It was 6 o'clock, and Harmony was snoring. That is until he was awoken by Golden Pond. It had been about 6 weeks since the "pony bet" began.
"Psst! Harmony! Wake up!" Golden Pond hissed. "We're gonna be late!" Harmony opened his eyes, and he forgot, for a moment, the situation.
"What?" Harmony asked. "Late?" It was dark, so he couldn't see Pond's pony face.
"Yeah! Late for school." Pond elaborated. Harmony bolted upright.
"Oh shoot!" He cried, and (attempting to get up like a human) fell right on his face. He groaned and rubbed his muzzle. He then remembered he had a muzzle. "Oh, right." He sighed, fully remembering his current scenario. He stood up again, this time on four legs, and untangled himself from the sheets. Pond cocked her head.
"You alright?" She asked him.
"Yeah, I'm fine." With that, they raced to the kitchen and ate breakfast, then ran through the streets of Canterlot to school.
"Ok, class, today we have 2 new students joining us," Mrs. Learn Budd announced. A certain colt's ears perked up. Wavey Line was the usual one to show new students around. Mrs. Learn Budd motioned for the students to enter.
"This, Is Golden Pond, and Harmony." Learn Budd introduced the two, each nodding as their name was said. "Now, go pick your seats and we can start class." Wavey Line started waving the two to the seats adjacent to him. The seats were on opposite sides of Wavey, this caused the two to look at each other, shrug, and sit down in the seats Wavey had directed.
"Hi! I'm Wavey Line!" Wavey whispered to Golden and Harmony. "We can talk at recess!"
And so, Mrs. Learn Budd started the lesson.
The history lesson ended at around 11:00, which lead to lunch. The two walked out to the school yard, where they were to eat lunch.
"We forgot lunch!" Harmony hissed. Pond thought for a moment, the realised they had, in fact, forgotten to make lunch.
"Pony feathers," Golden muttered. She then looked surprised. "Pony feathers," She repeated. "Buck, grass, stitch! I can't say swear words!" Pond realised. Harmony started laughing.
"Those 'pony brand swears' are adorable!" Harmony laughed. The two reached the lunch tables and sat down. A few seconds later, Wavey Line sat down as well.
"So guys, welcome to school!" Wavey greeted the two. "How are you liking it so far?"
"It's been fine so far," Harmony replied.
"I've liked it, too." Pond added. "It's nice to go back to school."
"That's great!" Wavey said excitedly. "I'm glad you're loving it! Now, let's show you two around!" It was excellent timing because Harmony and Pond had forgotten their lunches. They hadn't realized it yet, so this would be a good distraction.
30 minutes later...
"So, that's the whole school!" Wavey Line said finally.
"Wow, this is a pretty big school." Harmony commented. Pond nodded in agreement.
"Yeah," Pond said absently, looking out at the playground. She suddenly had the child-like urge to go play, to swing on the swings and slide on the slides. "Hey Harmony," Pond nudged him. "You wanna go play foursquare?" She asked, succumbing to the urge. Harmony looked at her for a moment, then he began to feel that same urge, only he knew that his age had been regressed slightly.
"Sure, why not!" He said. So, the three of them played foursquare until it was time to go home.
The best cure to writers block is whiskey! Actually a lesson taught by David Weber was to go back and reread a bit of what you wrote. It doubled as proof reading and sometimes helped drive new ideas.
I can't wait till harmony reappears, and we get to know how Amy lived.
maybe you should try reading other mlp fanfic's who knows that may help you after all it helped me when i wrote the first fanfic i done on fanfiction.net
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(Maniacal voice and evil grin) all according to plan... (drums fingers together... evily)
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Really? You're gonna stop here? I would hope you'de read more. (Especially because the plot picks up around... chapters 8 and 9). Ok, yes the plot is confused, but it really dose get get it's rear in gear. I was trying to flush out the relationship between Jason and the ponies. But... I don't know. Did I fail at that goal? I'm not sure myself. Bias and all that. But anyways, I hope you'll read on.
5948621 Sorry bro... but unless you get some help i'm afraid i just can't keep reading. It's not because i can't read past your errors and such or i think the story is bad, the errors will simply distract me from the story you've tried to spin. Your story needs an overhaul, like pronto.
Anyways, i'd be much willing to help, i have tuesdays and thursdays off and will attempt to devote time. I've helped others (including a friend of mine from quebec) hell i edited some guy's story in the comment section one time. All you need to do is put this on google documents, go to 'share' turn on 'can comment' (you don't even need to allow me to edit it) and then let me do my stuff
6008106 so you have an editor, cool... he might need some training... but now you need a pre-reader, someone who will read over your previous chapters and advise you on what you should and should not go with, aka, telling you to give more background instead of jumping ahead.
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Well, that's because you're a brony/pegasister (whichever you prefer). If you had no idea about the show, you would probably take the change a whole different way.
6214414 well, yes. I would probably be at least a little sore about the deception/Abduction aspect. I would certainly have something to say about it. To be honest, I was generalising when I said that.
Admittedly, I probably have a more laid back attitude to transformation than some since, provided my mind remains my own, I would be more curious of such a change. Yes, it would be shocking to wake up that way, but my own curiosity has a way of distracting me.
That and I would be extatic to find I had wings.
6088558 that is perhaps true in part. I've always loved the idea of having wings, even if it meant being something other than human.
I like to think i'd be ok with it even without knowledge of the show. Probably be confused as to what I was for a bit, but i'd likely be too busy trying to learn to fly after a few minutes.
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I'm working on it... I've just hit a massive writer's block.
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No, that was the point i accidentally started using %i% instead of typing the number in manually.
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because I'm evil sometimes.
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I was thinking more like "Ars Magica 2" mod, at the time.