Revan
I'm running as fast as I can, thank goodness for force powers.
I stop when I realize that I have no idea where the royal suites are in this castle.
Whoops.
I find myself in some random part of the castle, and I slump against a wall. Running around without an idea where I am won't get me to Mi Amore faster. Celly called her 'Cadence', a nickname from Cadenza I'm assuming. My hand rustles through my bag, and my hand clasps the small amulet. The final gift from an old friend, putting it on will turn me into a unicorn. I slip it on and try to get used to the feeling of being a unicorn again. I still have the royal guard armor on, but it's probably outdated by now, so I take it off. Now I just look like a normal unicorn, except for my weird cutie mark, and I'm Lulu's size, and weirdly enough a white coat and black mane isn't a normal combination. Ok so I don't look that normal. But at least I'm a pony now, mostly.
Moving on!
I'm sitting here trying to think about how I can find out where Mi Amore is when some random guy pokes me,
"Hello? Sir? You look lost, can I help you?" I look up, it's just a guard.
A guard with modern royal guard armor.
"Yes, yes you can help me."
I stuffed him in a closet, he'll be fine. The best part of this armor is that it makes you look like the rest of the guard. Even with size, so I slip it on and walk like I know what I'm doing.
When I pass another guard I stop him, "Where is Princess Cadenza? I have a message for her."
He points to a tower on the side of the castle, "In the royal suites."
"Thank you." He walks away without a second thought. Man security is bad, I'll have to work on that.
I slowly make my way to the tower. When I get there their aren't even any guards at the doors. Geez did Celly decide that security was for wimps? I push the door open and sigh at the long row of doors that await me. I'm to lazy I don't have the time to look in every room in the hall, so I cast a small but useful spell Starswirl taught me. It gives me heightened hearing, if used with lots of people around it's annoying. But with a small number of people it makes it easier to find or listen in. I hear a small conversation going near the end of the hall so I make my way down. When I find the door I stop to listen in.
The first voice I hear is a stallion, whom I might have to kill later, "Cadence you know it's too dangerous. Discord has been dealt with, but we're too short on guards right now for you to leave the castle."
"All I need is you Shiny, your worth 10 guards." My heart stops, It's my little girl.
Who seems a little too fond of that stallion...
"But I heard Twilight is in the castle, I want to tell her about our engagement..."
WHAT
I blew the door up, "NOPE NOPE NOPE!"
'Shiny' immediately threw a shield up to protect Mi Amore, I'll give him that.
"Who are you? And how do you have royal guard armor?"
I cackle, which is probably not good, "I'm here to challenge you to a duel for Mi Amore!"
He laughs, "Bring it on!"
Mi Amore speaks, "Mi Amore...?! Shiny, wait!"
But we've already teleported away.
We appear in what I assumed to be the royal guard training grounds. There are guards all around, they all turn to us.
'Shiny' addresses them, "Boys I've got a duel, but don't worry. I've got this moron."
The guards laugh and form a circle around us to watch, by their smiles they think he does have this. One runs off though.
I think this will be fun.
"I'd ask you take off that armor, I don't want to destroy perfectly good armor." 'Shiny' is really full of himself.
I laugh, "As a solider, I can respect that."
He's about to respond when I take off the armor, and his jaw drops. As do all of the guards. A few stare at my cutie mark, I guess twin crossed blue lightsabers with a black swirl isn't normal. I look at them, "Rude." They blush and look away.
For dramatic effect I summon my armor, and fell awesome. I mean this stuff looks awesome, I came to Equestria in it and when I transform it transforms with me. It's got red and copper body armor and black robes. The robes have a cape that covers all of my back and sides, and it's awesome. It's got a hood, but I don't use it. I have to stop my self from going 'YEEEEEEE' every time I see it. I summon my light sabers for extra effect. I don't turn them on, not yet.
'Shiny' doesn't look to full of himself now. Nor does he feel confident. He covers with a snort and summons his own armor. Convincing, if I couldn't feel his emotions. We take battle stances, he laughs at mine.
"That's one weird version of the general stance."
I laugh, "Weird version? Yours is the weird one."
We start to circle each, "I learned this from masters who studied it for years."
I lunged, "I created it."
That surprises him long enough that I get under his guard, I'm about turn my light saber on when,
"STOP!"
Cadence
The two flash away just as I yell, this is bad.
Because if that's who I think it was...
Shining Armour is good but daddy will kill him.
Fast
If only I had stopped them faster. But now I need to get to the training ground. That's where Shining would go. I start running, I'm nearing the throne room when I run into my aunts and Twilight and the girls.
"Cadence!"
"Aunt Celestia what is doing on!?"
Auntie Luna pops in, "No time for that, we can't let Revan kill the captain!"
Twilight is hysterical, "Why does he want to kill my brother?!"
