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TAW
Hi, I'm TAW. I write terrible erotic my little pony fan fiction about cartoon horses having sex with each other, or vaguely defined human audience-inserts, for fun. Because... uh. I have no shame?
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Heh, I could see Twilight trying to seduce someone with science
(she of all ponies would know that the experiment wouldn't work, and you can so tell she was just fibbing the whole time. It's kinda cute 
). And that last line confirmed what I figured out. The heat bit at the end heat is totally contrived, but whatever. 
I wonder if Applejack was in on Twilight plan from the beginning?
If I were to take a guess, I bet Twilight wanted to get intimate with this guy, but couldn't figure out how, so she decided to fake an experiment and went all out (data, hypothesis, etc) to better pull it off. And she brought Applejack along because... I guess maybe she had a thing for AJ, and AJ maybe had a thing for the human, so Twi decided to bring her along just to see what happens, or to provide a better illusion of the experiment. I doubt Twi would need help getting this guy's attention. I bet AJ was in on the plan from the start. That's just a guess, though. Maybe I'm over thinking this. Yeah, that's it.
And so now Vader, I'm cumming for you. /cheeky bastard
Only a matter of time before this gets featured.
.....FOR SCIENCE!
436556 I mean, that is what happened, right? Twi's not actually serious about whoring out her friends (the human included) and ever other pony in equestria ... right? Because that would be really stupid.
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obviously, it's not like Twilight has magical powers that let her make ponies do things they don't want to do.
...I actually guess she does, but she's too moral to use them.
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>implying this was shipping
What the heck? This is a TAW story, how could people not like this?
Unless your not into clopfics, but why would you be here if you're not?
Clearly Twilight subscribes to this philosophy.
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Also disappointed that she doesn't seem to know what a control is.
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I mostly do requests, so, I do what's requested.
Oh. My. God. THANK YOU. Best clopping I've had in a while
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So, because it's TAW, therefor it's good? And the only way anyone one doesn't like this is because they're not cloppers? Because that's the only explanation, right? Okay.
I gues its pretty cool....ITS AWESOME!!!
and now random post #58
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Oh, right. Sorry, guess I wasn't thinking.
I honestly don't know what to say about this... and I always have something to say!
437366 It's alright, Trixie. Just stay Great and Powerful, you amazing magician, you. Just look out for two eager (but dimwitted) colts. They're ...special.
Where's Poultron? I was all like, "Sick, a new TAW story! I get to see he and Poultron make verbal love to each other again!"
But there was no Poultron!
I don't think I even want to read this.
I'm definitely gonna read this.
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Umm...Not...quite sure of what to think. It WAS well written but...
All throughout, my main reaction was: Wat
HOW THE HELL DO YOU WRITE SO BUCKING FAST?
*marks to read later*
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loljk, to each his own
I think the starting buildup was pretty accurate for exactly how the average brony would react to this situation, the following scenes might differ from person to person but all around t'wasn't that bad
Wat. best line right there
"scientifically approved semen."
Wow, only Twilight would try seducing someone with science.
Keep up your 2nd Person Human X Pony clop!
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it's generic clopfiction, what exactly were you expecting? A work of art?
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I wasn't sure what to expect aha.
I haven't read many clopfics before. It was still a good read. I thumbed up :D
"The moment she got within a few feet of you, she broke into a quick dash and opened her mouth as she dived for your crotch."
""Science!" she pouted."
"While standard biology suggests such reproduction should be impossible, this has never been proven[...]"
"Wat."
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This was pretty hot TAW, Kudos on another great story. I hope you do a Rainbow Dash story soon.
Science isn't about why, its about WHY NOT!
Oddly appropriate since I just bought a talking portrait of Cave Johnson...
*sniff* We never did anything like this in our science classes.
A very nice story you got here. This should be the at least fourth story I've come across that has anal with Applejack. You won't ever hear me complaining about that though. I don't really have much to say about the story itself. It's kinda generic, as you said.
Your writing style seems to resonate with me pretty well. I really like it. I only spotted two repeating grammar errors:
>ya'll
Should be "y'all" for "you all." "Ya'll" would be "you will," as far as I know.
>"Oh, get on with it." Applejack moaned
This is about the period. The sentence isn't over after the speech ends, so there should be a comma. Question and exclamation marks can also function as a comma, but not full stops. But you're doing it all right with narration between speech segments.
And a total of four spelling errors:
>Didn't seen rigorously scientific to you
>letting her grown happily deep into Applejack's throat
>Ya'll done think you're done, do you?
>Though you'd only just came
Should be "come" in the last one.
That is all. I enjoyed this story. And a related question: Where are you usually taking your requests from?
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Probably, actually, yeah
Whoops, my mistake
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I should reread things more thoroughly, thanks.
I usually take my requests from 4chan's MLP Generals.
hey, Cave Johnson here. just to let you know, we DID take care of the mantis-men. but now on to better things! we recruited a sentient pony in another dimention to see if ponies can reproduce with humans. just in case Black Mesa brings the mantis men back and they kill all the humans --SPAAAAACE!! shut up space core. -- except the ones who get accross the dimentional boundary. Now! On with SCIENCE!!
Stop it boner.....
So what was up with Twilight reading you thoughts? That was a little weird. Or was that you talking? I'm unfamiliar with second-person immersion techniques.
Pretty much saying "For science!" will let you get away with anything, including whoring off the entirety of Equestria to a human.
ME GUSTA
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I normally take them from the threads on 4chan, but I'm pretty swamped.
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Yeah, it's *meant* to be describing the results of actions, rather than the actions themselves. I don't always make it work.
Ever had that strange feeling of having a raging boner and laughing your ass off at the same time? No? Just me then.
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What are you staring at?
Oh that was nasty... especially the part with the ass-f'ing which somehow resulted in Applejack's orgasm, and the description of penis/balls touching and sucking.
What the hell, they have to be in heat to have any chance at reproduction?
Just in this story... cuz they can control their heat and are more humanoid when it comes to attraction and such, I tell you what.
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It's either pony physiology being particularly obtuse, or Twilight fucking with Reader Insert, your choice.
447341 The whatcha callit, duhfuq u talkin' bout? Twilight fuqing with reader insert kthx.
lol homo
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Really now? well in this story there was a mention of more.... Test Subjects..... I would therefor like to request the... encounters or rather experiments?
that come after this one.... If that's alright with you I mean
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but...
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I totally clopped to thi- I mean you should be ashamed of your self good sir!
That was not me just liking and faving either I don't know what your talking about!
It would have worked...
but...
I kept picturing Twilight as Dr. Insano.
SCIENCE!
I read this for science. Yup. Science.
Reminds me of Dr. Weird
Brings in people to the barn: GENTLEMEN! I will now have sexual intercourse with a human!
Another good one by our clop artist, TAW. You have to admire his speed.
Even Rainbow Dash got w wing boner reading it.
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And even Sweetie Belle got some nasty ideas for their next CMC session.
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Interesting.
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MOAR!! SCIENCE!
this was a jolly gay piece of clop plz continue with it plz