Wandering Sunrise remembers Equestria as it once was: a land of harmony, broken by strife. She was sealed in a Stable-Tec stasis pod the day the Megaspells hit... and she wakes up in a pool of water, surrounded by strangers.
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damn that was a long chapter. really liking seeing how event affect sunrise
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Didn't really have a good place to split it and thank you I'm glad you enjoy this one.
I like how you are putting the Level Progression as well as the new Trait at the end. It also seem to me that Sunrise get along batter with Ghouls then her friends. Even if it make her sick to be around them.
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Oddly enough yes, but then again I think the ghouls are just happy to have someone friendly.
At most, it is a tale of What the Hell and still Danger may be Around, but great for making less Enemies and more Friends when one's Questions need more Detail to explain it.
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I am so very confused by this comment, explain!
Another day, another chapter. I swear Sunrise reminds me more of Littlepip every chapter...
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You say that now, but they start to have REAL extreme differences soon.
Good info in flashbacks as part of this chapter. Liked the way the lewd ghoul was being around sunrise to creep her out, I mean seriously, who would want to be molested by a undead looking critter?
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Sweet and the lewd ghoul is even worse now.
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I was thinking Blackjack myself i mean you have to shot somepony to be their friend lol
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Because we like this plan?
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Necrophiliacs? ;D
If Sunrise doesn't get a stronger stomach soon she's going to waste away to nothing!
Ok, so after a few chapters I have to say that you've set the hook in my brain. Most other FoE fics seem to be more focused on an end goal, and have small snippets of side stories along the way. This one has established mystery from the very beginning by dropping in unexplainable things on Sunrise that I'm dying to find out more about.
The mysterious prehensile tale, and the voice in her head just screams Pinkie to me, but I'm not sure how. The flashbacks to her family are intriguing as well, and I wonder how the memory loss and cutie mark came about. Questions questions!
Additionally, I like the side character OCs enough to actually remember which one is which, something that I haven't always had with these type of fics.
The action scenes are descriptive enough to where I don't lose track of the geography of the scene, and the imagry has some original elements that don't seem cookie-cutter.
So far so good, I'll definitely be following this one. Cheers!
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You're only to Chapter 5, oh boy!
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https://twitter.com/Fiaura_Tanks/status/1021775777413693440
Just so you know how I felt hearing this.
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These are questions we don't want answered!
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Ha, no worries! I'm glad to have something good to read on my off time
Really nice Work with the flashback. For a pre-war filly, she adapts Pretty fast. And the picture reminds me of Boo
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I agree with the boo part, think they would get along if they ever met?, corners and boo I mean.
Ha I like the reference to the song "I'm an angel with a shotgun"
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That was the GM's idea. He started making that reference and I just ran with it.
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IF they ever meet, that would be a hell of an event!
Whoo! Awesome, good place to stop for me for the night but this is a brilliant story up to this point.
I love the creepy/flirty Curator, he's an interesting slimy character. I feel Sparrow's gonna be intriguing too. and we heard the first mention of the namesake, 'Dead Tree', so it's something from the past and that's how it links Sunrise to the story... I like it. Mystery, intrigue, a reason to keep reading.
Exactly! Sums up my thoughts too...
I'm going to write up a review soon, as I've taken a bunch of notes, but needless to say, I think you have done a marvelous job with the opening chapters and I am looking forward to the journey this takes me.
All good things,
Scara
The group has made it to civilization and Sunrise got her first taste of how life after the apocalypse is like.
Ok that’s horrible even by Wasteland standards. She probably was a Filly Scout but still….
I like the Curator. He’s gives off sleazy vibes but helds himself to some standards. Shamelessly and creepily flirting with everyone but respecting their opinions to say No. So he’s basically Blackjack if she was male, a Zebra and looked like a dried raisin. Through the Curator we also learn a bit more about Nyota. In particular that he’s not interested in making friends. Which I appreciate, because we really need to learn more about the rest of the party. And finally the image of a Zebra ghoul in a fancy suit driving around in an earth mover is simply hilarious to me.
Of course, selling the earth mover also means that the party is now swimming in bits. Which I would imagine, gives the DM a lot of headaches. Never spoil your party too much.
It’s a super-secret par-war government project. So chance are good that it’s something well-intentioned that turned into something really, really horrible. Like planning to make apple trees that would yield a better harvest and then end up with ponies fused with trees and in constant pain but unable to die.
Falliout: Equestria is messed up.
The group has successfully escaped and even earned some cash to buy new equipment, so the question is what happens next. Until now they stuck together because they were all wanted to escape. Now they need a reason why they would continue to work and a new mission. But I guess that’s what happens in the next chapter of this story.
DAWW THE BOX PONY REMINDS ME OF BOO!!! Is she a Blank like Boo? Ah shet is that a future spoiler? Either way must keep Box Pony safe, she must be kept safe!!
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Must not say a word, must not hurt the adorable!
That bit of description alone gave me a very vivid idea of what the place looked like. Well done, I look forward to seeing where this story goes.
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*squees in happiness*
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Right when I wanted to compliment on how the story is getting sturdy foundation Sunrise randomly vandalizes a shop with a graffiti. And I mean really randomly, like a glitch in the code.
Yea. So, the flashbacks are nice, very informative. We finally get to know where we are located on the map and, most importantly, what color Sunrise's mane is. We get to meet some more questionably intelligent NPC's and a whole new location. I thought we'd be using the earth mover as a transportation method for the book, though it did net a lot of caps, which is weird considering we just started the story and are already rich and well-eqipped. I guess it's the randomness of the dice that decided that, or a stupid, rich NPC, who can't haggle in the wasteland.