Wandering Sunrise remembers Equestria as it once was: a land of harmony, broken by strife. She was sealed in a Stable-Tec stasis pod the day the Megaspells hit... and she wakes up in a pool of water, surrounded by strangers.
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Still looking good
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Not as good as it can be, go back and read the new version of chapter one, see if you see the difference.
the TTS dose not like some words like feral. and some names sound fine. But come out sounding odd in the story. like Hot Cross Buns. it not that the TTS said it wrong. I am just not use to that as a name. :) Out side of a few TTS things. The writing and editing is getting better.
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I am glad it is getting better and I did not realize the TTS did not like the word feral.
This is a taught episode, rad poisoning, and such a horrible memory! Ministry of Morale is Evurl!
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They only get worse from here on out!
How long before she becomes a alicorn... and no i don't want her to stay one i just want to see more of her panic when she lifts off the ground
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probably never and yeah that would be her, panicking as she is picked up.
No ones quesioning how a tails able to hold a gun?
Tails dont have muscles so it cant move other than the bone and mussle the tail is attached to
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It's reference to Pinkie Pie hair gags from the show, probably.
In non-gag terms, the Mane-iac from Season 4 had magical, prehensile hair.
In terms of people ignoring it, Sunrise questioned it several times before resigning herself to just having a prehensile tail with a mind of it's own.
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You'll also notice her early perk is Tail Trick.
Some days I feel like Boxpone.
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Ya know I can see that.
Poor Sunrise
Interesting how Corners is a blank, but exhibits a fair amount of intelligence and cognitive speech. It’s also funny how she has machine guns in her box that pop out the sides like the various vehicle weapons from Twisted Metal.
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She isn't a blank oddly enough but you won't find out what she really is till later.
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reminds me of one fan-story where Twilight talked about a strange kind of magic for making hair and tails behave in strange ways.
Rainbow Dash apparently had a talent for that...like when she makes her hair look like Twilight's:
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I will show how the tail is holding guns soon enough.
Up until this point I didn't know I cared for Sunrise so much. The story is simple and linear, characters - weird. There is a ton of grammatical errors throughout. I thought I was just reading it for the sake of it. Sunrise's backstory is carrying the whole story ten times over. It might be my vulnerability to such scenes, but getting through the memory of her being tortured took me half an hour. Every second sentence I'd get overwhelmed with emotions and had to come down, shaking into the sofa with my hands over my head, breathing aggressively.
I know that if I wasn't invested, I wouldn't care. Last book I read, the last third, about 30k words, was the main character getting tortured way worse than this. But I didn't care for him, so I had no difficulty going through it.
How am I invested more in a pony in a fallout setting, based on a D&D game more than a human in a futuristic dystopia. HOW? I've gone through Murky Number Seven, it is my favorite fic. The harsh, brutal world of fallout is what I seek in these stories...
What is wrong with me?