Omg ive been going crazy waiting for this new chapter and I have to say I love it, cant wait for the next hopefully you can finish it by Friday so I can enjoy it to the max! oh and I guess I'm first
'Assuming Direct Control'....... I see what you did there! I see it! Is that from the Collector General from Mass Effect 2? That's all I could think of.
YOU *points finger dramatically* YOU SAID THERE WOULD BE NO OTHER OF THE MANE SIX. oh well I can deal with it. unless the the time between chapters becomes too unbearable. A well written story as always however buckets have been patched to where the NPCs take it off. are we ever going to get to see that AJ vs you video game match?
*Claps slowly and loudly* Ah, a good chapter! The was totally worth the wait! Excellent job man, that was really good, and that you ended with the perfect cliffhanger too... I'm enjoying this story more than I enjoy writing my own! Please keep up the good work, and take your time, as excellence cannot be rushed, even for the fans.
Oooo, wonder what that conversation's gonna be like, I can't wait to-*chapter ends*
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Anyways, wonderful chapter, as usual. Though a tad short, if I may say so. That, or I just read really fast...
May as well call Logos "Harbinger". Direct Control did NOT need to be assumed, Logos, because direct intervention was NOT necessary, and thus, you did NOT need to direct him, er, me, personally. SO BUZZ OFF.
There. I believe I'm done now. Looking forward to next chapter, because if Harbin-I mean Logos must destroy us/me/whoeverdafuzz, he will. HE'LL DO IT, MAN. HE WILL.
Nearly a month?!?!?!?!?!!?!??!?!?!! I have checked everyday for nearlly a month for an update... If the next one is not by my birthday... I will have the worst birthday ever... I am giving you till august 29th... -_- But anyhow AMAZING CHAPTER... but i needs more... I cravezzzzzz it...
what you have written is one of the most surreal things anyone has ever read, any everyone here is now dying of laughter because of this. May Celestia rest their souls.
Normally, I would think that surreal meant that it was not believable, therefore I'm a bad author XD It was my inner Twilight blowing things out of proportions.
First
Awesome story
YES FINIALLY UPDATED
plus first
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Oh, so close! dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/Applejack_lolface.png
CHEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEESSSSSSSSSEEEEEEE!!!!!! FOR EVERYONE!!!!!
Bwhahaha i love it. worth the wait, dont mess with rarity, she plays dirty.
You must write another...
Loving the story!
And this image is always relevant.
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Omg ive been going crazy waiting for this new chapter and I have to say I love it, cant wait for the next hopefully you can finish it by Friday so I can enjoy it to the max! oh and I guess I'm first
Thanks for the update.
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Thank you! I've been trying to come up with names for the voices in my head, and you helped out there.
good chapter
too short though
Rarity is awesome
keep up the good work
so many lines
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Buh buh huh...It's longer than the second chapter! You didn't complain about the length THEN did you...? >.>
Sheesh...my fans. dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/shrug_Luna_apple.png
Don't stop now!!!
Huzzah! An update!
1008130 Caught me off guard you did!
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Really? Where!? >_>
'Assuming Direct Control'....... I see what you did there! I see it! Is that from the Collector General from Mass Effect 2? That's all I could think of.
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I lol'd so hard it's not even funny.
1008617 Oh, I'm much worse...
100860 Mehbeh...
YOU *points finger dramatically* YOU SAID THERE WOULD BE NO OTHER OF THE MANE SIX. oh well I can deal with it. unless the the time between chapters becomes too unbearable. A well written story as always however buckets have been patched to where the NPCs take it off.
are we ever going to get to see that AJ vs you video game match?
Yay update don't mess with the Rarity
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CHIFFHANGERS FAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA-
shit i fell off my chair
I love it. LOVE IT LOVE IT.
BUT THIS CLIFF HANGER..
Please hurry. I cannot wait.
This actually sounds like me irl...Are you stalking me?
I MUST SAVE MY LOVE, FOR I AM DOVAKHIN! DRAGONBORN! I SHALL PICK THE APPLES WITH MY UNRELENTING FORCE! FUS RO DAH!
FFFFFFFFUCK!!! I'M LOVING THIS SO MUCH!!!
*Claps slowly and loudly* Ah, a good chapter! The was totally worth the wait! Excellent job man, that was really good, and that you ended with the perfect cliffhanger too... I'm enjoying this story more than I enjoy writing my own! Please keep up the good work, and take your time, as excellence cannot be rushed, even for the fans.
Oh... and CHEESE WHEELS!!!!
Godamn it! You cut the chapter off exactly where its about to get good! Why must you be a tease!?
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I wasn't used to long chapters then...
Sheesh how things change over time
And I am not complaining
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i agree that bastard awsome chapter
yay a new chapter, now imma read the whole story from start to finish.
Oooo, wonder what that conversation's gonna be like, I can't wait to-*chapter ends*
...
FFFFFFFFFFFFUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU-
Anyways, wonderful chapter, as usual. Though a tad short, if I may say so. That, or I just read really fast...
May as well call Logos "Harbinger". Direct Control did NOT need to be assumed, Logos, because direct intervention was NOT necessary, and thus, you did NOT need to direct him, er, me, personally. SO BUZZ OFF.
There. I believe I'm done now. Looking forward to next chapter, because if Harbin-I mean Logos must destroy us/me/whoeverdafuzz, he will. HE'LL DO IT, MAN. HE WILL.
Nearly a month?!?!?!?!?!!?!??!?!?!! I have checked everyday for nearlly a month for an update... If the next one is not by my birthday... I will have the worst birthday ever... I am giving you till august 29th... -_- But anyhow AMAZING CHAPTER... but i needs more... I cravezzzzzz it...
Couple of things:
Cheese!
Now might be the time to add that mature rating, in light of that dream and the stories direction.
I understand the 'two brain' thing, I'm fine with this.
More. Now, not later.
YES!!! YOU FINALLY UPDATED!!!
Logged on to fimfiction and saw a new chapter.
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what you have written
is one of the most surreal things anyone has ever read,
any everyone here is now dying of laughter because of this.
May Celestia rest their souls.
Ermagerd, ah lerve this stery
1013788 Is that a compliment....?
1013932 ERMAHGERDD!!!
THERS PERSERN ERS WERN ERF ME FERVERT BERKS!!!
Very nice conversations in this chapter! My laughter while reading was about as much as when I saw the "Suprise Buttsex" picture in the comments
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you can decide for yourself
Yes it's a compliment!
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Ok good ^^
The surreal thing caught me off guard a bit...
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just curious, how did it catch you off guard?
Normally, I would think that surreal meant that it was not believable, therefore I'm a bad author XD
It was my inner Twilight blowing things out of proportions.
o god the 1st part made me sad the 2nd made me happy i love this story
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That was before it became a good idea!! :D
Also, I might end up having a mature scene after all...
Not because it needs it, but because I can write it and have it improve the story.
That whole brain split thing? Totally gonna do it. Need someone to talk to.
Hehe I like this chapter. Also rarity ftw!!
...More. Write more now! Or else Pinkie will get you
i really hope this fix goes on for a long time maybe 20 chapters? lawl i hope you consider later on in the chapters that we meet the others