Wandering Sunrise remembers Equestria as it once was: a land of harmony, broken by strife. She was sealed in a Stable-Tec stasis pod the day the Megaspells hit... and she wakes up in a pool of water, surrounded by strangers.
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>Cloud Piston
I am an idiot. A fugitive never uses a real name...
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Oh my!
And I think that you made one of the twins blue.
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Fixed! Thank you Shadow!
Oh this is good, and teasy! Left wanting even more!
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That is exactly why we cut it where we did!
Thanks for the new chapter! Cliffhanger! Well done!
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I'm glad I could leave you satisfied but wanting more!
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Altruth Piston's colours are wrong. Mint green coat and steel grey mane.
For most of the chapter I thought Pinkie is prepairing Sunrise as some sort of new body to be reborn further down the line. I mean knocking at her door made me litterally think of sealing demonic pacts. Plus, I purposefully ommitted her story arcs during the streams. Yes, sleeping through them was on Purpose! for the most part...
Opium's a hell of a drug.
And we get answers! Kinda sorta. More questions though.
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You'll get more answers next chapter but also a lot more questions.
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So you say but I don't believe you!
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I have read so many stories that lack true character development Sunrise for instance is an interesting character confused at times not sure what's happened to her or her parents. Looking for answers her tail seems to have a mind of its own she is good with explosives and can fix old equipment because of what we know about her backstory so far and her father. I look forward to seeing how she handles the wasteland.
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Oh the character development you are in for is gonna drive you down a wild ride then!
congratz on making the front page. Now we got to the end of the fight and poor Sunrise is hurt bad. Great place to leave it off as a cliff hanger. keep them coming Fi maybe just a bit faster.
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I just hope you're going somewhere with this.
Objective Winner clears the stage.
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We totally are ;)
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Glad you are still enjoying it sir and yes, I guess I have to further admit this isn't totally bad.
I hit the end of the chapters you had written and the emotional blue balling of not getting to binge read more of this story hit like the alcohol that sunrise needs more of. Damn authors and their compelling stories tugging at my heart strings
Nice, liked and followed.
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Chapter 20 is already written, Props is editing it now; so yell at him not me for why it isn't up yet ;)
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Sweet!
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just post it in it's unedited glory and give it the tag (RAW) until the edited/ reviewed version replaces it. Just an idea. Plus then all your readers can peer review it too.
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Fucking hell. Good job with the chapter but fucking hell.
Celestia's bright burning backside Fi, it gets better with every chapter, I especially loved the presurgery and conversation with Pinkie.
Time for edits then?
Hot Cross Buns hovered there for her to get a good look at him. He smiled nervously, then Sparrow was on him in the hardest hugI'd ever seen.
Even if Alguacil didn't want to admit it, I doubted another slash of that rainbow glowing knife would have finished him off.
-Right now it reads like Alguacil would have survived.
I tried to up, forming all the willpower I had left.
-I tried to stand up?
reached for Nyota,who
-space between the comma and Who
*She turned in a way I
-what's with the asterisk?
Keep up the good work to both you and Props! I can't wait for 20!
Ps: congratz on making the front page, finally going to admit you're a good writer?
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I did in a blog post, guess you want me to admit it in a video? Also thanks for the spot check.
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Welcome to Sunrise's life!
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Yeah but now we get put on the front page everytime I post a chapter and the RAW looks nothing like the finished product, considering the finished one is like draft 5 and had 5 pages ripped out then 8 added back in.
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Shit poor sunrise she'll definitely need a hug and snu snu after this well after she heals that is lol
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You'll find out decisions get made while she is under for surgery; decisions that change the course of the story.
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Ohhhhhhh the plot thickens.
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Ah, true. Completely forgot how bad drawing too much attention in the Wasteland could be.
Also having an engine you know won't crap out on you at the worst time.
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or with how often things explode around us?
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awww damn would be cool if you put the riped pages somewhere like a deleted scenes collection.
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I have considered this, eventually.
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Ah, gotta love the blend of Fo3 and NV in FO:E
i.imgflip.com/1ta97u.jpg
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Calm the Calamity that is your... oh new chapter up.
Sometimes during these combat encounters I wonder if your DM hates you. But let's face it: anything less challenging would be boring.
...This is a story based on a tabletop game and I'm not just embarrassing myself with what seems to be strange DnD metaphors, right?
Christ, I figured shit was going to go down, but when Pinkie dropped that bombshell?!
Also, I'm in the middle of rereading the original FoE, and I thought that Pinkie originally died in a balefire bomb in Manehattan, not the Pink Cloud (although, the irony of that would've been better).
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I know right? I had to look up where and how she died and went: "Holy FUCK!" then relay it here with a bombshell directly at our characters.
That picture is just gold! Better Watch out for Blackjack.
Overall, i'm surprised love poison still exists and how Calm Sunrise reacts to...you know, for her Age
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I actually make those bottles for people.
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HEY I HAVE ONE OF THOSE
from Cyderfest.
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Awww :) thank you.
Insert Simon and Garfunkel reference here.
So Sunrise has died 27 times? Only way I can think of coming back from that is being cloned. And suddenly I think of that 2000 movie The 6th Day starring Arnold Schwarzenegger. It sort of explains why Sunrise has an odd fur coat color now...
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Oh no it's so much worse than that.
I'm assuming a typo abd not a secret three way marriage.
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???