Wandering Sunrise remembers Equestria as it once was: a land of harmony, broken by strife. She was sealed in a Stable-Tec stasis pod the day the Megaspells hit... and she wakes up in a pool of water, surrounded by strangers.
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Pretty solid chapter, and you made me go and boot up the season 2 trailer to listen to while proofing! Also heads up, you misspelled “hints” in the author’s note
To be honest, this got confusing really fast. Still, great job, as always!
And, someting I noticed
Where is her speaking line suppose to end?
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Fixed!
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What got confusing about it?
I see you were playing wasteland 3
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Well, like with Sunrise at the hospital scene, I wondered what was going on. But nice to see the 2 pics finally in the story
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Oddly enough this note was written in March 2019 when we were planning this chapter out. Before Wasteland 3 was a twinkle in anyone's eye.
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If you read it, you should see that she is on a ship and there are all sorts of hints as to what is going on.
The Enclave has her if you read what her mother said.
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Of course, I did, it was just pink taking over and Sunrose seeing her "former self" that caught me a bit off guard
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OH! Well that isn't her former self, but we're gonna find out what that actually is next chapter. As I've been hinting at it in the background over and over again.
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Of course. Franky, I find the green "post" coat suits her beter than the white "pre" war coaz
How did the Enclave get their hooves on Sunrise???
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Oh boy! So that is gonna be fun to explain in a couple of chapters!
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Because everything Pre-War is not always the best thing.
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Yep.
Why you think I gave her the green coat in my camo? Not only because I think she looks better, but also as I feared people wouldn't recognize her with her pre-war apperence
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I fear if I made her full pre-war appearance present, people would be speechless.
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I hear ya.
Well... that was a lot to take in... So, when is this blue-furred cunt going to die?
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You assume it is that easy! *CACKLES!* PS Live Stream Game Tonight.
I once use to think my mom was bad, but after seeing what Sunrise's mom did to her... I am seriously going to give my mom another chance.
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Naaa, bad is bad.
No reason to give them another chance.
Just different kinds of bad.
Well, that was a mindbuck. Anyways, that was an awesome chapter!
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Just a slight, smidgen of a MINDBUCK there don't worry; it's going to get more trippy before you see which way is up.
"We just "have " this tank......
HI! Late to the party as usual....
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I mean we all are glad to be late to some parties, like our own funeral party ;)
Holy smoking plot twist (and I don't mean anything to do with Sunrise's backside)! This is a whole new road to travel. On that note...no further corrections to be made. This reading flowed really well. Battle sequences were well done (not like the 40K drawn out drivel that does viscera for word count and gore's sake). From the moment she went through South Shore's doors to the last point when you are questioning colors, it reads like a gun shot! See you soon!
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Well then I suppose I did my job very very well.
I really need to continue reading this and finish the streams lol. I'm still on the last one a commented on fi lol.
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You should, especially since it's being printed as a book.
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I guess my comment last year about always being hear always watching was full of crap huh fi.
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Doesn't mean you can't make up for lost time and act like no time has really passed.
So if you buy the full set, for 134 bucks, is that only volume three, and is volume three going to be the last volume, or will there be more books?
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Right now the full set is books 1, 2, and a Pre-Order for 3. So you get all 3.
No, Book 3 is not intended to be the last one but we're going to see how things work out in 2021.
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Cool, is this going to be fallout equestria big or project horizons big, or in the middle with a murky number seven big?
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It will be finished when it is done. I have a plan and an outline. That is what I have to go on from there.
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Well either way I will be amused, your allredy about 700 pages short of the og fallout equestria.
Not going to lie, i would be more amused if it was less then murky, cuz then order them by page count, and they would be like a graph. ^_^
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Actually the current page count is over 700 for the three books.
But yeah I don't know honestly where it will finish.
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Using a word calculator, matching the font size to my printed copy of fallout equstira, the best I was able to get, to get to match was only 10 pages off. After I was happy with that, I plugged in your page count.
Witch is 1425 pages, plus the ten pages I was missing.
Oh and her book was only 620,295 words long vs your 534,237
and yes my last page count was off, I should of used kkats book as a reference, I mean I used the font size, but they did not have the font type, so that mattered, to even get it close I had to use 1.5 spacing and open sans.
I dont understand why I found this fun, but it is a interesting fact at the very least.
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ummm so my books are printed using European Trade Standard which is 8.5 x 5.5 page size at 11pt font
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Eh sorta not the point. The running gage in my head is more about who has the bigger book at the table, and how all the tools measure up to show a ladder of sorts of, "oh my god why are these books so big."
Also find it amazing that your only like 100.0000 words or so short of kkats. This will be fun. Nothing like almost a thousand pages to get lost in for a week or two.