• Published 4th Jun 2012
  • 9,771 Views, 875 Comments

Apple of my Eye - Noponyatall



2nd person fic between you and humanized Applejack.

Comments ( 120 )

Yes update I've beenwaitingfor this. Also I'm in the back of the truck at work

suddenly, you could feel the condom in your pocket, almost as if it was calling to you in an angelic voice. (Oh god, the mental image of that made me laugh.)

"Use meeee…" :rainbowlaugh:

Personally, I like to think it's a choir.

That was well worth the wait. Thank you.
And I'll be here till it ends!

long time dude where ya been?:eeyup:

1897260 In cryogenic suspension. :eeyup:

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Last chapter? I hope not!:raritydespair:

Wow. It's actually arrived...
Time to wait another few years, might work on my grey beard a bit more.

Hurrah new update! I almost forgot about this fic you glorious bastard. I love you and have fun going where ever you are leaving too!

After a brief search. you uncovered the Nintendo Wii and popped in Super Smash Brothers Brawl.

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After a brief search. you uncovered the XBox 360 and popped in Halo 4.
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THEY BE GETTING CAUGHT, I KNOW IT!

"Eyy bbygrl, want sum fuk?"

The angelic voice.

Hopefully Big Mac won't walk in on them. Or Applebloom or Granny Smith... Dear god.

Hey an update. Commence read.

Thank you for the story and hope everything goes well. Hope to read more when you have the chance.

condom in your pocket, almost as if it was calling to you in an angelic voice

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even if it takes a year to update, i can still wait :pinkiehappy:

YOU THINK ICE CLIMBERS ARE BAD!!!!
I might have to take you up with them then.
PM me. right now and we'll slug it out!

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You're just saying that because your bad at brawl.

Celestia DAMN IT!!! I was amped and then you slapped me right across the face man!

Will wait for next chapter :twilightsmile:

Demanding another Mane 6 story from you :flutterrage:. I mean if that's alright with you :fluttershyouch:

As a guy who was a pro brawl player, I felt ashamed to know my character would resort to using the old "down B with Kirby" strategy. How awful. Still, glad to see I picked Ganondorf at first; he is MY character, after all.

Also, Folgers? I lost my shit.

Awesome Chapter ^^...Alright fine, i'll admit that I can't wait for the sex to get on either

YYYYYYYYYYEEEEEEEEEEEESSSS! UPDATE!!:yay::yay:

Y'know, I was having a SHIT day.

Then I saw this updated.

You are the best.

I was like "NOOOO Ice Climbers are top tier AJ's gonna beat ya!", but then tires don exits.

Sweet, an update! Nice work, keep it up :pinkiehappy:

Well in the words of the Heavy:"Someone is getting laid"

lol ganandorf the worst in the game and fucking iceclimber chain grab

Yay sexy t-
>Reads chapter

this story was well worth the wait cant wait for the next chapter:rainbowwild:

1897235 split it half-way (not the condom) Angelic Choir

1897466 Hehe, good one. I liked this update by the way. Nice cliffhanger... dick

Ahh Super Smash Brothers Brawl.... I suck balls at that game.

I am happily waiting for the next chapter :3

-RageCake- Gamer, Ultimate cake rager, Proud Troll, that one idiot from the MDA

ICE CLIMBERS! Oh yeah, you went there. Two easily knockable, weak tier fighters

there is an error everywhere ice climbers rock, lucario? Not so much.:raritywink:

Note: Insomnia works well if you're a writer, I learned that today.

Not quite well enough for the rest of us between these last 14 weeks, and one of my favorite stories.

He was nasty witht that counter

1902659 i was thinking the same thing. :rainbowlaugh:

As for Barn sex..... :eeyup:

well I can't say folgers so this was a very slow process.

Just when I was about to message you asking if you died :yay:

The humour in this story is just golden, i love you OP (no homo)

Hey, would you mind if I used Fucking Cobras as my band name?

Update... OH MY GOD! OH MY GOD! OH MY GOD! OH MY GOD! *squee*

Edit:
I may have given the readers the thought that there would be a sexy scene in this chapter.

And they (I) fucking brought that?

Like discount peaches.

You cheeky dickwaffle!

Great chapter along with a frustrating cliffhanger. Good job on this story, can't wait for the next chapter.

Libidinous? Big word for an insomniatric writer.... Even if you are an English Major.... :rainbowlaugh: Oh well... good update!

This made me hard! :twilightsmile:

this was my first ever fan fiction story and the first time i saw it i read all the chapters available in 8 hours and i checked once a week to see if it got updated ive been waiting for a month or so and it was updated ! i am so happy i read it to my girlfriend lol and i loved it loved it loved it i really hope you finnish this some day and i will be waiting until that day :pinkiecrazy:

Been waiting for this! Also I suspect next chapter will come out this summer and it's going to be worth the wait! :pinkiehappy:

1911976 scumbag brain meme a spinoff of scumbag steve

I used to be a big time Smash Bros player; even entered a tourney once. I sill prefer it over games now adays! Ah the nostalgia....

Also, sumboody 'bout ta get fuk'd.

Not sure how to feel about this. :rainbowderp:

Alas, great chapter. Looking forward to hearing from you again, man. :twilightsmile:

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