Wandering Sunrise remembers Equestria as it once was: a land of harmony, broken by strife. She was sealed in a Stable-Tec stasis pod the day the Megaspells hit... and she wakes up in a pool of water, surrounded by strangers.
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Just kiss!
9463073
best line of the chapter.
Why am I thinking of Ronny Graham's line at the end of the wedding ceremony in Spaceballs?
And the party makes more contacts/leads and opportunities
9463446
What line is that?
9463493
They're working on it!
9464098
The line when he snaps, "Good! You're married! KISS HER!"
9464505
The tail was actually given to me by the GM and I like it, means she can hold a gun without magic and not occupy her mouth.
Thank you what questions do you have?
9464655
I meant the questions she has, like her age and such
9464720
Oh Boy! You are not ready for where this train leads, jump on and get ready for the roller coaster.
9464896
Will be interesting for sure. I also hope my PM answered your question.
9464902
I saw, neat thought.
9465292
Thank you, though you could have said it in the pm. As i said, your Choice if you like to Read it, the title is Freedoms Call. There will be also a "Alternative" Ending i have planned.
9466395
I know, I just like how she is still using Bucl instead of the other word, like she's subconscious ware the F word is worse than using Buck.
Also if you don't mind m saying, your story reminds me of a similar Idea I had once before scraping it.
9466401
How deep are you? Because you'll go through and see she lacks using curse words for a while, a very long while.
9466473
fourth chapter, I try to read two chapters per day due to the length. I just found it very interesting how she is "classic" on cursing, as I try not to curse myself. The mentioning of my old idea, sorry, old habit, but feel free to ask if you want to know what I had in mind.
Also, why I Mentioned Pupysmiles, she's prewar just like Sunrise, so I guess the two meeting could b interesting
But "too" for Nyota ...or .....but for Nyota (either an extra to or lose it altogether) this is just an opinion...So far so good!
Very well done! Enjoying your work. Now for God's sakes get those two a room!
9468588
It was just an extra TO hopefully this one was better proof read than the previous one.
9468566
Me too
9469691
Okay.
9471497
Then cut all of them!
9474893
Yeah, it's just an interesting question, given they don't care for those born in the wasteland, know what I mean?
9474894
develop, autocorrection
9474895
Yeah, just thinking out loud, given it's set before Littlepip. But as I said before, Sunrise meeting Puppysmiles could also be interesting
9478576
Great idea! Still, better watch out for Blackjack, you know why.
9478577
Yes.
Don't want to bother, did you get the last PM I sent you?
9478582
I did I've just been swamped with book edits and did 15K words yesterday for new chapter and book.
9478716
I see. Sorry, old habit of me to be sure
9481039
I know, i meant Sex in that regard.
9481272
Ah I see.
9482298
Good idea.
Sadly can't see this one picture either, but I loved the dance! I think the two, together with Nugget and Quick Stich are some of my new favorite fan characters. Great work!
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Site says pictures unavailable for a while.
9485623
Ah, okay. Still, I love the devolvement of Sunrise and Nyota, keep up the good work!
9485623
Now I can finally see the fanart, they look all great. I love the pain scale, saw it before
Nyota is a STARKATTORI?!!!!!
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Yes, why did you think he had the curved stripes and weird eye?
I should not be surprised but in Project Horizons, they were shown in a different light if you know what I mean
What tribe is chifundo?
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That is revealed later and as for the light they were given then; it's portrayed here as lost in myth and legend and how the tribe today is nothing like it was when they were ostracized only for the tribe to still be given a stigma that is over 200 years old.
I don't have much to say for a chapter that does so little. I don't know why you decided to make Sparrow a dick ever since Wandering stood up for Jackal. She saved your husband for Celestia's sake. And given you a daughter! I don't get that decision.
Meh chapter has meh mistakes that don't even stand out. Way to turn a compliment on its head, huh? Have this and see you next chapter.