Wow an update. Alot of stories i am tracking that dont update frequently just updated. The fuck.
Also you have another story butied somewhere i cant remembrr the name but didnt it involve a dragonpony? Anyway update when you can and i will.be pleased.
1333809 No worries. I have the same issue. It's mostly why anything I post I have read about 4 times. Once as I'm finishing, once when done, once after some time passes to see if it still makes sense, and once when it's on the sight. Honestly the only way I avoid it since sometimes ya don't notice it until it's on the site for everyone to see.
1333890 an't it the truth. Too bad I'm not as focused as you. My one editor must hate me for having 7 different ongoing stories and he has far less time than you do lol.
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now to read the story
oddly enough i let out an evil laugh at the ending
whoops her ass citeh boi!
MOAR!
I already know what's going to happen in the next chapter... Well, maybe...
Bro, you take FOREVER to update! Rabble rabble rabble!
1327954 Shackle razzle futzal craz! dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/sillyfilly_Twilight_Sparkle.png
>Invite A.J to my room
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1327967 That was beautiful.
im a fan of both this and your luna story but to be honest i like this a lot more. probably cause AJ is best pony
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Also, this updated? What the actual fuck. I'm so happy.
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You have no idea how much this means to me. Just...*sniffle*...thank you.
1327882 I have bad news for you from your shrink...
I have been liking the story so far. Waiting patiently for the next update.
1328091 how did you know i went to a shrink
or my doctor.....
ARE YOU A SPY!?!?!?!?!?!?
1328090 Aw, group hugz!
you updated?! if you'll excuse me, i need to go watch for incoming apocalypses.
1328326 Ha ha, very funny.
YESSSSSS!!!!!
Nice chapter overall. However, I did catch a few things that you might want to fix:
You mixed up the "t" and the "l" in unsubtle.
Should be "put" instead of "but."
Should be "your mom."
I'm not sure, but I think this should read "going off toward the outside apple fields."
Needs a comma after "Well."
The apostrophe doesn't belong in the possessive form of "it."
yay! a update! and take ya time dude, we can wait....well some of us
1328511 Will fix later, too tired now :P
btw, well there be...."clop" in the future?
This is.
I can't wait until the next chapter..
lol... they want them to fuck so bad xD thats hilarious.
And here I thought it was safe to fall asleep....oh well back to reading
DON'T STOP NOW
I laughed s hard on this chapter. to think Big mac wants it to happen. and even gave him the rubber. I fell flat on my ass I was laughing so hard
Wow an update. Alot of stories i am tracking that dont update frequently just updated. The fuck.
Also you have another story butied somewhere i cant remembrr the name but didnt it involve a dragonpony? Anyway update when you can and i will.be pleased.
1329455
He did
:D YOU BOSS ARE THE BEST!
first time I read the condom bit, I laughed.
second time I laughed really hard.
third time I laughed like a chainsaw...
You nearly lost all control of your bowels.
In other word ya shit ur self
1328538
Check the rating, and take a guess.
Definitely needs more of this story. DO IT FILLY!
,,, that's it?
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I want it to finish already! or at least get further than 5 BUCKING DAYS IN!!!
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:(
1327882
Anyone who didn't is poser in disguise
FINALLY!!! It feels like it's been AGES!
Not sure how anyone can be so casual about having.... you know.
Anyway, great chapter as always~, hope to read the next sometime soon.
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*Hugz*
Finally an update.
... Dang, so much for waiting til marriage for me...
Meet a cute girl
Start out bad, not getting along
Get to know each other, getting more friendly
Fall in love after 4 days
Screw things up
Make amends
Sadly I never got to the last one. I wonder if she's still upset.
Dang, this story makes me emotional...
a jexx update?!?!?!?!?!**drops everything and reads**
shit I dropped my phone off the balcony, lucky 4 me i had a parachute and went after it.
Shit's going down REAL fast!
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An update? Huzzah!
I'll post a fullerrendition of my thoughts when I next have the full use of my reaction folders.
"Well, when you but it that way, I guess you could say I am."
put PUT
1333787
It's a recurring error for me.
1333809 No worries. I have the same issue. It's mostly why anything I post I have read about 4 times. Once as I'm finishing, once when done, once after some time passes to see if it still makes sense, and once when it's on the sight. Honestly the only way I avoid it since sometimes ya don't notice it until it's on the site for everyone to see.
1333853 I think my readers do a better job at pointing out my mistakes out than me :P
1333890 an't it the truth. Too bad I'm not as focused as you. My one editor must hate me for having 7 different ongoing stories and he has far less time than you do lol.