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TAW


Hi, I'm TAW. I write terrible erotic my little pony fan fiction about cartoon horses having sex with each other, or vaguely defined human audience-inserts, for fun. Because... uh. I have no shame?

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Because sometimes, a finale isn't the end. Sometimes, pure evil just means you have more to lose.

A changeling's body is the plaything of her mind - but can a changeling ever really change her stripes?

Also because I've wanted to try something approximating an adventure story for a while. If there's any demand for it, I'll continue it properly, otherwise I'll just wrap it up quickly.

Chapters (5)
Comments ( 215 )

Keeping an eye on this to see where it goes.

What is this a TAW story that isnt clop!
REPENT the end is nigh!!!

hmm. this is amusing. continue.

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THIS IS HOW WE DIE

Chris Alice xD

Love it!

TAW

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Gotta admit, irritated you beat me to it!
If it's not popular it probably won't stay `Everyone`, though, I'll just shoehorn an ending in real quick and go back to other things

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Meh mine is nothing serious just me trying out writing "Romance"

"If it's not popular it probably won't stay `Everyone`" That's genius.

Mhm, delicious story, feed me more updates I demand! :pinkiecrazy:

Yeee another Chrysalis story. *claps for joy* :twilightsmile:

TAW

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Ha, taking a look at what you've written I think we may be the exact opposite way around - I'm writing this to try and tell an adventure story for once.

TAW

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I have a fair amount on my plate right now between real life and some of my other story commitments, and I'm mostly testing the water here, but I'll never leave something unfinished. I've been burned by that too many times to put anybody else through it.
Of course, by my scales, that means expect more chapters within days, rather than weeks. I'm weird like that.

Man oh man I was waiting for a fic of this lovely lady to pop up. :pinkiecrazy: I couldn't do something this awesome so quickly. Nice work.

sorry man, but I must demand! MORE! I NEEDS MORE!

Wonderful story so far, I request more!

so far i like this

This seems really cool. I'd love to see more.

Just over a day and there are at least three stories involving her now.

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My guess is she took the form of his long lost sister, or marefriend

I knew that a good fanfic would bring me back from the brink. Thanks TAW. You have my thumbs up, my favorites star, and my gratitude.

Good, I'd love to see more. REDEMPTION AND ROMANCE FOR CHRYSALIS!

Question. Are you going to have referances to Fay lore in this fic? It would make it interesting in my opinion ( Not that I don't like it. It's a good story and I hope for more ). Tracked and Faved.

MOOOOOOAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAARRRRRRRRRRRR!!!!!!!!

TAW

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I actually hadn't thought about it yet, it would be interesting, I need to read up on it though.

484012
Do all your story descriptions start with "Because Sometimes"


Sempre ricordare il caduto,semper fidelis.
~In Medicus

Eeyup. Demand is definitely there. Please don't wrap this up quickly but make it a proper adventure story. You certainly have the skills to do it.

Btw, am I alone in thinking that Chrysalis is cute?

KEEP IT GOING!

484049 I do too (Though it is a gulty pleasure).

TAW, I could tell you usually write clop just by the name "Longest Pine" Seriously, that's a clopstar name. But I like where you're taking "Chis"

TAW

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I... hadn't even considered that. Huh.
In this context, it means something else.

484321 oh the other interpretation of him pining away for a mare for a long time works too, but I still lol'd at the other clop concept first.

Well, seeing as this story got featured, I'd say you've got the demand to keep this going.

I'm keeping my eye on you...

You're often asking for criticism, so here.

Unchang-E-able

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I think she is cute without shame!

TAW

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I feel nothing but shame right now. My shame is like a beacon shining out over the mountains, visible to everybody and everything.
I apologise unreservedly, and I offer neither excuse nor explanation.

Thank you.

Chris Alice?
Sounds like a male name, to be honest. I'd be a bit disappointed if the mare I saved turned out to be a colt.


...Wait, I think I may have misinterpreted his disappointment.
Maybe.

Still, I've no doubt the mature scenes will be well written and-
Wait.
"Rated: Everyone"? By TAW?
What?
Wh- What?
Bu-But the first new character's name is "Longest Pine", surely... No?

...Could've fooled me. Anyways, looking forward to the next chapter.

Yeah... I see where this is going

484779 You know, I should draw that... :trollestia:

483665 I know, right?
Her powers seem to be working.

I can't lie, Evil is pretty friggin sweet. I do like where this going, this is one of those demon learns to love stories, but it's a good thing this type of story hasn't really been done with this franchise. I can't wait to read more.

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Space Balls quote "So, Lone Star, now you see that evil will always triumph because good is dumb."

This is certainly interesting enough! *Tracks*

Hmm... my interest has been captured

Tracking

TAW...
IT HAS NO CLOP WHAT THE FUCK MAN

484049 No you're not, because, I too, find her cute. WE NEED WISH FULFILLMENT STORIES STAT!

A TAW story without sex in the first chapter?
Instant featured.
Logic.
Mind, it is well written, but I'm sensing a bit of plot failure here and there.

I myself thought she landed at sweet apple acers:facehoof::ajbemused:

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