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TAW
Hi, I'm TAW. I write terrible erotic my little pony fan fiction about cartoon horses having sex with each other, or vaguely defined human audience-inserts, for fun. Because... uh. I have no shame?
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You have done it yet again TAW! Keep it up! :D
Dat last sentence.
Oh Celestia, you sly old gal. Delay the night AND go interspecies at the same time.
"Oh, I did." lol amazing
Baw chick a wow wow!
always
Just as I was beginning to.. uh, think about Celestia, too
Damn it TAW
Have a goddess be proud of tapping you?
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You and me both, man. If you'd told me that I could say "her wings are so pretty" non-ironically this time last year I'd have... I don't know.
But I sure as fuck know it wouldn't have resulted in this.
"One doesn't go out drinking with Berry Punch without breaking a few boundaries, after all." Been there...
Maybe he can try to wrangle a threeway now? "Hey Luna, do you wish to double the fun?" "Dammit Celly, for the last time, stop asking... of course I do!"
What did I just
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:megusta:
... :/
SHE DI'IN'T!
Dat Celestial Flank
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Oh, entirely possible.
Relevant to my interests.
she came daylight!
Prevents night from coming by forgetting to lower sun? Doesn't matter had sex
Okay, that's it, my barrier has been destroyed. I am all for human in equestria fics now, especially if /you're/ the one writing them.
"Oh, I did."
I tried to like this story, but i couldn't
Probably because Celestia sounded like a stuck-up bitch to me.
Pity, really. The onset was promising enough
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Yeah, Celestia is hard to write, I fucked a lot up. I tried to keep her a mix of regal and vulnerable where appropriate, but I'm too shitty a writer to properly pull it off
Oh what's that just some supplementary reading material related to this story
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Don't beat yourself up, you did your best
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Oh, I'm not, I just hold no pretensions about this stuff..
fuck you and your bestiality.
(ironic I know...)
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The View Mature checkbox is there for a reason. If you don't want to see erotic fanficiton about cartoon horses, then /don't look for erotic fanfiction about cartoon horses/.
HOOOOoboy. I managed to miss the mature tags, and let's just say romance is not my "bag".
Good story, though. I like it.
The second most beautiful thing...
Talk about your morning wood.
Yes, I went there. Fear me.
Yes.
I can fap to this. Oh and
"3"
"2"
"1"
ORGY INCOMING! REPEAT : ORGY INCOMING!
I already chalked up 5 stars just for the amazing description. It'd have taken a pretty bad story to lower that rating...
146239 that pretty much sums up all there is to answer to the complains, jup.
that comment gets my "nuff said" -seal of approval.
Same goes for "One doesn't go out drinking with Berry Punch without breaking a few boundaries, after all."
It pretty much excuses the whole setting of adressing the morality of the thing:
'Happened before and both him and (appearantly at least some) ponies got no problem with that'. nuff said.
About the writing itself I'd like to say that I think you speed things up a bit towards the end. You should chalk for example the aftermath a bit more out. It's nearly a pity to see things cut short, seeing how good you were doing in the 'describing the thinking process'-part up until things get juicy.
Don't get me wrong, the decision was well brought to a point I just think you should have stretched that out a bit more in detail to give us more to read.
And for the sake of completeness, adding Luna at the end was a nice detail. I like hilarious endings.
Seconded: The description is priceless!
I even read that one to my non-Brony-Flatmate and even he agreed.
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Yeah, I certainly agree with that, I'm just never sure how to end it without it just trailing off slowly, but I'll try my best for next time.
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Normally, I hate the entire concept of humans in Equestria, or "you get zapped into Equestria", feels like blatant wishful Mary Sueism.
But uh. As a staunch supporter of the Dawnmother, I can totally forgive this. ... Dat royal ass.
Moar? :D
I'm trying to decide if this is a parody or not, and that may not be a good thing. I would recomend dropping some of the pornographic tropes. Slapping her backside, having the woman climax because the man has done so...
Even if you can imagine such things happening in real life, I can't believe Celestia would act in such a way, and it broke suspension of disbelief for me.
Other than that, good that someone chose not to go home. That's really over used, and a strange idea in and of itself. You've discovered a whole new world and fantastical thing - oh but by all means let's not tell anyone about it...
Overall, fun idea and congrats for actually remembering that ponys are horses and facing an issue most lack the conviction to. And I laughed at the "WHERE IS MY NIGHT?!" line.
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It's shamelessly wish-fulfillment, yeah, that's the genre. I have to admit I was in two minds about applying those tropes to Celestia, but decided to roll with it to try and reinforce both of you striving to be equals-ish. The rest of the story is heavily pro-Celestia in that respect and really needed some balancing - I'm afraid if you're finding sexism in a story where I spent a good half of it verbally gushing about her, it simply was not intended.
It's entirely possible I failed to get across a lot of the ideas really required to make the scene make sense, and for that I can only apologise and thank you for the criticism.
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anyway good story, it is well written. this isn't normally my cup of tea but good job regardless!
Admit it, you've all done it!
I had to stifle hearty laughs at Pizza Hut when I saw the "Your brony says my name" image. Awesome. Also, I find this story appropriately humorous and fun.
Buck yes
"Oh gosh, Cel, you didn't?"
"Oh, I did"
Soopa lol dude
Were all going to hell for this.
All-well, I'm already dammed.
Good day.
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oh f this im useing my royal canterlot voice (they aint the only ones who can do it)
I COMAND YOU TO MAKE A SEQUEL TO THIS IN WHICH HE EITHER HAS A THREESOME WITH LUNA,MORE SEX WITH CELESTIA,SEX WITH LUNA,OR ALL OF THOSE THINGS COMBINED!!!!
I ORDER YOU TO GET TO WRGIHTING THAT SO SAYS A COMPLETY AND TOTALY RANDOM PERSON!!!!!!
ANS SO SAYS MY ROYAL CANTERLOT VOICE!!!!!
i think i made my point... might have killed some peoples ears though....
at the berry punch line the first thought that poped into my head was that twilight sleep over story...
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okay yes sir :(
there everybody.... now there might be hope for a sequel yet....
and if anybody trys to disagree that there should be a sequel
*inhales*'
*in royal canterlot voice* I SWEAR I WILL YELL SO LOUD INTO THAT PERSONS FACE THAT IT MIGHT AS WELL BE A FUS RO DAH!!!!
*exhales*
man i love that power... (the ability to use the royal canterlot voice...)