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TAW
Hi, I'm TAW. I write terrible erotic my little pony fan fiction about cartoon horses having sex with each other, or vaguely defined human audience-inserts, for fun. Because... uh. I have no shame?
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lol yes.
i liked this
I'm shocked at how quickly the *Ahem* "intimate" scenes last. This is still a fantasy you know, you could give your characters a little more, umm, endurance? For stories sake of course.
I thought it was going to go in a more
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Yeah...
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In this case it was partially stylistic, partially just lack of ability. Fluttershy, to me, seems far too vanilla to have many fetishes (yet?), which kinda left me with either artificially lengthening it which I assumed would get boring, or having it relatively short.
In other cases it's just shitty writing, though.
I don't usually waifufag Fluttershy....but I might start having to do so. Really sweet story. I agree with Neko though, I do wish your intimate scenes would last a little longer, and go into a bit more detail.
All I can say is...wow.
Just wow.
Normally, I give these things a miss, but a friend sent this to me and I thought, "Why the hell not?"
And here we are, with semen dribbling over my laptop...
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^ agreed.
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I'm sorry, RainbowsCrush and guest, I'll try and apply better fetishes to cartoon equines next time. Maybe then I will be worthy of your respects. Until then, I shall wallow in undeserved self-pity and curse the heavens.
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<_< very cool.
Dude... just... dude...
Nice strory you wrote there, I like it.
I don't find a better way to say that.
"Ponies didn't seem to appreciate personal space in quite the same way as you're used too." LOL
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well that would explain why this human *takeing many forms* is frikken F'ING THE MAIN 6 PLUS CELESTIA!!!
""ooooooh my, thatfeelssogood" she whispered in a low voice," Ok, so far so good...
"move in with me"... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... Ehm... ... ... ... ... ... What?
Not bad, not bad
-Glassed
Shit is cash
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Please add another instalment to this story.
Joyous reading!
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I know this is old, but I simply wanted to say what a wonderful writer you are, it's always nice to have some human x pony Flutterlove (because human x human and pony x pony are just weird.).
377256 Here here!
we need more of these though expecitaly brony x fluttershy i always wanted to read one of those but i haven't found one any idea's?
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http://www.fimfiction.net/story/15074/In-The-Yellow-and-Pink
http://www.fimfiction.net/story/5682/Teaching-Fluttershy
http://www.fimfiction.net/story/13537/Equestria%27s-First-Human
These are, or are shaping to be, such stories.
There's also these.
http://clopfic.heroku.com/fics/658
http://pastebin.com/u/jffry890 (you stop by /mlp/'s Anon in Equestria thread, you hear?)
406017 Wow I don't think I read any of these thanks i'll get on them right away
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Very welcome friend.
If you know of any other decent human x Flutters romances, please let me know.
Just, avoid the ones that are grimdark as fuck.
409532 YES FINALLY SOMEONE WHO UNDERSTANDS ME!
anyways will do
Well, now I'm having sexual thoughts about the most innocent of ponies. Time to join the GRN team (the sexual one)...
I DEMAND CHAPTER TWO!... please?
Lol follow up?
But I did like that you kept her her calm slightly nervous self the whole time.
Well... huh... wow... normally I don't enjoy human on pony clopfics... but this... this was well written. Greened thumbed. I'll try to go through your collection and see what else is good.
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This was pretty much the perfect short story. I really like how the OC (you) wasn't a douchebag like they are in many others. Contrary to some people's opinions, the ending really wasn't too abrupt or too long. I think it was the perfect length for a story like this. Also, it really says somthing if you can throw little bits of humor in a somewhat serious story like you did.
Anyways, rock on, and keep up what you're doing. You have tallent, and don't let anyone tell you otherwise.
well that escalated quicker than i expected considering flutters is shy xD
but i shall continue. doesn't make it any less good. x3
Love a Flutterwaifu story
I'm ok with this. *faved and liked it* There you go 140. Good job.
Good story man
Good read
Wellllllllll. . . That escalated quickly
... I'm such a fag for this pony.
She's just perfect.
Really? Really? So, this character can't remember and is unable to add?
Take the day you were transplanted, convert to local date, add missing days, read out the result. Seriously?
Now, here's an interesting idea... what if Equus isn't on a 365-day year schedule? What if you get a roaming birthday?
Okay, I approve this sort of thing. It was unexpected, but fits really nicely with the narrative. In the spirit of telling you where you fucked up - this is where you did well. :)
For me, that'd feel like a slap, a bit. "Thank you"? The hell? The whole sentence felt like she was talking about a goddamn back rub, not hot, steamy sex.