"YOUR BROTHER?!"
"Twilight did you forget to tell your friends you had a brother?!"
"Maybe..."
"Twilight!"
Auntie Luna pops in again, "Not important right now!"
Auntie Celestia nods, "Let's go!"
We teleported to the grounds.
Daddy's saber is about to hurt Shining.
I won't let people I love hurt each, "STOP!"
Daddy bounces back and puts his sabers away. Then turns, runs to me, and wraps me in a hug.
"My baby girl, look how you've grown Mi Amore."
I hug him as hard as I can, "Daddy is that really you?"
"Daddy?!" Sorry Shiny I'll explain later.
"It's me, my little angel." He laughs, "I can't really call you that anymore can I? Your an alicorn now."
"You can call me whatever you want."
And I cry in the arms of the father I thought long dead.
We would think that Cadence, would HIGHLY resent her previously thought of 'aunt' celestia. For telling her that her father was dead, hiding that SHE imprisoned him in stone locked away in some cave to be forgotten. While Shining Armor would likely side with princess celestia, out of military duty or training/raised under her rule. It would likely call off any engagement if not Revan having a firm say in the matter, because he could outright refuse to allow such a thing to happen.
Under these current conditions we could see a split divergent from canon happen, even Cadence wanting herself and her father far away from the 'bitch who took my daddy away from me'.
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While I will agree tha Cadence will be quite pissed at Celestial for the lie she told her... I think a good punishment if the wedding still takes place is for Luna to precide over it instead of Celestia with Shining Armor going to Luna's guard if she has one.
In addition the Elements could also be wary of Celestia and her motives. Maybe not Twilight, but who knows.
Anyways, awesome chapter and can't wait for more!!!
6148289 i agree with most of the thought but i think shinning may end siding with revan due to his military background after all revan is the greatest general and any soldier would respect him more than celestia, the same way the pegasi almost revere the god slayer
6148508 The only reason shining armor would side with Revan, is from selfish reasons. Who wouldn't 'kiss ass' with their potential father-in-law? That is IF he truly believes it, plus he is likely SWORN to Equestria and it's rulers, so if thy ruler commanded thou, it would be done.
6148438 There are a couple flaws with what is stated, 'pissed' is a understatement. thou had made the 'Alicorn of Love' LIVID with thou, she LOVES her father. Plutonic family yes, but if she KNEW Celestia took her father away from her? Burned bridge will be assured no matter the attempts made to try and fix it, she likely GRIEVED for decades if not centuries. Add into the fact Shining Armor IS captain of the royal guard, not the solar guard, but BOTH factions of it. he is likely in a position as 'head of the army' from how canon paints events, if he even wished to marry Cadence if somehow getting approval from said father. (if he still lived.) He would likely have to Resign from his post as one of likely 'conditions' to even get approval for a marriage, Oh and so help him if they had shared a bed before then.
As for the Elements? They would be on the Princesses side regardless, Thou cannot stress the fact alone that Celestia is a second mother to her besides mentor. As her friends will likely have her back, besides wouldn't Rainbow Dash likely would want to duel him just to increase her ego? what Pegasus wouldn't wish to say 'I dueled the greatest badplot ever! and made a bet to have him date me.'? It can highly happen if personalities are taken into mind, As for the other descendant of his other child. They will likely look down on him for not being royalty or a 'ugly beast'.
As a final note we wish to state that the Solar monarch is KNOWN for white washing history records except likely for her own personal archive. Or those found outside of Equestria if sought, but what pony would go out of their way to suspect their pristine ruler? A dissident most likely or a rebel.
6148664 well since there is no real reason for celestia to turn him into stone that works for anyone else besides herself, otherwise she would have said it already, revan is still equestria greatest general and like luna he will resume his post, unless she wants to lose more luna of trust along with candance once she learns she lied to her.
as for shining armor he seems to be quite stricken by the greatest general legend, since most of his combat style seems to follow the skills revan created around his time, so there is a chance he goes to respect him the same way the ponies from the 66th battalion did
for the elements the opinions would be divided
twilight being the teacher pet she is would be all the way with celestia regardless of what is happening around, until celestia decides to spill the beans
rainbow dash she would side with revan just because as the element of loyalty wouldnt feel right being with someone that basically betrayed a friend trust for no reason. regardless hero worship, yes she may challenge him but that is another topic
rarity would be with celestia just because she doesnt know the full truth of what happened, but that may change once the true reasons for what happened are known
pinkie pie and fluttershy would be neutral since for one he told them that they arent cursed, and dont know the reason for celestia actions
applejack would be wary of celestia since as the element of honesty it wouldnt sit well with her that she was able to lie to everyone for so long and be okay with it and will start to wonder about what else she may have lied about
Aww! I wanted a full on death match!
A lot of spelling mistakes.