Wandering Sunrise remembers Equestria as it once was: a land of harmony, broken by strife. She was sealed in a Stable-Tec stasis pod the day the Megaspells hit... and she wakes up in a pool of water, surrounded by strangers.
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Thanks for catching the error and I thought the comparison to LittlePip too till later when they really start to drift apart as LittlePip accepts quite a few things and Sunrise won't have any of it.
Can I ask you to lean on that dark shadowy Chifundo you talked about in the early chapters a little more, I kind of like the contrast between that and his friendliness. also DM you on discord with a few bits I picked out on listening with the text to speach
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I will try to put him in a bit more, bring that contrast back where he is happy go lucky and dark at the same time.
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I was thinking the visually dark, when you talk about the shadows around him
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Oh you want those to return ;) They do. With a VENGEANCE!
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yeah that contrast between his appearance and his personality is fun and interesting I think
I like the look we are getting in Sunrise mind. We do not see that in game so make the story seem more flushed out.
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It's part of the Easter Egg of reading the other part is the memory orb events due to how messed up her mind has become after 180 years.
Digging the new artwork.
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Glad you are, there is some updated artwork coming for chapters 1 and 8.
Plus with it makes the story in its own way and I wonder how long are you going to run out of Coffee even how you Crash without having it. But that's in the later Future and if not sooner, up for the DM to Make OR Break you.
Huh, burning down the farmhouse sounds like something a friend of mine would do in our bi-weekly dnd session. Eh. A somber mood for a somber chapter...but no matter how dark things get, there's always a light! Ya just gotta look hard enough for it! Or...that's what Blade would say.
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Look hard enough for it or in this case make the light yourself with fire and a farmhouse.
I think i found a mistake:
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Fixed it wow that was one of the most minor subtle ones we've seen.
It might be just me but i remember Nyota having only one eye :
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That was actually a missing sentence.
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Do you mind clarifying i didn't quite understand , did you mean to say you removed or changed the whole sentence .. ???
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How it reads now:
I gently poked the gray and black zebra. His eyes snapped open, Yes I said eyes because I swear there is something behind that eye patch. You can't see it but you certain can sense it. He was on his hooves in a split second. I fell onto my flanks and opened my mouth to yelp when Nyota's hoof snapped out to keep my lips closed and he shook his head very slowly side to side. I followed his other hoof to where he was pointing at the sleeping former slaves.
For some reason when the automated voice gets to the quoted part that reads "Sunrise, wait till they get a little closer and then light-" it reads the last part as "light dash" instead of just stopping there like it was clearly meant to do. I don't think it was meant to read the - as "dash" like that
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I think that is a defect of it's programming and it doens't know how to do a proper cut off.
Another great chapter! The shock of mercy shown in the horror filled wasteland make Sunrise the Earth pony equivalent to a degree to Twilight Sparkle. Keep it up!
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Did you just compare my OC to twilight.... dammit she can't even escape me after she is dead.
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Yes, as she has that whole trying to make friends and improve things vibe going on. But she is so different than the purply alicorn, can't wait to find out why she is green.
This is at least the second time where Sunrise is directly affecting the souls of others. First Buddy, now Nuka. I wonder if it's related to Pink, Stable 43 or some other origin entirely.
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Omg someone is starting to put the dots in a row.
I love the story so far! I mean, I’m a sucker for fallout equestria stories. ^w^
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That's not a bad thing and I'm glad you are enjoying it so far!
Losing a Friend is Never easy. But he will always be in your Heart, Sunrise
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Oddly enough in a later chapter, we get a very dark momento.
Now better way to establish a strong bound between you and your friends that point guns at each other. Good thing nopony/-griffion or –zebra lot his/her nerve.
Sunrise reaction her, really fits with her behavior in the flashback where she asked her father if they could remove the Anti-Zebra propaganda because of the Zebra employees. She’s a very empathic mare. And ironically now Pinkie, the Pony responsible for the propaganda and whose stare made her feel uneven, is now stuck inside her head.
Great social skills! It’s not like Mauve voluntarily participated in their ambushes. It’s was probably a choice between being their bait or get chopped to pieces and eaten. All his refuels would’ve accomplished, was him dying a pointless death and the Raiders simply using another prisoners for their trap.
In situations like these, being a shaman and able to talk with your departed friends must be a great relief.
In other situations is probably a walking nightmare.
Crystal Ponies. Always nice to see some Past-Season 2 races in Fallout Equestria.
The black Crystals make it clear that this vision took place the during being of Sombra’s attack. Presumably the one that resulted in the Empire being sealed away for thousand years. It’s unlikely that this was just a random weird dream. So the big question is: How is the connected to the plot.
Pinkie gave her that Cutie Mark? That’s… worrisome. But it explains a lot.
You have now idea. The more pragmatic and reasonable ones may just enslave you the crazier ones… well rape and murder it is.
So the group is just back at the same place they’ve started one chapter earlier. Talking about not making much progress. On the bright side, there are now fewer evil bastards in the wasteland and they saved a couple off lives.
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You're going to be surprised how much further they actually progressed ;)
Those memory orb-like dreams are the way of unveiling information. Tied to the character and broad in information range, very clever.