I'm a girl living in Ashley, New Milton. Loved mlp ever since it started showing and got to learn about these fanfic in October 2013. (Also I have dyslexia, so if I make mistakes sorry)
Every year for Hearths Warming Scootaloo asks for the same thing, but sadly never get what she wishes for.
This year when Hearths Warming comes around, she doesn't even write to Santa Hooves or see him in the stores.
And prepares for another disappointing Hearths Warming.
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(Based on the song All I Really Want by Steven Curtis Chapman)
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This story is looking interesting so far. There's only two things I have to mention right now.
First, it seems kinda convoluted that Rainbow Dash would just happen to be napping next to the orphanage.
Second, the word "revise" should be "receive"
I love me some Scootaloveand this is pretty solud, but it also needs an editor. Keep writing it I want to see where it goes. ( or more accuratetly, how I gets there since I think I know where it ends up)
I'm guessing, that the fact that this story is based off of a song by Steven Curtis Chapman, that you are a Christian?
It's actually Hearth's Warming, as in a fireplace.
Given the theme of the episode, it's probably meant to be a pun on "heartwarming" - I think there's like a rule that every episode title has to have a pun or wordplay of some kind.
5310790 No I'm not a Christian...
In truth I found it on youtube while playing with 'Rise of the Guardians songs' here I'll show you...
It's one of my favorite songs and thought it just right for Scoots so here we are
(Chosen video has lost it's music, thanks to a claim of copyright)
5311326 Thank you for righting me with my mistake
But even though it is that, I always here 'Hearts Warming' and with that big heart shaped fire in the show... I think I'll keep it as that.
Please sir I want to read more of this!
You've managed to warm my old cynical heart so far, and I want to see scoots get her new home fir Christmas.
5311739 I'll try, not sure when I'll get it done but I promise (though I can't pinkie promise) that I'll try it for Christmas
5312214 I meant I want to see scoots get her new home and family for Christmas / hearts warming. I don't actually want you to get the fic done by then, heavens please don't rush this. By all means take your time and write at your own pace hun.
I'd much rather wait longer for better quality results. Keep up the good work, please.
5312414 I know that's what you meant... and thank you for saying you'll wait, but I'll try any way
SO goddamn cute
A good start, but you really need an editor. I saw so many mistakes, but none that were too jarring.
It's Rainbow Blaze not Spectrum.
5314810 Rainbow Blaze is Dash's Stallion version in the gender swap universe...
besides I've used Spectrum Dash as her father in a few other stories so that's what I'm sticking with
5314819
Really, I thought her gender swaped name was Rainbow Blitz
5314961 Well what ever it is... Her dad's Spectrum Dash
So cute
The feels.... in the words of shulk from Xenoblade chronicles "IM REALLY FEELING IT!"
Rainbow rocks: "Awesome as i want to be"
Hmm not sure how this caught my eye.. but well im here for the long haul :)
I want rainbow dash sing Rudolph the Rad Nosed Reindeer
Carry on by A7x?
Let it go, please
Let it go! I can get my girl friend to do a cover of it in her dash voice and send it to you!
Let it go, let it go! Can't hold it back anymore~
Let it go, let it go! Turn away and slam the do~oor!
I don't care, what they're going to say!
Let the storm rage on...
The cold never bothered me anyway
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Hell yes!
Just by looking at the title reminds me of a fict I wrote about Rainbow Dash and Scootaloo that I deleted about 3 months ago. I can't wait to read this! :)
5341701 Thanks hope you like it
5311326
Yes, this! Hearthswarming!
5315078 well sense none of this canon you're both right
Da feelz. Dey be killin meh
Hell's bells.
I'm going to have to say it but "Let it Go" is a terrible Christmas song.
Christmas is all about family, inclusion and being good to one another.
"Let it Go" is a song that says, " Fuck you all. I don't need any of you."
The last two lines of the song are a metaphor. She's saying that she doesn't care how much people hate her, she's used to being alone.
If there is any song that's an antithesis to Christmas it's this song, which is a pity because in relation to the movie it is a great song.
5359821 She was told that the song she sang didn't have to be a Christmas song....
(All I'm going to say)
I think, that in this situation, not telling Scootaloo about adoption, but still insisting on making it surprise, is really brain dead retarded. It's basically them saying "let her suffer one day more, and everyone get hypothermia, because it must look like red, fat bastard gave us to her".
5370351 Which was why Rainbow was shifting telling her or not...
5370628 That's the stupid part. It basically looks like this: "Scootaloo suffers greatly, and everything freezing because of the wound in her heart. I wonder if I should ease her pain, pull her out of the pit of misery, and spare everypony hypothermia, by telling that she already is part of my family, or should I wait till tomorrow. Hurting her more, just to keep the illusion, that red, fat bastard exists, and he's the only reason why we adopted her, not because we love her." - RD.
5370681 I have the feeling you don't like Santa, do you...
5370777 it's not about if I like, or dislike imaginary character (yes, I know that technically he existed, but he was a bishop, not a red, fat bastard), it's about feelings, and conscience. As I said, RD lets Scootaloo suffer, for her own satisfaction, that maybe she will believe, that RFB gave her family, not her love.
It's like this: you're bleeding out, but I will not help you until tomorrow, for you to believe that I'm saving you solely, because pixie fairies told me too.
It's heartless, and RD acts like bastard, consciously sustaining the pain of Scoots. She basically bullies her.
5370836 Ok I don't care what you're saying any more...
As I've said to many people many times these are MY stories, so I'll write them the way I want.
If you don't like them don't read them.
But if you do read them directing at you mostly at the moment, be kind (if you know that word(!)) when you complane about how bad they are.
5370927 First of all, do you know what critique is? I know that is your story, but if you're posting it to public eyes, be ready for the people to point out what's wrong with them (if there is something). In this case, I'm just pointing out, that RD is a 2nd degree villain by abandonment.
I never said I don't like it. I had 10 chapter before this one, and didn't said one bad word about them.
I'm not unkind. I'm just brutally honest. I know people generally don't like it, but in most cases, if you won't 'shake' them, they will ignore you.
You typed aloud instead of allowed in the police force sentence.
5385534 Thanks for pointing this out, and for reading it so hard to see it
Should be sorted now
Should be through.
I am enjoying this story though.
5385578 I always get that mixed up with one of it's 'brothers'
Thanks for pointing it out
buried her face. Your way is a tad fruitier.
5385853 Fixed now
Rainbow Merriam Dashery?
Also did they at least patch up Rumble?