretty much defenseless.
I've been wondering about the stimpacks, in the game they seem to heal everything up to broken bones and your limbs pretty much useless but can't heal internal injuries but I guess if they were a miracle cure all it would have to have limits in real life. Although stimpacks don't get rid of pain, that's Med-X you're thinking of that actually does that and like in real life painkillers are one of the addictive chems.
So at this point they most likely are going to have to make a stretcher from all the parts left in the raider camp and carry her to Rivet City although with her down I hope we see the girls start to have to make for some tough choices. Plus Rivet City would be the only place where they go do any surgery. Which I bet they'll have to do some work to help pay it off and Sunset would be laid up for a bit forced to recover. Maybe it will be the point where the girls realize they got to be a bit more careful, get some better protection and stuff since I don't know if they'll run into Adam at that point as he most likely will be trying to find clues to where his dad went after Rivet City or not. If they miss him there the only way to track him down would be to listen to Three Dogs announcements.
Why does Twilight have wings and Sunset don't? Both got Alicorn forms in friendship games, didn't they?
You know, I would feel considerably sadder if that wasn't her stubbornness fault. She has a deadly injury and has been informed of it, "but no we need to go fast let's risk death due to my insecurity issues!!". The girls continuing even knowing about it is just as absurd.
I still love the story, but I can't see this as the dramatic scene it should be, sorry. They never were in a dangerous enough situation that not staying put until she got better was ever needed
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Yeah with the new little raider character I was hoping to make things a little less black and white.
As for the stimpaks I kinda see them as being a general emergency item that helps with clotting, accelerates the body's natural healing, helps perk you up and has a mild anaesthetic effect. Med-x I see as being more like morphine, much more effective as a painkiller but very addictive.
As for the rest, you'll have to wait and see...
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Sunset got wings from Twilight's device, but she was still a unicorn when she returned to Equestria in Forgotten Friendship, so I went with no wings.
You're absolutely right that Sunset is a victim of her own stubbornness here, but the girls have been focused on getting home asap. This visit to dc is where that bites the group in the ass. HARD. All that remains is to see just how much this lesson is going to cost them
gave s quick
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Damn, you get so much into so little.
(That's what she said)
Great one again!⭐
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They'll feel horrible for it, that's for sure. All of them are to blame, but letting your mortally wounded friend risk her life because you're focused on going home is horrible friendship.
At least Rainbow can just superspeed airlift Sunset to the next city. Considering how bad she seems to be jostling up is not as bad as taking longer, it seems.
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Nice catch on those, I'll fix them as soon as I get to my PC! That's what I get for only proofreading the chapter once
Edit: Fixed!
So much into so little...
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Horrible friendship indeed...
I would be more simpathetic to the raider f it wasn't for the fact that the crew probably took her in because she was useful and they would not have cared if they had killed adam.
She is bitching about their victim not just letting them kill them.
The raider was like a bully who was upset that someone stopped them from bullying.
Raiders are the lazy fuckers who just want to take things from innocent victims.
Yeah rainbow would probably kill sunset.
Her magic may protect her from the force of her speed but not her passangers.
The kid was probably in the crew to make any people that would go against them hesitate and then die.
She was just a tool.
As soon as I found out the meaning of hypovolemia, I had a bad feeling about this.
Well, Sunset is still conscious and talking, so she's not too far gone. Let's just hope she doesn't start going into hypovolemic shock, (the term haemorrhagic shock might be more familiar). That'll be really serious, though it was serious by the point she got hypovolemia.
But hey, at least Susnet definitely won't exsanguinate, right?
P.S. It was really lucky that Fluttershy just so happened to have a blood pack on hand.
I wonder if Fluttershy’s going to kill someone eventually. If she does, it’s going to be an exciting chapter THATS for sure.
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One of the things she made sure to stock up on before leaving Megaton was a spare blood pack of the right type for each of the girls, that's partly why they have no caps left
As for the rest...
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If only rthey had healing magic...
I'm sure Equestria has something – potion or spell – that can stop internal bleeding.
Just found this and binged all of it. Really enjoying it so far. Kind of interesting seeing the Fallout universe with the lethality of everything cranked up to realistic levels (scarring, what would be nearly insignificant flesh wounds in-game taking days to recover from, etc.) and the significantly lower effectiveness of stimpaks. At this rate they'll be lucky to make it back home, and if they do then they'll all be very different from how they left it (PTSD for sure, along with all the physical damage they've taken, different view of the world, and maybe even some mutations in the future). Twilight's telekinesis could be critical at a certain point if they catch up in time.
Can't wait to find out what happens next.
There's so much cool, disturbing, and interesting stuff to find in the wasteland, but right now they don't have any reason to go looking for it. There are the other Vaults and the craziness that took place in all of them (Gary, anyone? ), Harold in Oasis, and the list just goes on and on of things that actually are in the game, nevermind the possibilities the setting presents.
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First of all thank you so much! I'm glad you're enjoying the story and I hope I can keep it up to your standards!
The girls may not have a reason to go exploring the wasteland just yet, but to be fair the Rainbooms are something of a weirdness magnet...
I knew it! I knew her contusion was going to worsen, and yet I still quivered!
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It is still black and white. The girl was just a tool that the raiders found would be useful and is to dumb to realise that they are just using her.
Yea, saw the kidney becoming an issue all the way back in megaton, and confirmed it the first time she mentioned being unusually thirsty.
Clocks ticking girls.
Huh, finally got a chance to talk things out with raider. One thing FO4 did much better then 3 was show that the raiders are people too, just trying to survive int heir own. Of course the fact they prefer to rape, pillage, and burn (in any combination and order) makes peaceful coexistence difficult.
Yes you are, and we'd greatly prefer it if you stopped doing that right this instant young lady.
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you get a 7th thumb up for that last line bub, XD
I quite like this story's tendency of showing the Lone Wanderer's actions and the devastation he tends to leave behind as he blazes through the Wasteland. Looking forward to them eventually meeting up with each other.
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Twilight also didn't have wings when she went through the portal, but that's just Hasbro's merchandising.
PS: I'm not gonna lie, when Fluttershy pulled out the blood pack my first thought was "cut open that raider, take her kidney and give it to Sunset