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TAW
Hi, I'm TAW. I write terrible erotic my little pony fan fiction about cartoon horses having sex with each other, or vaguely defined human audience-inserts, for fun. Because... uh. I have no shame?
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this is shit
TAW, you have made some of the best storys i have read but this is just...nope....
i dont know what to say, the whole idea seems built for slave fetishes, the human was a "normal" take all, corrupt all, slave maker, the ponys are genetically made to obey humans without fault, turning into talking easily trainable animals that could be used for anything.....it does not seem like something you would write...oh well, SOMEBODY will love this so thats that i guess...
Hah, this was just plain amusing.
Pre-read comment: It's about goddamn time!
And sometimes I wonder if you use sometimes too much.
ASrtgrtgj.
OK, no, we can make a coherent comment here HAHA JUST KIDDING holy fuck. Holy FUCK. That was... I have no words. Praise, maybe. Words? Naaah.
Honestly, not one your best stories. Still pretty good though.
This is awesome. You're replacing Spa Day Soiree in my featured box.
Post-read comment: Not quite what I was expecting (something more along the lines of Weaver's human fetish series) but still a fun read.
WHY DO I KEEP READING THIS, MY BRAIN HURTS.
Lol, this was great.
But I couldn't really imagine a human. Well because he was described as a musculer human, and he also looked like some sort of cowboy. I could only imagine Chuck Norris.
Rather strange for my personal tastes...but enjoyable nonetheless. Good job!
... Why did I imagine the guy dressed as an English-style equestrian (the person who rides horses, not a resident of Equestria!)
So the ponies are artificial life forms?
Sorry TAW, not your best work. Though bridles on these ponies is a bit of a personal kink of mine.
I usually love your stories, but this one just doesn't work for me. Maybe it's the cookie cutter evil human, maybe it's the slave fetish. I just don't like it.
588020 Indeed
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Yeah, it's a little far outside my comfort zone.
Sorry, gonna have to go with the people who say that this wasn't their thing. No harm in trying to write outside your comfort zone from time to time to see what works and what doesn't, though.
588020
Do you genuinely have something against TAW or do you just take time to piss him of for shits and giggle?
huh. i expected the human to settle down with Lyra. not rope her into his travels.
alwell, its what lyra would have wanted.
the dude having my name made this so much better
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Unfortunate. I rather liked it; but if this piece is uncomfortable to you, personally...
I actually did have a similar idea a while ago. In that case, it'd been Celestia and Luna who were artificially created. So, I was doubly curious about this piece, and you delivered exceptionally.
Let me say this: I would love it if your were to continue this. I'd probably love the story to pieces. You'd do me a great favour, but at the same time, I wouldn't want for you to torture yourself.
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Oh, I'm fine with writing it, I'm just not comfortable enough with the content to really do it *right*, I don't think. It could be better, I always have this annoying niggle at the back of my head saying "No, that's mean! Just make them hug!"
590969 It's a little game they have.
Poultron comes up with the funniest insults.
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Give in to your feelings! Pony hugs for all!
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"And then everypony hugged, The End"
I want bad things to happen to this guy.
Sweet Celestia, Lyra is my fav. background pony. I'm curious at how you have portraied her character *le start reading*
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Heh, I think you did wonderfully. As I've said, I'd love to read more of this!
Normally go for hugs, but ponies playing horse.....this is my fetish.
I'd support continuation, be it training Lyra, or him making a little herd (Fluttershy, Luna, and Inkie would be my votes for additions.).
I've stumbled into that weird part of the internet again. Must have taken a wrong turn at Albuquerque.
588020 If you don't like the stories. Then why do you bother to read them and comment on them? To me it looks like you're jealous of TAW and his or hers creativity and storytelling. Am I right or am I wrong? Be truthful with me please. (No offence)
That was.... hmmm.
I don't really know. Writing wise its easily up to your par. But content... ehh. Hmmm.
Best I can do for ya. It was interesting.
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Wait till you pass weird and come to the DARK SIDE... (of the internets)
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I was there for about 2 seconds, then turned tail and ran
. No amount of cookies is worth going over there.
This was not what I was expecting. I'm good with it.
Got bored too quickly...
I'm gonna watch suicidemouse.avi and then look up smile.jpg
I almost want to write a sequel myself, but it would probably suck and would lack clop(as I cannot write as it is). Ye or neigh?
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Could always use ponies playing horse.
I say yay, don't be afraid to try clop either, I'm sure it'll be fine.
This is awesome, no, seriously, is awesome, i was hoping for a fic that plays with the docility and the basics instincts of the mind.
Docility is a beautiful thing to have and enjoy if you have the right person to be docile with. Thats the hard part
I didn't like the story as much as I liked the others you've writen because the human is very selfish and arrogant. Lyra is just a victim of her genes and gets reduced to the level of a sex hungry animal. I didn't feel the love
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Interesting choices. I'm curious; would you elaborate?
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Well, Fluttershy, Luna, and Inkie ('s Fanon created personality) are all...generally submissive, and generally pliable.
Fluttershy I need not explain.
Luna, despite her status, is generally very unsure, and actually very sweet when she's not playing a role.
Inkie's fan personality (Since Hasbro didn't make one.) is generally very quiet and bashful as well.
Also, these 4 are my favorites, so...
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What? Fluttershy I get, but Luna's as submissive as a raging red dragon. Of the two sisters, she is the one more dominant. Celestia is dominant as well, but in a quiet, self assured fashion.
I loved it. I don't care how bad of a person this makes me. There was a good amount of logic in it and it kinda reminded me of my old fetish: S&M. Congratulations TAW you have now wrote a fic for every fetish.
Achievment unlocked. Sick mofo: Did you seriously have to do al of them?